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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: chavvi16

parr yeh story choti bhi toh thi
if di reads DFL then it wouldnt be the same case

Agreed! DFl padhne baithi then by the time she reads the ongoing track I would have reached the end!😕

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

She is right Di!
Bahut chota hai! Actually it is a one shot I divided into five just so that the fifth part can give jhatka to my readers! it will be fun!😆
So you will be able to read each part in few min!

yup this must be shortest work di
and i shud know
after all meri ungliyan jaanti hai yeh kitna lamba likh sakti hai

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1013

thread khatam hone ko aaya lakshmi di

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1014

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Agreed! DFl padhne baithi then by the time she reads the ongoing track I would have reached the end!😕

hmmm yes that possible too
after all that has loads of parts too
waise aur kitne parts reh gaye hain

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: chavvi16

yup this must be shortest work di
and i shud know
after all meri ungliyan jaanti hai yeh kitna lamba likh sakti hai

She is right! Jitne lambe main stories likhti hun utne lambe yeh reviews likhti hai! And I love them Kittu!😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
thread khatam hone ko aaya lakshmi di

arrey haan
pata bhi nahin chala
new thread
waise aap kahan kho gaye the di

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

She is right! Jitne lambe main stories likhti hun utne lambe yeh reviews likhti hai! And I love them Kittu!😃

well one has to be true to the story naa
like i said before
when i review your comments
dont know what happens but i really dont wanna stop
but shame have to stop

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1018

Originally posted by: chavvi16

arrey haan
pata bhi nahin chala
new thread
waise aap kahan kho gaye the di

TT padne me kho gayi thi 😳
aur BB aur tumhari chat bhi pad rahi thi 😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: chavvi16

hmmm yes that possible too
after all that has loads of parts too
waise aur kitne parts reh gaye hain

God knows!😆 Next part was supposed to have the morning after Antakshari and then the next chapt was supposed to have the fun filled evening for our leads! But today when I sat to plan it, the Morning after Antakshari got divided into two coz I got an idea of showing Arnav in prankster mode with others helping them including Maan! It will be fun! So next chappy has the morning after Antakshari and Chapter 70 will have Arnav in prank mode!😉