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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 31


Geet was unknown from all these but Maan was restless , now there was a big task for him to persuade Geet for this job in KC * he was not sure that she would accept this or not * he wanted to clear all d things before she asked to Arjun for his favour * Maan knew that Arjun and Meera did a lot for her but form now he wanted to do everything for her * it was he who snatched everything from her and she was forced to take favour from others but now he is around her and it is his duty to pay her back for all damages .

Maan finished some of his work and came to Geet to home * they secured everything and came down in same way ,, Geet from back side with Manish-a help and Maan from front but today a pair of eyes wr following Maan's actions .


During office hrs Sasha went 2/3 times at back side to check Geet but find d door closed from inside * she went to pantry and asked to delivery boy who brought lunch for MK and got d news that MK ordered meal for two * she fumed that he brought her daily and hid her from all * She was just an employee and he was giving her VIP treatment ,, MK was not like that before then why for this girl ? She decided to get information about this girl * next day she went to site office lil early and asked about her but didn't get enough * disappointed she came back to her office and trying to get chance to go near Geet but Maan kept d door close of d sitting area * she didn't have d courage to asked him openly but she was burning in jealous and dying to face Geet .

Next day Geet didn't come office coz Meera and Arjun wr coming to meet her and Dadima * Meera told Geet to come with her but Dadima advised that they all wr busy in marriage preparation and Geet need a person around her so it was not convenient for all but she promise that we both would come to attend every function * Meera kept quiet sensing that this old lady was taking good care of Geet and she was right at her place * Arjun and Meera went back reminding them to come in engagement followed by Haldi/ Mahandi and marriage.

Next day was weekend and engagement day of Arjun and Annie * whole day Dadima and Geet wr busy in selecting their dresses and accessories for all function * both d ladies wr very much excited * Maan was amazed how Dadima was giving ideas to Geet and then their endless discussion .. kitna bolti hein dono ,, ab Dadima ka BP nahi badta * he finished his BF and bid them bye * Dadima reminded him to come home early then they have to go for engagement party.

Geet choose a white saree with silver work for d engagement party * she straighten her hair and let them open * she was almost ready when Maan entered in d room and rooted at his place looking at that beauty * she saw Maan's reflection in d mirror and turned at him with a smile and asked ..

Geet: mai theek lag rahi hoon na ?

Maan composed himself and replied : u r looking beautiful Geet ,, he came close to her and adjusted her strands which wr playing with her cheeks and teasing him * his fingers grazed her soft skin ,, 1st time Geet felt a jolt in her body with his touch and admiring look .

Chalen,,, hum ,, Oh , my shoes * she opened d cupboard and take out her white matching shoes ,, she tried to wear but couldn't * Maan came close to her ,, made her sit on d edge of bed ,, took her shoe and knelt down * he lift her one foot and placed that on his knee to make her wear d shoe * Geet shuddered with his gesture and her heart melt down like wax * he was treating her like a princess . The Man of attitude MK * d owner of a big business empire was kneeling down in front of her and making her to wear d shoe * she was touched by his behaviour * her chain of thoughts break with Maan's words ... Dekho , theek hei na ? Tight to nahi? She nodded in a NO ,,, kya hua?

Geet: tum to mujhe ek princess ki tarah se treat ker rahe ho .

Maan: accha,,, OK ,, princess Cinderella ,,, both laughed ,, chalo ab princess , Dadima wait ker rahi hei .

He held her hand and brought out where Dadima was waiting for them * She smiled looking at them but next moment felt bad for her * everything was so perfect but scattered . They reached at d venue and met with Meera and her parents * they knew Geet so showered their love at her and wished Dadima and MK.

The function and rituals started ,, Arjun and Annie slipped d rings in each other fingers and cut d cake ,,, all wr enjoying and dancing * Geet was sitting with Dadima coz she can't move in gathering but she was feeling bad looking at Meera and Prem who wr dancing and smiling at her , she too wanted to dance with them * Maan got busy in business talk with others and Dadima went out to attend a call bcoz it was very noisy there * Geet left alone and she roamed her eyes in d crowed to see Maan and passed a smile when she find her looking at her from far * he gestured her to ask ...What and she nodded in a NO.

A guy was watching her from start and when he saw her sitting alone he came close to her and coughed to get her attention .

Guy: excuse me miss ,,, would u like to dance with me ,, i think u don't have any partner to dance ?

Geet: sorry mr. I'm not interested and i'm not alone .

Guy: i can give u a good company for d eve ,,, come let's dance ,, i guessed u want to dance.

Geet: sorry , i can't dance ,, plz find someone else for u.

Maan was watching this from far but he was surrounded with few businessmen and can't avoid them and walkout .

Guy: if u can't then i'll teach u ,, it's very simple ,, he forwarded his hand .

Geet didn't like that pestering and replied sternly,, no , i can't * meanwhile Dadima came from outside and backed Geet .

Dadima: she can't dance beta , her leg is plastered ,, plz don't force her ,, u go and enjoy and by d way where is ur GF ,, i saw u with a girl .

Yes , i'm with her aunty ,, a voice came from behind and smart and fashionable girl came close to d guy and held his hand from elbow .

Girl: come let's dance Dev ,, she gave a hard look to him and dragged him with her on d dance floor .

Dadima: i'm feeling bad Geet beta , u r not enjoying with ur friends.

Geet: it's OK Dadima , i'm fine ,, she passed a smile at Dadima and both got busy in talk and watching d dancing couples .

Dev: where wr u NT darling ,, i was searching for u?

NT: oh really , but i didn't feel that ,, Dev ,i know ur in and out so don't try to make me fool *what r u doing with that girl ?

Dev: nothing darling , i was just asking her , why she was not dancing with her friends ?

NT: and u offered ur company ,, right ?

Dev: no baby ,, trust me.

NT: trust , on u ,, forget it ,, (Both wr dancing and talking . NT was looking at him angrily) u know Dev ,, there is no difference between u and a dog ,, a dog can't stop itself to lift his leg seeing a pole and u after seeing a girl .

Dev: NT u r insulting me .

NT: do u have any respect ? u r getting this respect bcoz of me , otherwise what u have and don't try to fool me * i love u that's why i bore ur many lies and accepted u * i can go to any extant for my love, so it's better for u to stay in limits .

Dev sensed her anger and try to pacify her : i'm all urs darling , trust me * he hugged NT but his eyes wr on Geet .


Precap --- Raat abhi baaki hei ...



Part - 32

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
nice update
please add the note when you are making new thread, I was waiting from 2 days but all of a sudden saw you have made new thread, this always happen with your ff
Dont feel bad it is a request , otherwise it looks you have not updated
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello,, lakshu,priya,lily,mauaa,dona,indu,
rashmi,sona and mona...🤗



Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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akal mand ho ... upar waala edit kar dia... yahoo me first
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yahooo... another thread... congo jaani
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



yahooo... another thread... congo jaani


aapp pura 1 din late ho congrats wish krne me,,, hena babbie..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



yahooo... another thread... congo jaani


kal kahan thy.. i missed u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello evry 1.. talking through phone.. at my frens home tonight..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mauaa


aapp pura 1 din late ho congrats wish krne me,,, hena babbie..



tho kya hua... mere liye tho naya hi hain abhi bhi😳

hai mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


kal kahan thy.. i missed u..



missed u too dear... shifting ka last day tha ... had no energy even to open the lappy...

today in the new house😳... had pooja in the morning😃


abhi ghar dekho tho darr lag raha hain... on one side all the unsettled things are piled up😭

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