THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 63

Chup ke se, lag ja galey
Raat ki chaadar taley! ☺️

haiyye rabba
that was freaking explosive dear
oh my well that was just the teaser of things to come
for their wedding night
hope he can last that long
poor maan there is so much he can control right
i swear she is breaking his control
this innocent seductress of his will be the death of him
bechare maan how long is he to endure this
well yes if this is anything to judge by then they are gonna set us all on fire with themselves
okay gotta calm down there
she finally let go of her inhibitions
it wasnt easy but she did it
must cool down after reading this
cheers for pm
short tha parr kya solid update tha

Originally posted by: chavvi16

haiyye rabba
that was freaking explosive dear
oh my well that was just the teaser of things to come
for their wedding night
hope he can last that long
poor maan there is so much he can control right
i swear she is breaking his control
this innocent seductress of his will be the death of him
bechare maan how long is he to endure this
well yes if this is anything to judge by then they are gonna set us all on fire with themselves
okay gotta calm down there
she finally let go of her inhibitions
it wasnt easy but she did it
must cool down after reading this
cheers for pm
short tha parr kya solid update tha

lovely part..

Whooo..that was a HOT one! I think you should give all us readers a warning or put hazard warnings on the update stating too hot to handle may need hospital admittance to help bring temperature back down!!😳😳

The song is the first thing I would like to commend on in this chapter. This is one of the soft songs I remember really liking, but now that you've used it here, I thing I would rather associate it with words like "stunning", "hot", "burning", etc. Sorry, my vocab in such words is painfully low. 😆 But nonetheless, the song put chaar chaand on the chapter, or was it the other way around?

The "wo" reminded me of Dr. Khurana. 😳

You know already that I am all for slow romance, and this is not my comfort zone but I do want to mention, this chapter showed a side of Maan we already knew of yet it made me fall for him all over again. He is a compassionate lover. Just the way he walked behind her in that rain, just the way he waited for her, just the way he gave her the choice to accept his love or not, just the same way, he put her and her wishes first here. From that time to this, he has changed a lot yet the core personality and the feelings are the same, if not stronger. I'm going to miss this Maan so much!

The journey of Geet from "Miss Prim and Proper" as Maan had named her, who would not even raise her eyes to see Maan, also reached the heights here. Now she has shown that blind trust in the man she loves and who loves her, that it feels like she won against herself, breaking off the shackles that were holding her back...

Beautifully written! Thanks for updating, Avi! 🤗

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Whooo..that was a HOT one! I think you should give all us readers a warning or put hazard warnings on the update stating too hot to handle may need hospital admittance to help bring temperature back down!!😳😳

You may hear on the news that worldwide there have been reports of instant combustion of people reading author dqn01's latest update on Maan and Geets romance!!😉

Loved it. Excellent. Don't think I can handle much more but waiting eagerly. 😉

Originally posted by: mayyo

The song is the first thing I would like to commend on in this chapter. This is one of the soft songs I remember really liking, but now that you've used it here, I thing I would rather associate it with words like "stunning", "hot", "burning", etc. Sorry, my vocab in such words is painfully low. 😆 But nonetheless, the song put chaar chaand on the chapter, or was it the other way around?

The "wo" reminded me of Dr. Khurana. 😳

You know already that I am all for slow romance, and this is not my comfort zone but I do want to mention, this chapter showed a side of Maan we already knew of yet it made me fall for him all over again. He is a compassionate lover. Just the way he walked behind her in that rain, just the way he waited for her, just the way he gave her the choice to accept his love or not, just the same way, he put her and her wishes first here. From that time to this, he has changed a lot yet the core personality and the feelings are the same, if not stronger. I'm going to miss this Maan so much!

The journey of Geet from "Miss Prim and Proper" as Maan had named her, who would not even raise her eyes to see Maan, also reached the heights here. Now she has shown that blind trust in the man she loves and who loves her, that it feels like she won against herself, breaking off the shackles that were holding her back...

Beautifully written! Thanks for updating, Avi! 🤗

U better start having more Bhang every time u update 😆

Happy happiest holi
Thanku so t wonderful update
Such misty treat hain thud thud thud

he knew exactly how to please her
That would have been t most cutest sexiest part

Btw she needs to take care of him too 😉
This is so not fair 😉

Tell ur misty to take some classes from Tara di 😲
One more update with pay back
Bechara aur kitna wait karega

Only thing i cn say is dat it was HOT...