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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all🤗
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Maan carried an unconscious Geet, to her home...But he was not given the welcome he had expected... Rather than being thankful to him for bringing their daughter home, he was threatened by Brij... Seeing the neighbors talking about geet who was in maans arms, geets family too was tongue tied...

Getting her consciousness back Geet too was terrified, seeing herself in some ones arms and her whole family and neighbors looking at them... She pleaded maan to put her down...Maan just dropped her down and told "ab agar yeh ladki marr bhi jaaye tho bhi mud ke nahi dekhoonga"... and he left...

Though geet was surrounded by her family who was questioning and blaming her for lying and leaving the house... but her mind was filled with dev... his sweet talks and then the property papers signed by her with maan... Tears began to flow endlessly, when the realization came to her that dev had married her only for money...

Not understanding geets turmoil, daarjee announced to punish geet for going beyond his words...Brij brought a pot of burned charcoal... geets papaji pleaded for forgiveness on behalf of her daughter... but all were surprised when geet announced that yes, she deserves the punishment...

Terrifying everyone, with oozing confidence, geet went ahead and put a burned charcoal on her palms and closed it tightly bearing more pain...she cried out saying that she have understood now that she was wrong and her family was right about dev... DEV HAS CHEATED HER... He married her only for money... Her family including daarjees heart went out for their lil gal who was suffering...

Geet went ahead and asked forgiveness to daarjee for not listening to him... her words "meri kya galti thi" was echoing in the handa haveli along in their minds...

To be contd..




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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a heart breaking part this was.
Poor thing. I cried when she put that coal in her hand and squeezed it
Galti koi kare aur bhugte koi.
Maan full on attitude against Brij was wonderful.
Lovely creation Lakshmi.
Sorry for the late comment.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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aaj tho mast style mein entry maari hain...

yaad tho roz karthi hoon jaani😉

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lakshu,priya,lily,mauaa,dona,indu,rashmi,sona n mona..🤗


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nanhi si pyaari si choti bachi ko koi bhooltha hai kya😉
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Originally posted by: priya111111

nanhi si pyaari si choti bachi ko koi bhooltha hai kya😉

yeh kaun hai
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



aaj tho mast style mein entry maari hain...

yaad tho roz karthi hoon jaani😉

yaad yese karthi ho kya...😉
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