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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice story
Hope Maan know about Geet truth
Update soon
Do pm me Plzzz
Will be waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice
maan with geet traveling maan observing changes in geet
and lost in past when car stops he saw geet condition and maan get worried about hr and shocking his BGs
nice precap
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update susmita
Both are going to see the palace and Maan remembered their past that geet had her haed spinning while moving on hills..

last part os the update was past or present? I think present hi hai 😆
khud itni chhoti updates deti ho aur meri update ko chhota bolti ho..Not fair susmi😆
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Will keep in the mind dear😊
Next time pakka a big update

Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!! Beautiful update...

loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow awesome update yaar

Maan caring for geet

Looks like a confrontation is on the way
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita


Will keep in the mind dear😊
Next time pakka a big update

good so we should expect a big update next time?😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART -59

Before she could talk any thing she saw maan has already left the place

What is happening to me, why I am not able to control my feelings when she is near, maan check your emotions, you know her, she just using your emotions, she is very much very well versed in this game..

They had quick glance of the palace, with the diwan, mentally preparing what the changes to be made to convert into hotel.

After touring around the palace they settled in a room supposed to be study room to discuss the points and draft the rough sketch.

Mannu beta you have come from school,

Suddenly maan ears became attentive..Mannu..Whom she is talking to...

He could able to hear one side conversation..

Okay..Good you are participating then... so when is the function, okay baba I will take leave..And come to function..Promise I will definitely..What about your exams...you are not going to neglect them okay.

Okay I will talk to pari give her..Promise I will bring he chocolates..Okay mummy ko tang mat karna teekha hai..Give phone to mummy..

Sorry Anjali.. had to come to ooty..for office work..i know I need not to be worried ..You are there...ok

Maan was hearing all this one side conversation ...anjali.. Who she is .His thoughts came to break which banging sound of doors. Because of the heavy wind.he saw geet was seriously working on the sketches...he again started to work , but the banging sound of the door making more irraitions, making him to lose the concentration, he quietly went and closed the door ,

Her phone started ringing again..Yash

Hearing those words maan started glaring her...she understood she was disturbing him, she quietly went near the window,

Ha yash I am fine..Nothing to worry, her talks went on...

What happened to her , until now she was okay..Looking at her pale face..

Sir can I go to my room it is already night..

He saw the time it is already late night, ya you can go..

She came and tried to open the door, but was not opening .she tried to open it ...

Hearing the sounds maan to came there...what happened

How come it is locked, may be the servants locked it thinking no one is there.

Maan tried to break the door, but it not breaking, the doors were really strong,.

He tried to take the cell phone and call the diwanji.. ..there are no signals...in his phone..geet checked her phone it is completely out of charge .she looked at him very nervously , do not know what will be out come ..

What happened, why are you are not calling the diwaniji.

He glared at her..ohh it is out of charge ..whhat...idiot...always wil be on phone..then how come there will be charge ..

Geet..Knows she has to bear with him now, there is no other way other than listen to his tantra mus and scoldings.she quietly went to couch placed in the room and settled there.

Maan was trying other ways to come out from that place, He do not want to stay with her like this.

But he cannot do anything other than wait for until some one comes and opens the door, the women her mere presence he hates, was sitting very quietly there..

He again tried to open the door,

winds are blowing very heavily window shutter are moving ,geet went near and tried to close them, heavy downpour started, she just hates them, fear of past engulfed her .rains always brought pain to her...she lost shiv on a rainy day.. Even maan..Yes she still remembered, it was pouring like any thing..Maan snatched her mangalsutr..Broken all the ties and dragged to a railways station..

Rains ..she do not want to remember ,immediately closed the window..

What you are doing..Open the window ,there will be air flow,

It is raining..So I closed the door..

He came near to her..She shuddered with his touches ...

But you love rains...then why you are closing that


precape--

why is he feeling like this, as if those eyes are haunting him, as if telling him to belive them..


okay guys hope i gave a big update


next one

part-60


Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update ..
Maaneet attend the meeting nd then left to do the remaining work..
MAan curiouss to see her taking withsome anjali nd then again taling with yash..
Oops both stuck in a room..
Geet hating the rain which she loved once ..
Waiting to read nxt prt..
Edited by deepa111 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update, Geet is so quite and serene, not retaliating or showing any sign of distress as she knows whatever she says he will not believe her. And yet Maan has this restlessness around her, her eyes her actions creating havoc in him... hopefully he will soon know the extent of pain and hurt that Geet has gone through...
Thnx

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