PYAR KE EHASAS updated part 60 7/2 - Page 63

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyc update
Loved it!!
Maan didn't not bother to meet geet and remainded busy in his schedule
On other hand he witnessed Yash and Anju's moments and didn't bother to find truth yet again behind geet and yash's relationship
Maan asked geet to accompany him for Mysore official trip
Geet denied as she never left Mansi alone but maan was stubborn
Later geet gave in and maaneet in Mysore
😊

Will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 8 years ago


😃 very nice part ..
but chotu sa tha...
waiting for more..
Love it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
just read ur story

awesome

loved it

cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice
maan saw yash anju together from their gestures they looking very close but maan don't bother to find out the truth to even read full file which his detective gave him
maan going fr business trip and he ordered geet to b ready
she try to excuse but he not ready
geet was very sad leaving manai
hope this trip clear maan 's mu
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART -58


Maan was seeing geet, she has became so quite unlike her,, so many times he lost in her talks,In theses years she became so lean..her big hair which has now replaced by a pony tail..there were dark circles under her eyes..

he was feeling bad, he saw her staring outside ,now the car is entering to ghat section..


He knows geet is not interested in this trip, but he could not able to avoid this trip..when Rajaji has told them to accompany him for ooty to see his palace, and want them to convert into heritage hotels.maan could not tell no.


Ghat section ..maan thoughts drifted into past .after geet started working in the office, he had to travel to Mahabhaleswar for work..

Maan you are going to mahabaleswar ..

Hmm.

He did not understand why geet is happy when he is going mahabaleswar

Maaan ..vo..

Geet I do not have much time..tell me fast what you want to tell,

Maan I too want to come with you, to hill station, you know I love hill station,

Maan saw her excitement ,he so much lost in her talking..

Maaan..

Okay baba..come

Maan was quite surprised ,seeing geet she was fine utill now ,what happened to her suddenly, looking so pale, her hands on her stomach ,

Geet , geet are you alright

..understanding her sign, he immediately told driver to stop the car,

Immediately geet went out to end of the road and throw-ed out ,maan too went to help her,seeing his concern,

maan iam okay, oh kya hai traveling on ghat road, I get giddiness,saying that she puked again..

Geet,then why you have not told before..seeing her pale face..it is okay maan , I will be fine, ..

Geet head was on maan shoulder, she was trying to catch some sleep so that she cannot feel that giddiness

..driver you go little slow near turnings and hairpin bends

Okay sir..

Maan hands were on geet head protectively, she slowly drifted on his lap..

Maan was getting gossembumps, when geet lips are touching his pe... his hands were on her stomach,touching her like this making him more vulnerable , out side the weather is cold and dark. The driver has switched on the songs ..

Maan was a little bit shaken with the song,

Pee loon

Tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam

Pee loon

Tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam

Pee loon

Hai peenay ka mausam

He was trying hard to control his urge to move his hands on her waist ,

Hosh mein rahun kyun aaj main

Tu meri baahon mein simti hai,

Mujh mein samayi hai yun

Jis tarah ki koi ho nadi,

Tu mere seenay mein chupti hai sagar

Tumhara main hoon

Maan what you are doing ..she is sleeping..try to control your emotions ...

Maan came out of his thoughts with the sudden stop of the car

What happened why you stopped the car

Sir..vo geet madam told to stop the car

He saw her throwing out ..

He signed body guards to bring water bottle.

Maan slowly started rubbing on her back.. geet drink some water you will feel better ..

All are looking shocked , seeing the other side of maan , they never seen this side of maan ,caring for others..

With the weakness geet fell down in the arms of the maan ..

Geet geet ..maan immedaitley took her into his arms , BG immediately opened the vehicle door, he made her to lay down on the back seat , her head resting on his lap..

D know when sleep took over his thoughts...both were in deep sleep ..as if they were not slept for ages..as if time has given them some space to heal their wounded hearts .

Sir...sirr..,

Maan woke up with the drivers words

He saw that they have reached the place...

Still geet is sleeping on.. his lap..

Geet .geet ..she woke up hearing his words..trying to adjust her duppata ..she was embrassed the way she was sleeping

How can I sleep like this...how will they think about me

Before she could talk any thing she saw maan has already left the place



pre cape---
Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye


NEXT PART---
part-59


Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute update, Geet and Maan together and he taking such good care of her, emotions are high and precap is very interesting, let us see what comes out of it...
Thnx
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Posted: 8 years ago
maneet travelling together
he found her so different
his thoughts stopped seeing her throwing up
her health worsened in the bends of hills
he took care of her making his bgs wonder too
geet n maan slept feeling peace..
nice part

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