Maaneet FF Binding Ties (3) Link to new thread - Page 9

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

NP. will wait Nisha...

Yep the same SS... meri dimag ke upar gaya aadha se bhi zyaada... so thought to wait till u complete then can read it patiently 😛

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hmm. Can you explain why, if you don't mind? Is it too confusing? Or is it not holding your interest?

Is it the way I am writing? The language maybe? Or the content?

Tell me if there is anything I can do to improve it. I am always open to suggestions.😃

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

First part I understood but problem started with 2nd... pata nahi kya keh rahi thi Geet samaj hi nahi ayi... tho socha will wait till my mind is also clear... n also till that time you will update more na 😛

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hmm. I will try to go back and read and see if it is confusing? But thanks for your input. The story is a bit confusing at this point due to the way Geet's character has been portrayed.

No problem. But I hope, I will eventually be able to clear all your doubts.😃

So take your time and come back and read whenever you feel like😉

Originally posted by: Susegad

I understand it totally and completely.

I always remember a verse in an old Marathi song sung by Asha Bhosale, where she is singing about the beauty of a woman and there is a comparison of a women's waist to the flowing Milky Way. It sounds so weird and awkward in English when I try to explain it, but it sounds really beautiful in the original language.

New language will definitely give a nice white wash to my crowning glory😆

Didn't do anything Holi like today.

Didn't feel the colors at all.🤔

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

Lol me neither... it was just another MONDAY... 😳

I never really played holi back in India. Our university here had arranged for holi so played there once. Other than that I have no holi memories 😆

Vaise bhi main hoon na aapki berang zindagi mein rang laane ke liye 😉 (Of course I bring colors only after your patidev dearest 😳)

Originally posted by: Susegad

It reminded me of The Bangles, Manic Monday song.

Me and my sister used to scream it out on Monday mornings😆

Aww!! Me too loves the colors you sprinkle in my life.🤗

Originally posted by: Susegad

Well to be honest we weren't much into English music either, but the radio stations in Goa played some songs religiously year after year and those were the one's we knew about. 😆

Oh yeah Country Music is for hicks who don't listen to English songs.🤣

Have you ever heard County Music. It is damn depressing. Either somebody's wife is running away or the dog is dying or similar depressing themes. I wonder if it will be a happier song if we play it backwards. Hopefully the wife will will come back and the dog will be a born again mutt.🤣

Aww!!

Me too bhalobhashi you, raised to the power of love😆