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Ratna

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Agree with u Nisha ...this is sooo Miri for me too ...adorable ❤️...thank u Madhu 🤗

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: Susegad

Doc you are here for what?... more wabbits?😆

Hopefully 😆

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

maan puri raat karwate badlta raha or kapde change karta raha...its funny...phir pura shehar ghumke geet ke ghar ke aage pahunchgaya ...and miri got him...almost ...!! loved miri...mamma ...sequence !! maan could get his peace of mind only after finding some possible logical reasons...for his interest in geet...!! in this rate we have to wait and see...how many sheets he has to fill...before he accepts his love for her...!! waiting...!! and sorry for late comment !!

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Chapter 20: Hmm what can I say... at the start there was mild confusion, I felt it was slightly off, might be cause I am reading back-back updates without a lot of time gap in between. So maybe I felt a lit out of sorts, as I felt there was block int he flow of the story... last chapter I guess there was already a glimpse to his ruminations about her which then got a turn with Miri, And the chapter started with again thoughts, so it took me time to process. But all in all it then picked up.

Loved how she intrigues him as well as frustrates him as each time he reaches a dead end with more and more questions piling up. Its like she's a mystery to him which he wants to unravel yet fearful what's it going to do to his defenses and his heart. He wants to reach the root of this fascinating woman but still is wary of it all. Very well symbolized by the way how he gets all happy seeing her concern and him becoming positive that she too is acutely aware of that undeniable bond between them which he too feels and is trying hard to resist the pull. 😳

Pari-Brij and their pyaar ki unkahi dastan 🤣 When oh when will they be all forth coming with it all. loved how Pari used newly learnt knowledge (even if it is from her "supposed" enemy 😆) to confess her love. The whole periodic table and the use you've made known here is is quite interesting 🤣

Wonder what's cooking in Maan's brain now ... how is he going to use to his benefit, knowing that the person he is trying to use his business acumen on someone like Pari, who herself is a force to reckon with 😉

Miri ... hayee I so want to give her a 🤗 She just adds the extra frosting to the updates, she is indeed the seasoning of this whole story.

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Chapter 21: Woohoo!! A lot of interesting twists and turns.. And I guess a premonition of all the confrontations and revelations are int he waiting 😃

As I though Maan couldn't use his underhand ways to blackmail Pari.. after all woh bhi Pari Godbole hai 😆 But Yes what I felt very endearing was their sister-brother argument, they were assuming what would they do if they were related so... but then they were both behaving as true siblings (experience se bol rahi hu 😆) all the threats and what ifs were so similar to two siblings who are always ready to chop of the other's head yet when it comes to help the other in times of distress they do it without giving it a thought or doubt, the way Pari gave him a clue to his puzzle called "Geet" seeing him so at a loss and him wanting to guard his beloved brother.

Pari gave him a hint ... Good but ye toh sochti ki kaise tede insaan ko hint de rahi hai 😆 She just made it a little more twisted ... But I guess this is going to lead to more interesting plots 😉

Patil 😡🤢 Now what's in store for Geet and Maan???

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

will comment after reading

I missed this thread

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Susegad

Out of all the pics posted, this second pic screams Miri to me😳

Tou phir decide hua She is Our Miri 😃

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Chapter 22: Wow it was one heart warming and feel good update 😃

Its after a long time that I felt so good after reading an update here on IF ... It made me feel like I'm having my Hot Chocolate sitting on my window sill, all cozy and very content (Avi will surely get what I mean to say)

Just loved how it all synthesized and culminated into the last picture... that was such a great way of putting the pic together... I could actually visualize it 👏 Great writing Nishaji. The last pic's description with the below inscriptions and the emotions making up the image was beautiful 👏

Who wouldn't fall in love with the girl in there... Maan after all is mortal, and had to have his defenses bow down in front of this awesome woman who never gives up and is surrounded by the love of her family and has such a beautiful and loving daughter 😃

Nishaji you do have a keen sense of relations and must say you know how to weave them all together into a loving binding tie for your readers 👏 You seem very Susegad and have a way with words and Humor but then You have quite a depth of relations and emotions which is reflected in the characters you make us fall in love with 😳

Thanks for writing this story 🤗 And being here on IF ... This story is just getting all the more interesting with the Mighty Maan finally becoming more humane ... what with hsi own acceptances and behaving like a unseen and unacknowledged brother to Pari 😆

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Chapter 23: 😃

I Love love love Miri ❤️ She is the best part about this FF (having said that... there are many more dimensions and lovable aspects of this FF) 😃

The whole Mama-Miri sound track was so tender and sweet ... loved it.

Maan has it bad... yet trying for self-preservation 😆 Sheru toh gaya kaam se.

Excel sheet -- really ?? Oh how are all his layers trying hard to safeguard something that is already completely smitten by a force called Geet Handa 😉

He feels he wants Dev to be like Geet in that pic... Victorious and then tries to reason all his emotions but then there are many victory stories and overcoming handicap testimonies which he must be aware of in so many years .. yet its just this one woman who makes him feel it all, speaks a lot about his feelings 😉

Loved it 👏