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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here's the next part. The last part was too short i guess!!! 😊😊😊. I cannot not satisfy my reader...Right? Enjoy reading and don't forget to me more comments.



Part 18

The next morning they left the hotel after breakfast. Finally they arrived at the bungalow at 5 in the afternoon. It was looking beautiful in the sunset. Their father had bought this so that when he would retire, he would have come stay here. But now, he was not even here.

Geet remembered the last time she came here. It was one month before she was very sick. At that point, she used to be so depressed. That's why Veer had brought her here to cheer her up. But it hadn't worked out and when they had got back to delhi, she had stopped taking her medicines. She was so angry that she had to survive on those medicines her whole life. But then, she had not expected her health to deteriorate like that. She had started bleeding so much and the pain had become so unbearable that she had had to tell veer.

Now, she feels bad when she thinks about it. She had caused everyone to worry so much about her. And she knew she would never do that again. Now, she had Maan too. He loved her so much.

She wanted to lie down so badly. Her back was hurting. She went upstairs and lay down on the bed.

After a while Maan came in. "So we're sleeping here! I got our luggage.!" He said not paying attention to geet.

Then he noticed her lying on the bed on her stomach. Her face look tired. He went over and sat besides her. "You tired?"

Geet looked at him and nodded. "You need to take a shower geet. You will feel better."

Maan started threading her hair. "Is your back hurting Geet?"

"Yes. A little bit. If I lay down for a while, it will be fine." She said.

"Did you tell Sahil about it? Is it associated with the endometriosis?"

Geet turned on her back and faced maan. He automatically extended his arms and she went into his embrace. "Sahil said it's common to feel pain in my lower back. I usually just take normal painkillers when it's bad, but otherwise, it's not that painful. It goes away very quickly" The only pain she dreaded was the one when she starts menstruating. She winced at the thought.

Maan slipped his hands inside her shirt and she gasped. "Maan. I don't think I can""

"Shh Geet...I wont do anything when I know you are not well."

He brought her closer onto his chest so that she was lying almost on top of him. His hands reach at her back and he pressed two fingers on her lower back. Geet winced. "It's hurting over here Geet?" She nodded.

He got up slowly from under geet. "Stay here. I'll try to do something about this pain."

He took his bag and started looking around for something. Geet was watching him. He took out a small box and a hot water bag she guessed. Then he came over to her.

"Lay down on your stomach Geet." Geet just stared at him. He is going for so much trouble just for a usual back pain. "Don't worry Maan. I'm fine. You don't need to"

"Lay down geet. Let me do it."

Geet reluctantly turned around. Maan sat on the edge of the bed and dipped his fingers in the ointment. Slowly he applied it on her lower back, putting the right amount of pressure.

Maan watched geet as she closed her eyes and let him take care of her. He had figured out that her back was aching. The whole night yesterday, she was writhing on the bed. He would have to ask her about all the discomforts she usually experiences. He had to know.

After a while, he got up and put the hot water bottle in the microwave. He brought it to geet and placed it on the bed. After taking out his shirt, he lay down on the bed and dragged geet onto him. He placed the water bottle on her back and held it there.

"Thanks Maan."

"Anything for you Jaan." He kissed her forehead lovingly. "Sleep now"

And just like that she fell asleep.

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Varun sat down with Meera by his side. It was already so late at night and they were still working. They had some serious trouble. He could feel it. Someone had got into the database of the agency Aashi used to work for. They had tried to extract information about her. And he knew that they had her name. Fortunately he was not going to find anything else. The day she joined the team, all public records on any other database had been deleted since everyone on the team had to keep their identity hidden. But loopholes existed. They had to find it before the person finds it. He had to contact Veer and Maan to tell them to be careful with Aashi. He was worried.

Meera watched Varun. His face was hard and she could tell how worried he was. Aashi was his sister and she could understand that he was looking out for her. A part of her wanted to go and tell him that everything was going to be fine. Instead of fighting it, she turned towards him and placed her hands on his. He looked at her confused. "Don't worry, she's with Maan and Veer. Nothing will happen." She gave his hand a squeeze and started taking it away.

But Varun did not let go of her as he held her hands. He took her hands in his and looked at her with intensity in his eyes. They were soft, compared to his rough ones. Meera looked at him her eyes reflecting the same intensity. "Varun, what are you doing?" she asked.

Varun got back to his senses and left her hands. "I'm sorry." He said. And they both got back to work. As if nothing happened.

Few minutes later Meera received a phone call. She went in the lounge to take it. When she came back she looked worried. "I need to go. I will see you tomorrow. Is that alright?"

It was already past 12am. They could continue tomorrow. "Yeah of course" Varun replied.

Meera grabbed her stuff and started walking out.

"Meera wait! What happened? Why are you in such a hurry? Is there a problem?"

"No! Nothing is wrong. I just have to get somewhere."

"At this time? It's already so late. You look worried!"

"I have to go Varun. I really have to" Meera said desperately.

Varun nodded and let her go. Varun was attracted to her. He knew that. But it was not mere attraction that pulled him towards Meera. it was something else. Something deeper. She felt that too. He could say. When she had placed her hands on his, he had seen it right through her eyes. She cared about him. He was not looking for a relationship. He just cared about her. That's why he was interested in knowing her more. At least that's what he found as an appropriate reason to have such deep feelings for her.

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Geet woke up the next morning snuggled up in maan's arms. He was not wearing his shirt. She could feel his heat seeping in her body. He was still sleeping. She caressed his cheek with her hands and felt his stubble pricking her. She smiled. She remembered the way he had touched her the last time. He had kissed her so passionately. She had seen the intensity in his eyes while he had removed her shirt and had continues kissing her. She hadn't felt anything like that ever before. No one had touched her so intimately.

Maan had always been her prince charming when she was young. He had been there all throughout her childhood. Helping her with her math homework, protecting her and Aashi in high school. She had grown up knowing he was always there for her. She always admired him and had fallen in love with him. She used to be hurt when he started having his girlfriends. But now she realizes that she was indeed too young for anything to happen between them at that time. Even though Maan did not love her then, he loved her now. She had seen the desperation in his eyes when he had told her how helpless he had felt when she had been sick and he had been deployed.

She bent down and caressed his face once again. she traced his jaw and placed a kiss near his lips. Rising up, she placed another kiss on his forehead. The sheets had gone down a bit and revealed his hot and hard body. He was taut and muscular. Like the perfect body of the heroes in her romantic novels. She ran her hands over him. Tracing the muscles in his arms, down to his abs and even lower down until she could see the dark trail of dark hair which disappeared into his boxers oh god. I need to get a grip on myself. I feel like a rapist taking advantage of him in his sleep.

But she knew that this man would not let anyone take advantage of him. He was too strong and exuded a challenging air around him. Something like "don't mess with me" That was the reason she had been worried that Maan and Veer would never get along. But with everything associated to her , he was just like as soft and caring as he could be.

After satiating her desires of touching his body, she concentrated back on his face. Staring at his firmly shaped lips, she wondered if she could kiss him.

But much to her bad luck, he opened his eyes catching her by surprise. Caught in the act girl! How are you going to explain your acts now? Maan gave her a smile. And that smile was an indication enough to tell her that...Oh my god. He was awake. He was awake all this time. Geet moved far way from him and stared at him in surprise. "Do you want to kiss me sweetheart?" he asked in a very sexy voice.

"I thought you were sleeping," Geet said in a whispering tone.

"Well I was sleeping. I was actually dreaming. And you know what! It was so sensual, passionate and..."

"...And?" Geet whispered.

Maan grabbed her waist and pulled her close to him. "And real. I realized it was all-real. " He said huskily into her ears.

Geet realized that he was talking about her recent acts just a while ago. She pushed him on the bed. Her cheeks turned a into a dark shade of red.

Maan put his arms behind his head and sprawled over the bed exposing his whole shirtless body. Geet was still looking at him. But then her gaze left his body and went lower down. He had a pretty good idea what she was staring at.

Maan made no move to cover the hard on he was sporting. He was not embarrassed. She could stare all she wanted. She was the one who gave him that. Watching her face so intently, maan realized that she was not going to stop staring anytime soon. His innocent seductress had not seen a man in an aroused state before, he guessed.

"Up here geet!"

She lifted her gaze and looked into his eyes. He was already very hard to the point that it was so painful and the innocent look that she gave him did not help. How was a man supposed to react in this situation? If it was another woman on his bed right now, he would have already been into her thrusting deep and hard to satiate his lust.

But this was geet. The only woman he actually wanted. And with her, he was not going to behave like an animal. He would have to keep his primal instincts in check and make soft and gentle love to her when the right time comes. Not that this idea sounded disappointing. He wanted to cherish her. Shower her body with kisses and touch each and every part of her. That would be what would satisfy him. Just getting physical release was not going to be enough. Control Maan. You wont be making love to her in the near future!

He grabbed the sheets and bundled it up onto his lap. "Better sweetheart!"

He did not receive the reaction he was expecting. Instead he met a pair of furious eyes staring at him. "Why did you pretend to be sleeping when you were obviously awake?" Oh! So this was the problem.

He got up. Before she got an opportunity to go away from him, he grabbed her and pinned her down onto the bed hands on either side. He made sure that he was not pressing the bulge in his boxers into her. No need to embarrass her more.

"I was enjoying it too much jaan. If I'd woke up. You would have stopped." He placed a lingering kiss on her forehead and rolled on his back. "This is the best morning I've ever had. I want every morning to be like that now." He said.

Geet abandoned her fake anger and went into his embraced as he opened his arms.

"So you were checking me out sweetheart."

Geet blushed but she nodded. Then she replied. "I was doing more than just checking you out."

Maan chuckled and kissed her forehead again. "Trust me baby I did realize that." Now I have to take care of it in the bathroom.

Maan glanced at the clock and looked at the time. He immediately got up and sat back. "It's late geet. You need to take your medicines. Go brush your teeth. I'll make breakfast in the meanwhile." He rose up from the bed and slipped on his shirt. He made his way to the kitchen before pushing geet into the bathroom. Geet was disappointed. This is not what she had in mind. She had wanted to feel his touch again. But here he was, fussing around her like veer to take her medicines. Damn disease! She muttered under her breath.

The four days went by so fast. Geet, Maan, Veer and Aashi had done a lot of fun activities. The weather had been in their favor and they got the opportunity to swim in the sea both days. Maan and geet had gone for long walks on the beach and they had watched the sunset together.

Veer and Aashi had got to spend some time together too. They had made love countless time. Everything had gone fine and now they were returning back to their normal lives. Back to their work and the real world.

Geet had woken up with cramps in her abdomen in the morning. Her back was hurting a lot too. When she went into the washroom; she knew she had gotten her periods. She had taken a pain medicine to reduce the pain and she was already feeling better. They had a long journey back home and she didn't want anyone to be worried about her on the way. That's why she hasn't told anyone. She just wished that everything went fine for the journey. Veer had given her the prescription medicines too. And they were all set to go back to delhi.

She sat at the back with Aashi besides her. Veer had complained that both her and Aashi had fallen asleep last time and that its better that Maan kept him company sitting in the passenger seat.

Few hours later they stopped at a resting point on the road. Geet had started feeling bad in the car. She went to the washroom and feeling weaker than usual, she went back into the car and they resumed the ride. She could feel the small cramps in her lower abdomen. But this was usual. She could bear it without fussing. But she knew that they were going to become more painful. She dreaded that. Her eyes burnt with tears. She didn't want to feel that again. She lay back on the seat and decided to nap for a while. That was a good idea to make her forget about the upcoming pain.

Half an hour later geet woke up to the excruciating pain in her abdomen. She clutched her stomach and closed her eyes. Aashi was sleeping besides her. She had to tell Veer now. She needed her medicines. She tapped him slowly on his shoulders. He glanced at her from the rear-view mirror.

"You're awake baccha? Do you need something?"

"Veer, I...I got my periods. Can I have my medicines?"

Veer didn't hide the surprise on his face.

"When did you get it?" Maan asked turning back to look at her.

She knew that her answer was going to make them angry but she answered. "This morning." Before they could tell her anything, she continued talking. "Don't worry. It's not bad. I just need my medicines"

She had made Veer angry. She could tell. But he was not going to tell her anything. Not when he knew she was not well. "Maan. Look into the back pocket of my bag. Give her 2 of those blue pills."

Maan looked around and gave her the pills and a bottle of water. When his eyes met hers, she realized that he looked angry. "The hotel is still 6 hours away Geet. Are you going to be fine till then?" He asked. She nodded. Then she swallowed the pills quietly and lay back on her seat. She didn't realize when she fell asleep again


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Next part will be more about Varun and Meera. do you guys love this couple??

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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet was checking out maan..😳😉 Poor Maan..😆 She hate her disease most.. that's why she became depressed.. it happens.. Veer N maan taking every care of her.. N Varun n meera.. they fight but stil surprisingly understand each other at right time...
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update

Thank you for the pm
lovesia thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
first thanks for one more update love it
haayee geet was checking out maan nd maan was awake all the time
varun nd meera story is going to start in next few updates i think
but what is it that meera is hiding nd why she got worried after receiving the call
geet hate her disease nd now she got her periods nd she didn't tel anyone about that nd that made maan nd varun angry
of cource they will get angry when she will hide about her pain from them
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really love the way maan n veer love nvtake carecof geet like a perfect partner n a perfect elder brother respectively
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
maan taking care of geet..
n geet drooling maan n maan enjoying her torture
really geet ka disease bht hi painful hai...
bt all are so caring towards her..
waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved maans care & lovely moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update and love all the couples. Varun and meera, Though they are mysterious but like them a lot too...
Thnx and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
sabka jodi hai...varun ka bhi hona chahiye...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update! loved maan and geet morning "checking out" lol.

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