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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 15


You can't live a perfect day without doing something for someone who will never be able to repay you.

Geet didn't have any option and she has to help an elderly lady * a selfless and pure heart person never left someone to suffer * she knew d value of help , if she is alive today it was all because of someone's selfless help, even today ppl r helping her , then how could she turn her face from humanity . She called Maan. .


Geet: hello Mr MK , i'm GS from city hospital , ur Dadima is admitted here plzz come soon .


1st Maan became shocked at d name of GS... Geet , on Dadima's phone , but next set of words took his breath away.

Maan: what!!! Dadima is admitted !!! What happened ? Geet .. plz stay with her , i'm coming , plz stay with her .


Geet: OK .

In half an hr he was there worried * he saw Geet in waiting area near ICU and rushed to her .


Maan: Geet, what happned to Dadima?

Geet told him that she was fell down in store unconscious , she was there that time and brought her here with d help of store owner* she handed him Dadima's purse and phone * Maan thanked her many times but she didn't show any interest in his words.


Geet: it's OK Mr MK , I did my duty as a human being . He lowered his head getting d depth of her words .

Geet: Mr MK , hospital needed some paper formalities and didn't know nothing about her , now u r here so plz complete those at d counter .

Maan: hmmm , yeah sure, plzz stay few min here , i'm going to meet Dr and then to paper work .


Geet nodded and sat there for some more time * Maan went to meet Dr and then complete all d formalities then came to see Dadima in d ICU ward * Dadima was his only support in this entire world after his parents death * it was she who bore all d lose and strenghtened him all d time * she was very precious to him * seeing her like that on life support his heart sank and tears rolled down from his eyes * he held her hand in his , caressed that softly and kissed that * he stayed there for few min and came out in waiting area where Geet was sitting * she saw him and his red eyes indicating that he was crying * he sat there broken with lower head next to her * Geet remained quiet for few min then spoke slowly.


Geet: how is she?

Maan: she is still unconscious and on life support * they can't say anything right now and waiting for gaining her conscious .

Geet: do u have anybody in ur family for ur help ?

Maan: no , only we r two in d family .

Geet: any relative or someone else ?

Maan: no, we don't have anybody here.


Geet became quiet thinking why he was not calling and mentioning his GF at this crucial time for help * she shrugged her shoulder with a sigh .


Geet: Mr MK , now u r here with her so I have to move , uumm , here is ur Dadima's purse.( She forward her purse to him )

Maan didn't say anything but he wanted her near him * her moving away from him was killing him and felt that he was left all alone * he held her hands and spoke in a cracky voice.. Plzzz matt jao .

Geet looked at him shocked ... why he wanted her now ?

Geet: Mr MK, what is d use of me here ? U r from here and u can call any of ur friend to help u .

Maan: plzz ruk jao , bas Dadima ke hosh aane tak ruk jao fir mei tumhe drop ker dunga , plzz Geet .

Geet was in dillema ...Babaji !! kya hei ye sab ? ku inn logo ko baar-baar mere samne la dete ho ? ye wo log hei jinhone mujhe merne ko chod diya tha aur aaj aap mujhe hi inki help ko bebas ker rahe ho . kya karun mei ? ye kaisi uljhan mei daal diya ? unwillingly she stayed there and sat quietly away from him * Maan looked at her painfully and understood that she is not happy with this but he want her there * her presence giving him strength and he felt that nothing goes wrong if she is near him .


What an irony D person who run a big empire and have an authoritative impression in business world * who never lowered his head and eyes in outer world now pleading in front of a girl with lower head .


They stayed there quietly near an hr and waited for any news from Dadima's recovery * a Dr came from ICU near them .

Dr: excuse me , d XYZ patient was in lil conscious and murmurning some Geet word * who is Geet here ?


Maan got up with a jerk from his chair hearing this .

Maan: yeah , she is Geet Dr.

Dr: OK, u can meet her and try to talk her .


Geet too was listening all this * Maan looked at Geet beseechingly* she nodded in a yes and came close to them * both went behind Dr. * Dadima was laying there a mask and surrounded with many machines* Geet's heart melted seeing that elderly lady in this condition * she came close to her and touched her hand with her * Maan brought his face near Dadima's ear and spoke .


Maan: Dadima , Geet aapke paas hei , dekho , wo yahin hei aap ke samne , plzz dekho na .


Dadima got his words in close eyes * Maan and Geet felt some action in her body * slowly-slowly she was gaining her conscious murmuring Geet's name * Dr and nurse wr monitoring her condition on machines * after few min Dadima opened her eyes and looked around and her eyes brightened seeing Geet near her bed * Maan beamed with happiness seeing that she was out of danger now and Dr too gestured at him positively .


Geet was standing there quietly, she was in a very odd situation * she was standing here for those ppl who wr d reason of her wrecked life and threw her in d jaws of death * she didn't know how to console this lady ?


Dadima raised her hand for Geet and Geet held her hand in hers and caressed that with her other hand with a weak smile * Geet stayed there for few min with heavy heart * she wanted to run away from there ASAP and tried to escape .


Geet: aap abhi rest kijiye , jab aap theek ho her ghar aa jayengi to mei aapse milne aa jaungi , I promise .


Dadima nodded in yes and gestured her to come close , Geet bent towards her and she caressed her head and cheek lovingly . Maan was looking at both with a painful smile.


Maan: Dadima , Geet hi aapko yahan lai thi aur tab se yahin hei , aap araam kero aur main Geet ko ghar drop ker aata hun.


Geet: no, it's OK , I will go myself .

Dadima pressed Geet hand and nodded in a NO and looked at Maan .

Maan: aap fikar matt kero mai drop ker dunga .

Maan looked at Geet and Geet helplessly sighed having no option .


Precap - how Geet'll tackle this situation ?


Part - 16



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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