THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 73

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

61.4k

Users

127

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: setvij

I thought the engagement would be in one part...looks like you are splitting it into multiple parts...

Yes, sometimes workload is too high to write a full length update. Sirf ye tha comment?
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

Hey Avi

Bohoth hi pyaar bhara update tha. Simply loved it and also the
Love which daarji has for geet and maan is brilliant and thesong song was apt as u dint want crying during their marriage. Awesome keep it up. Waiting for the next eagerly
Tc
Abinaya

Thanks Abinaya😃
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepabhargav

I'm scared about brij

Maneet were too good I like the bold geet
Waiting for the next update don't want brij to scarce our doe

Don't worry about Brij.
Uski dhulaai honi hai bas...😃
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

N ya only 2 more parts. NAHI!!!!
DON'T DO LIKE THIS. We want more n more. I don't know how u continue it but pls write more. Show their relationship between engagement n marriage.

N I also want one part for Dev-Tara n Megha- Kabir. Pretty pls.

Sorry dear. If I was not working 6 days a week and not having the responsibilities of my home and family, I could have. As it is I was supposed to stop in December but I kept adding scenes because of readers request.
I will break the two parts into smaller pieces so you guys can enjoy, okay?
Thanks for the support😃
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 77: Maan Jaan

Blog update.


Links are being sent to those who have commented regularly and on the last chapter.

Please PM me only if you have commented and sent me a buddy request.
So many of newbie and groupbie messages are not going through because your mailbox is full. Please delete some messages before sending me a PM.
NOTE: FOR THOSE STARTING THIS STORY LATE, I do expect a comment at least for every thread or so if not for each chapter. You may PM me if you are not able to post the comment. There are romantic parts further on which are password protected. I will not be giving passwords if I don't find comments from you. SILENT READERS, please skip this story.

Please don't ask if you have not done your part.
It may seem childish or mean on my part but I believe in being fair.
There are 75 updates here on IF and only 7 on the blog.


Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
krati5 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
seeing d lovely banner, a smile came... i played song 'din shagan da chadiya' even before i started reading update...😆

beautiful banner priya...

update starts from 'bhor'... even b4 sun rises their love filled moments roused... 'Maahi mere'... oh that was so sweet... and so filled wd love...

i would say geet, he was always yours... from the starting... worry line above his right brow... i never noticed😕... aab isse kehte hai sacha pyaar... choti se choti baat notice ho jati hai...


there is a new comfortableness b/w them... "Yaad hai na Giit maine kaha tha tumhe. Ab zindagi ki har subah tum se shuru aur har raat tum pe khatam. Aaj se wahi hoga". koi kisi se itna pyar kar sakta hai, yeh to mujhe maaneet se hi pata chala hai...and he called her 'baby'... Yes Baby... and i felt maan thud...

i think even if darji came 2 know abt those many more 2 mins... even then these lovebirds wouldn't have stopped...

there is always an excitement in a 'shadi ka ghar'... nobody can remain gloomy... maan is a perfect guy...and he is now in a role of 'Raj' from DDLJ...


the most loveliest thing happened here was when, darji felt his weight of responsibilities being lessen...


a daughter is always precious to her father.. but geet is more here. after all she is darji's guddi...😊.. her memories for him are gems...


moving on... its a trait of Khurana men's to help their lady love in draping a sari... indeed Lucky Mom😉. and daddy being more lucky😆








crazydream thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Sorry dear. If I was not working 6 days a weekand not having the responsibilities of my home and family, I could have. As it is I was supposed to stop in December but I kept adding scenes because of readers request.
I will break the two parts into smaller pieces so you guys can enjoy, okay?
Thanks for the support😃



IT'S OK. I UNDERSTAND IT MUST BE HECTIC FOR YOU . U CAN GIVE US UPDATE AARAM SE. NO NEED TO HURRY. WE WILL WAIT. JAB TAK UPDATES AATA RAHEGA I CAN WAIT
crazydream thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago


Ye res Kis liye????
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

seeing d lovely banner, a smile came... i played song 'din shagan da chadiya' even before i started reading update...😆


beautiful banner priya...

update starts from 'bhor'... even b4 sun rises their love filled moments roused... 'Maahi mere'... oh that was so sweet... and so filled wd love...

i would say geet, he was always yours... from the starting... worry line above his right brow... i never noticed😕... aab isse kehte hai sacha pyaar... choti se choti baat notice ho jati hai...


there is a new comfortableness b/w them... "Yaad hai na Giit maine kaha tha tumhe. Ab zindagi ki har subah tum se shuru aur har raat tum pe khatam. Aaj se wahi hoga". koi kisi se itna pyar kar sakta hai, yeh to mujhe maaneet se hi pata chala hai...and he called her 'baby'... Yes Baby... and i felt maan thud...

i think even if darji came 2 know abt those many more 2 mins... even then these lovebirds wouldn't have stopped...

there is always an excitement in a 'shadi ka ghar'... nobody can remain gloomy... maan is a perfect guy...and he is now in a role of 'Raj' from DDLJ...


the most loveliest thing happened here was when, darji felt his weight of responsibilities being lessen...


a daughter is always precious to her father.. but geet is more here. after all she is darji's guddi...😊.. her memories for him are gems...


moving on... its a trait of Khurana men's to help their lady love in draping a sari... indeed Lucky Mom😉. and daddy being more lucky😆

Thanks Krati. Romantic banda hai ... baby to bolega na..😳
Glad you liked it.
See the spot over his right eyebrow... that's what I was trying to write..
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 3 years ago

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11 · 5 months ago

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 12 years ago

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness · 2 years ago

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".