THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

haaye!!!!! m fida over bold geet

loved this update

well u r right, u stop at a very wrong time

please update d next soon

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#702

hi avi !!

as promised I am here and loved each and every part thats on the thread...first

part 70

beautiful update !! dev teasing maaneet with that naughty song...more by asking maan if he spend time with chotu...poor maan all happy that he got a chance to have giit all to himself...without knowing who dev's chotu really is...and the bribing between brothers like kids...!! ohh loved the scene where geet all shy in western dress...but confused when maan got her salwar, if he didn't like her in that dress...and how beautifully maan assured her..."will be dreaming you in that dress "

oh yes! me too like mohit & mouni !! loved their pair..their chemistry...the longing for the forbidden love...it was divine literally!! after our maaneet I love them !!

and always your song selection and vm selection are fabulous !!

chap 72

maan and geet out all night...dadima ko chakma marke...kya idea nikala maan ne...neither he went to his giit's room not took her to his...both gayab together and maan enjoying nok jhoks with her and then judai...for bigger and life long union !! dadima explained beatifully a girl's heart and desire...her people getting love and care from that special person in her life...maan understood that well !!

and there came brij running from police...landed in hoshiarpur...when geet is going to stay there...away from maan...his protection.. little scary !! what a disgusting person brij is...he knew he is not even a thakur...doesnot have any right on their property...he tortured poor souls and now intending to kill them all...

chap 73

BB2B...what a fabulous part avi !! both brothers using skype for wonderful sceneries !! blending of the screen scene with royal bath is awesome...so sensuous and alluring !! maan became so restless and gloomy that his brother and dadi had to send him off to meet his jaan...and kya welcome paya...his woman ...in his bed...wearing his shirt and calling out for him...dreaming...wow!!

now aviji...maine apna vada nibhaya... ab aapki baari !! please release those beautiful butterflies from cages...(thats what I feel about them) or give me chabis... will be waiting...

need chabis for 68,69,71,74,75,76...kitnonko bandh ke rakha hai...😉 pl do...

Edited by kavya.sravya - 11 years ago

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setvij

@setvij

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

I thought the engagement would be in one part...looks like you are splitting it into multiple parts...

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krati

@krati5

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#704

unres my comment on page 91... rest i'll do 2mrw...

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#705

thanks for the pm avi !! will be back after enjoying...

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: krati5
Avi plz give small updates... although i love them... but it gets hard for me to come out of it... i read this update for 5 times, then only i am able to start commenting on this... but even now i feel like i am inside the update... it is this much heart touching...😭 u made me cry so much... kabhi khushi for maaneet to phir kabhi ghum for darji... thats really not fair... i like to be practical... i never cry easily... but u gave us a senti update... chado mein nahi likhna kuch bhi... when i'll be normal... i'll do then...

😆 Pehli baar anyone requested small updates.. okay.. will try.

It is a sad part of life that daughters have to go through bidaai.

It is a unique thing about being a woman that we have a grand capacity to love and accept. Leaving our home, we make new ties, form new relations and maintain them and also try for a balance on both sides of our worlds. See that's why I think women in power are more successful. It is in our nature.

Sorry to make you cry dear. 🤗

Ab senti part likh diya na, now tell me if you liked Maaneet..😃

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abinaya.m

@abinaya.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Hey Avi

Bohoth hi pyaar bhara update tha. Simply loved it and also the

Love which daarji has for geet and maan is brilliant and thesong song was apt as u dint want crying during their marriage. Awesome keep it up. Waiting for the next eagerly

Abinaya

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Deepabhargav

@Deepabhargav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

I'm scared about brij

Maneet were too good I like the bold geet

Waiting for the next update don't want brijesh to scarce our doe

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: dqno1

@underlined.. chalo kisi ne toh notice kiya...😆

Thanks for the support.

Itna Meetha Koi Kese notice nahi kare 😆

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: jasraj123
maan does not leave any chance to do romance😆😆😉😉😉
just the way we like it😉😉
love the way he was helping geet and telling her she is princess today and does not need to anything😳😳😳
darji remembering the old memories how geet get matured

hayeee maan helping geet to get ready😳😳😳😳
kya yeh engagement mein time pe pahunch jayenge😆😆😆

Accha hai, engagement is in her house..😆

Thanks Jas