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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: crazydream

Ye res Kis liye????

Wanted to update but mood off hai..😕

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kavya.sravya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

how can you expect me to comment on such beautiful , sensuous and hot hot updates... in my butler english and tuta puta hindi...cannot I skip saying these parts are awesome and any of my words will not suffice ...!! per aapne tho rule rakhi hai ki one comment on each part...verna ...no further pws... so trying ...

part 68

aftermath of wonderful confession and declaration of life long togetherness...the swing the moon and taj infront...in the warmth of full moon ...wow !! and she slept ...he kept on admiring her...atlast after so many years of waiting ..he could open up her and say whats in his heart...!! day started with wonderful kiss...but, her hesitation and shyness took over...his seduction plan and strategy everything was ready expect for the object of seduction...and he went hunting for it...!! from where geet came ...and her upbringing its natural to shy away from physical closeness !! still she is trying to overcome that ...

part 69

and kya idea hai maan ko feel karne ka and show him that she is trying...wow ...suddenly she became bold...he became speechless...the lunch they shared...he is trying to fulfill all his choti choti khwaishe...lying in her lap ...feeding her...eating from her hands...middle me mishty bhi...that was a cute lunch date...

chap 71

the bike ride they shared...when did giit learn bike ride...koi na maan haina sambhalne keliye...!!their emotions are overflowing ...and the confession making them open up to eachother and show their longing without hiding...!! the statue scene is so beautiful !! she is insecured or rather feel she might be falling short of his expectations ...and his assurance that he loves her the way she is...innocent naive and sweet !! and they spent whole night on the beach in eachother's arms ...kisiko aur kya chahiye...other than sleeping far away from all worries in their loves arms...

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks so much for the wishes. I didn't notice😃 I think you were the first person who did. Shukriya. Always a pleasure girl 😃

He was not troubling her. I think this chapter caused a little confusion and that is perhaps because most of the readers are single. When you are engaged or about to be, the man always is a step ahead in initiating closeness. I don't totally agree with you here, though general tendency is men taking initiative, expressing their interest, taking intimacy ahead but women are no way behind, esp the confident ones.

He was just being patient because being close to her was affecting him badly. It is a line of fire at this stage, paas raha na jaaye, duuri sahi na jaaye. Unless she let go her reserve, he was burning badly each time in this waiting.

When I meant troubling, Maan assumed he keeping distance will make Geet realize her feelings and make her take an initiative. This, I say, is the most common issue with people, assumption. Dude, go ahead and talk it out rather than assuming a certain kind of behavior is going to turn things your way.

She finally realizes it when he stays away. Now she is also in the same boat as him. That is what I was trying to show.

The difference in Geet's character and her love is what happens in ch 76. I wish I had written this better.

The issue is not with your style of writing, you have written what you have observed or felt around you. What people do not understand is by creating distance without words and emotions, they are only adding MUs. Even in this case, when Geet asked Maan why was he punishing her, he realized his distance was being presumed by her as a punishment and not his intention for her to express her desire. Then he voiced his views and things became vivid between them, is this not how generally we live relationships in our lives (mostly if not always)?

Thanks Roma.
Welcome Avi :-)

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks so much Roma.
Welcome Avi :-)

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

probably after ages I have seen the title read "Updating" 😳

Needless to add... but adding it anyway... desperately waiting girl!!!! keep it coming 😃

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wanted to update but mood off hai..😕

moood off kyun hai???😕 pix nahi mile/.??

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: honeygrape

moood off kyun hai???😕 pix nahi mile/.??

Mil gaaye..😃

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kavya.sravya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

chap 74

most beautiful part !! maan hungry and desperate for her after painful seperation...she ...drapped in her maan thud dreams...not completely able to tell apart which is reality...and when she came to senses...just wanted to give in to their mutual desire and love !! not wanting to disappoint him...but, thanks to pinky's silly doubt...her mind blurted out...and made maan to come into senses ...!! that was not the way to give a fulfillment to their years long innocent love...rushing geet is not the answer...her love should be cherished...worshipped...not taken in the heat of the moment !! loved how he asssured her that he was not disappointed not angry with her...but would wait for the right moment...and would definitely enjoy their courtship...!! and geet how innocently started her blabbaring...

I am completely against giving longer comments...that because...the feel that it might kill the essence... beauty of the situation !! its like dissecting a beautiful flower with out just enjoying its delicate beauty...its the difference of writing between wonderful writers like you and too practical readers like me !! sorry for that... one more chap left...

chap 75

started with geet's eagerness to see maan and darji noticing it and giving her space...and maan trying to control his passion ...which just confused geet...and it showed when he refused to even touch her while she was longing for it !! and what followed is their passion for each other...sight of maan's abs with geet's mehendi design would be worth watching...

and brij...he again tried unsuccessfully for geet...but, pinky got the memory stick...and it reached right persons...though maan knew geet is somewhere in danger from brij...he doesnot know how near that danger reached...hope maan will be able to stop brij from even reaching geet...hope their engagement will be without any hassles...

chalo maine pura padliya jo bhi links aapne bheja...hope I haven't spoiled toomuch ...the beauty of your story !!

now can you send chap 76 and the coming chapters links... don't know what I wrote!! wanted to come to the present chapter asap !! but surely after this story ends..am going to read all maaneet chapters together...without any break in between !!