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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

😛 maaneet sath sath again...

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

datz awesome

loved dier fighting

thanx fr pm

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

awesome part. Geet Raji fighting along with maan.👏

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Lovely update

thanks for the pm

keep writing :)

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

loved it a wonderful update

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Superb update !!

Maan has faced cruelty of dev & his mother ?? what they did to maan ??

wowww sher(Maan) & sherni(geet) milkar sabki chutti kardi ..👏

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

wow...sher aur sherni milke sab k band baaja diye...gr8...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

part 4
awesome dear...
excellent...
let me tell u one truth...
yesterday or say night when i was reading this update seriously i was laughing so so so much...
my God my whole face was full of happy tears...
got good scolding too from my mom for laughing like that at night...
seriously i have never laughed like this this uncontrollably...
Geet's fight and Rajji;s comment were too funny...
seriously dear i enjoyed this one...
back to the update,
that Dev has his men all around...
but Maan Geet fought them off...
but that rogue punctured their tyres...
hope they will come out safely...
cont soon dear...

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: chavvi16
kya baat hai
kamino yeh geet hai naa tum logon ke haath naa ayegi

I know you want it, But you never gonna get it, Tere Haath Kabhi Na Aani!😆

saale dev ki toh
mere toh mann karr rahe tha ghus ke maaru kamine ko
sorry for swearing but then i cant help it

Abhi is fic pe bhi small scenes likhun kya?😆

so maan is impressed by geet
well thats a start for sure
hmm he sure changed her mind about her
and why not right
she sure proved him wrong

Maan ko toh impress hona hi tha! Warna kaise hoga?😉

well she is geet handa aint she
and her sister is no less either
if that creep thinks he will get geet he has another things coming

😆

maan geet and raji are gonna battle you out mate
wonder whats the story behind maan and dev past

You will come to know in next two chappies!

well we shall know and soon
wow loved geet actions and what she said to her sis
also what raji did

Happy to read that!

but they sure got their jeep
koi nahin maan will get geet and raji away

Sawaal hi nahi!

waise maan you are right she is hatke
cheers for pm
off to do DFL and tonight it will be done much quicker thank god

Thanks for the review!😃 Enjoyed reading it!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

ha ha yah I got big relief...until that revealation about Dev being gaon ka gunda I was really tensed that how can Maan kill Geet's family...ab Khurana surname se to Maan hi yaad aata hai na...

I can understand your tension! 😃

🤣I am laughing reading Dev speaking in raw punjabi dialogues...

That was fun, na?

oh Maan is also sataya hua banda by Dev and his mother...

His story will be out in Chapter 6!

such a brave girl Geet is...she fought side by side equally to Maan...
now they are taking jungle route...

hope they don't have to encounter more gundaas...

Nope! No more gundas! No more fights till Chapter 7! After that, fight will be directly in Climax i.e Chapter 9!