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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

the sherni's did fight... loved it.

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

hey lovely story... read all the parts in one go.. glad to know that the goon was dev... and maan saved her... and he is not going to help her reach delhi...

i am sure that dev wont leave them easily... maan to wants revenge from dev so he is helping her...

awesome...

pls cont soon..

and ya pls pm me next time u update...

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: kingofme
hey lovely story... read all the parts in one go.. glad to know that the goon was dev... and maan saved her... and he is not going to help her reach delhi...
i am sure that dev wont leave them easily... maan to wants revenge from dev so he is helping her...
awesome...

pls cont soon..

and ya pls pm me next time u update...

Happy to hear from me and really glad that you liked my story so much!

Added you to my buddy list!😃

Will PM you when I update!

Thanks for the review!😃

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

mein aa gayi... yeh... am so happy to read u...

part 1

terrifying one... khurana heir is horror... he killed the whole family😲

if we compare this geet family who stood for her and refused to bulge on their decision of not letting the marriage even though they suffered a lot and at last even were killed ... to the one of our serial waala naalayak family... i feel proud of them...

the sisters moment were touchy... love the spirits of rajji... in spite of suffering the worst, she had the determination to not let go and try once again... hope these two sisters high spirits do not go down till they reach a safe place!!!

part 2

u know how much i love u more for this part...yehhh... maa kaali roop which u brought out making geet fight for herself and rajji rather than any one helping her just made me so proud of being a woman...

though it was obvious that geet will be going off in the jeep sitting with maan thanks to the banner, but still when both sis were running for their lives, i was just biting my nails here... and when some one came with "bhabhiji"... i was like...what ... how...

geets maa kaali roop was bravo!!! and loved maan (yes am sure of it) when he was admiring her fighting with the goons and later came up and both together just made all the goons fled from there...

jeep ke peeche chupe hain... wow...

remaining 2 parts after break fast😃

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

part 3

i had always admired the writers a lil more when they used to take the scenes of GHSP and take us back to the golden days... here too i just loved it... when maan though had sounded harsh and mean to geet to help herself against the goons... and also the scene where geet landed in maand jeep hiding unknown to the fact that it was maans... and later the chitter chatter... 👏

geets maa kaali roop again and this time in front of the same person who provoked that... but loved the determination in her to save rajji at any cost...

though we know how good maan is😳 ... but seeing geets state, it would have been really hard for her to trust him... loved how maan tried to convince her to come with him...

part 4

an action packed update... the scene where geet and maan where fighting with the goons was so good... kaash aisa kuch sach mein dekhne ko miltha hamein serial mein...

maan admiring geet... first step towards Maaneet😉...

my waiting starts now...

"jungle hain aadhi raat hain... lagne lagaa hain darr...
duniyaan ko bool jaaoo ... kuch aisi baatein karrr"

but with sherni geet i dont think she will be darring of jungle... ky haina?

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

nyc updt

love sherni geet and raji

cont soon😊

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
mein aa gayi... yeh... am so happy to read u...

And I am so happy to hear from you! You know there are certain readers of mine whose review cheers me up so much that I eagerly wait for their review! Infact, when I post the update, I keep on thinking how my favorite readers would react! It excites me to think of those readers' responses! You are one of them! When due to being busy, you could not review this story, I was so sad! But now reading your review has cheered me up so much, especially after the news I got earlier (the one which I mailed you about) Thank you! Thank you so much for reading LJ! Really made my day!

And thanks for the awesome review!😃

part 1

terrifying one... khurana heir is horror... he killed the whole family😲

if we compare this geet family who stood for her and refused to bulge on their decision of not letting the marriage even though they suffered a lot and at last even were killed ... to the one of our serial waala naalayak family... i feel proud of them...

You know when I was planning the story, the Handas were supposed to force Geet into marrying the heir of Khuranas. Then I thought, why not show the Handa family in good light once? So changed the plot at the last moment! Happy that you liked that twist!

the sisters moment were touchy... love the spirits of rajji... in spite of suffering the worst, she had the determination to not let go and try once again... hope these two sisters high spirits do not go down till they reach a safe place!!!

They will reach safely! But uske baad kya hoga no guarantee!

About Rajji! I always felt she was an under used Character in the show! I could not use her in DFL so gave her more limelight here! Thanks for reviewing the first part!😃

part 2

u know how much i love u more for this part...yehhh... maa kaali roop which u brought out making geet fight for herself and rajji rather than any one helping her just made me so proud of being a woman...

Haaye!😳 You love me??? Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai!😳

😆 Jokes apart, I am glad that we think the same way! I will always promote girl power in my stories! In DFL too, Geet is shown fighting back even after the atyachaar by her family! I even made sure that Geet in DFL had completed her studies coz I believe in woman empowerment! This is my way of telling girls to fight back!

though it was obvious that geet will be going off in the jeep sitting with maan thanks to the banner, but still when both sis were running for their lives, i was just biting my nails here... and when some one came with "bhabhiji"... i was like...what ... how...

Oh wow! Really? Was I that good? Cannot believe it!!

I think I am turning into a good writer!

geets maa kaali roop was bravo!!! and loved maan (yes am sure of it) when he was admiring her fighting with the goons and later came up and both together just made all the goons fled from there...

I am glad that you liked that scene! It is one of my best works!

jeep ke peeche chupe hain... wow...

remaining 2 parts after break fast😃

Oh wow! As usual your review made me so happy that I am grinning like an idiot!😃

Once again thanks for reading it! And thanks for the review!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
part 3

i had always admired the writers a lil more when they used to take the scenes of GHSP and take us back to the golden days... here too i just loved it... when maan though had sounded harsh and mean to geet to help herself against the goons... and also the scene where geet landed in maand jeep hiding unknown to the fact that it was maans... and later the chitter chatter... 👏

I am so happy to hear that you loved those scenes! Even for me, the HP scenes rocked! Especially the Jungle scenes when Maan saves Geet from the Talwaar and that Lake scene too where Maan saves Geet for the first time! Those days were awesome! When I first saw the movie this story is inspired from, the beauty of the surroundings in the movie totally reminded me of HP and Geet! HP was shown so beautifully in the show! Even Geet's first scene where she is doing bhangra in school dress is so beautifully shown! Loved it! HP scenes rocked!

geets maa kaali roop again and this time in front of the same person who provoked that... but loved the determination in her to save rajji at any cost...

Happy that you liked that scene!

though we know how good maan is😳 ... but seeing geets state, it would have been really hard for her to trust him... loved how maan tried to convince her to come with him...

The trust scene was a last moment addition! I was typing when I realised that a girl who has gone through what Geet had gone through would not trust Maan easily! So that scene was added! That is why I did not write Arhi Version of this story! Coz Arnav would not have done what Maan has done for Geet in this story!

part 4

an action packed update... the scene where geet and maan where fighting with the goons was so good... kaash aisa kuch sach mein dekhne ko miltha hamein serial mein...

😆😳 Actually that was something I wanted to see in GHSP! So fulfilled my fantasy here!😆😉

maan admiring geet... first step towards Maaneet😉...

Yup! The romance is about to start!

my waiting starts now...

"jungle hain aadhi raat hain... lagne lagaa hain darr...
duniyaan ko bool jaaoo ... kuch aisi baatein karrr"

Errr... That won't happen! The Jungle scenes will be more emotional as Geet and Maan's backstory will be out in front of each other but yes, this talk will lead to feelings for each other!😉