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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

dadi did gud thing by taking back the land from handas..the land was the thing which made them to force geet..poor maan n dadi both are in guilt

geet is struggling hard..n sleepless nights for maneet..

now arjun office mein maan..will they meet..

nice part

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

dadi gave punishment to darjji

but what about the brijj .. ..

so maan babu is immersed in the guilt ...

the only way to come out is geet and geet can out from her loniliness only by maan

jab indo ka mulakat hogi yaar

please

ab muje nahi hoga

mindblowing update dear loved it and waiting fo the next part

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

hi,.. very good going yaar just completed all parts really impressive me a regular fallower to ur works also completed urs earlier works ,.. the mist and the punishment ,.. i really very much liked ,. want to tell earlier but nahi karpaayi ,.. ur a very good writer in ur works imainly liked is the way u potraied geets charecter,.. her self respect ,.. self confidance ,..every thing i liked very much ,.. i love this in fact ,..

shaayad aap nahi jaanthe ho mujhe ,.. here r my trys please go through once if u have time

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essence of love ,...link for previous parts:h ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536

Izhaar pyaar kaa,... INDEX

PART 1 above

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

muahhh lovely mindblowing update babie :)

loved it a lot:)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

part 8
nice...
Daadima has realized her sin...
poor Geet...
let Maan regret all through his life...

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

hi babie

tum hari bhari dikh rahi ho

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tanubag

@tanubag

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Interesting story. I have read all 9 parts in one go.

Waiting for the next.

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam
hi,.. very good going yaar just completed all parts really impressive me a regular fallower to ur works also completed urs earlier works ,.. the mist and the punishment ,.. i really very much liked ,. want to tell earlier but nahi karpaayi ,.. ur a very good writer in ur works imainly liked is the way u potraied geets charecter,.. her self respect ,.. self confidance ,..every thing i liked very much ,.. i love this in fact ,..
shaayad aap nahi jaanthe ho mujhe ,.. here r my trys please go through once if u have time

--------------------------------------------
essence of love ,...link for previous parts:h ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536
Izhaar pyaar kaa,... INDEX
PART 1 above
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7