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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 10




Geet was trying hard to control herself * drank water and made her busy with workers who wr laying d heavy cables in d basement * after some time she thought it it could be coz of dirt and less freshen area of basement so she came up to get some fresh air * she moved around and noticed a very luxurious car near d gate * she was in a fair distance so didn't get d clear view of d person who was well dress up and wearing sun glasses * he came out from d office and moved at d car with a very graceful walk , opened d door , sat and drove off ... Smart ... a word slipped out from Geet's lips unknowingly and came down in BM getting a call from Pandeyji * d man threw a running glance at d building before going out from d gate.

In d basement(BM) Pandeyji was waiting for Geet * he wanted to confirm about Geet's program for sat to visit d places for rent coz she requested him to come with her .


Pandeyji: GS, r u coming TM to see d house? (Geet Singh,,,Geet use her initials as her name in US , in her college and work place ppl called her GS )


Geet: yes Pandeyji , i'll and try to lock a good place,


Pandeyji: GS , d places r near my apartment and it'll suit u , I had visited them once before giving u d add.


Geet: thanks a lot Pandeyji , u r a big help for me.


Pandeyji: O come on GS .. Pardesh mei apne Desh ke log apne family jaise lagtey hei , tumhe dekh ker aur tumse baat kerke lagta hei jaise apne pariwar ke kisi ek insaan se baat ker li,tumhare sath mei meri Matrabhasha ( mothertongue) to bol pata hun , dil ko sukun mil jata hei aur tum mere ghar ke paas rahogi to mujhe bhi fayada hei na .. mujhe Indian Khana banaker kila dena .


Geet smiled : jaroor Pandeyji. Mujhe khushi hogi , thanku.


Pandeyji: thanku nahi , Bhojan(meal) ,, Brahama ko bas accha bhojan chahiye.


Geet laughed at his open demand for food * both fixed d time to meet and retired to their work.


Next day Geet saw few places with Pandeyji and then she locked a 2BHK all furnished floor for her and decided to settle next day * only an old couple was living in that house on ground floor and they needed a tenant.

Meera came on sat eve and Geet informed her and Arjun about her shifting * first they didn't agree and forced her to stay there but Geet persuaded them at last Meera agreed on one condition that she came to meet her every weekend * Geet agreed for that .


On Sunday Geet and Meera settled d new house of Geet and Pandeyji helped them* Geet prepared Indian food and Pandey and Meera relish that praising her cooking skill * Meera came back her home and Geet tried to cop-up with new surroundings * days wr easy to spend but nights eats us when memories ingulfed us in d darkness . It was mid night when her phone buzzed and it was from Arjun * Geet replied d call.


Geet: hello bro , why so late?is everything fine?


Arjun: hi GS, I'm giving u task for TM coz i'm going to New Jerssy with Annie * her mom is not well and hospitalized and i'll stay there for 2-3 days.


Geet: OK, no prob.


Arjun : I left a bag in my office with some samples and desines for final selections of MK , MD of KC * I had d meeting with him TM but now you would handle that in my behalf * plzz showed him and finalized of his choice * I'll inform him about u * GS u have to go San Fransisco in his main office.


Geet: OK, i'll do that , u don't worry .


Arjun: thanks a lot , d address is there in d file .


Geet: OK,

Arjun cut d call with a thanks and GN * Geet tried to get some sleep after this break * she cuddled herself in d quilt but in that new place and in d loneliness of night her dreadful memories engulfed her * tears rolled down from d corners of her eyes and she didn't realize when she slept in wee hrs.


She woke up with d sound of her alarm and started her morning routine ,prepared her BF , got ready and left for her office. She took d bag and file from Arjun's office , opened that and checked all d things and a note which Arjun left with d file mentioning meeting time and address of KC's office. Geet checked d time and left for San Francisco * again she was feeling an uneasiness and shrugged it may be coz of lack of sleep last night * she started d journey for her destination to meet MK.


On d other side MK got Arjun's msg and didn't give any heed * he thought only for his work not for d ppl * everyday he met with lots of client and ppl regarding his work . He was busy in his office and feeling very low from morning even he skipped his workout but still he was very restive * he decided to visit his family Dr for check up * he attended few meetings and now he was busy in discussion on some blue prints and on finance with d head architect of KC, Sasha and finance adviser Manish-a * his PS Pinky informed him for his next meeting with GS from XYZ Co .


Geet entered in KC's premises * it was a big and beautiful building * she was before time, came to reception counter and asked about her meeting with MK * she confirmed that , told her to wait in d conference room and showed d room * Geet settled there but an unknown feeling and restlessness engulfed her * she drank some water from d bottle which was placed on d table and tried to compose herself * she opened her file and started to look at d matter to divert her mind though she read that in her way.

MK stucked lil long in his meeting with Manish-a and Sasha * his PS reminded him about his meeting and GS arrival in between * he finished d meeting and moved towards conference room for his next meeting * he entered in d room and saw a figure dressed in formals with open curls near d window looking outside and thought ... GS , a girl , she comes for d meeting in behalf of Arjun * MK came close to her and spoke to get her attention .


Maan: Yes, r u GS ?



She heard and turned to see d source of that heavy voice and next moment her eyes widened in shock * she step back and her lips wr lil opened . At her opposite MK was froze at his place with widened eyes and opened mouth like he was seeing a ghost in front of him .


Precap --- he felt a sharp pain on his face ...


Part - 11


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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kya dhamkdaar face off hogaya indono ka ab mazaa ayega geet kaise react karegi
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amazing part
loved it
geet adjusting in her life
but maan and dadi still feeling guilt for not helping geet

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Originally posted by: priya111111

hello indu ji aap bhi aagaye





Kya kare abb pain babhi se Jo Milan hai😉
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Originally posted by: -indu-





Kya kare abb pain babhi se Jo Milan hai😉





tum sab mera naam TM ka bohut use karrahe ho baar baar yaad dila kar

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