izhaar....pyaar ka. Part 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it dear :)

superb :)
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very nice...well written...
thanx for d pm...
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hai haye..maan is totally in love with her..n geet too lost in him..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kya baat hai MSK JI AUR GEET acha Gaye
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izhaar...pyaar ka...


Part:-6
He was hell annoyed by this hide and seek game. He is desperate to meet her and to talk to her ,she again vanished , now fr. whom can he ask about her?He trowed his hair back in pure disgust. He moved out of the hall fallowed by principal came to the car. He looked back once again in hope if she appears but didnt
Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan
Munshiji :- chote babu,. hum chalthe?
Maan:- came out of his state ,haa,.. umm,..
Prin:- Thank. u sir for coming and making this event grand sucess, I will meet u tomorrow to discuss the matters . Good night sir.
Maan:- Good night and he hoped in to his car in back as front munshiji and driver. He is thinking in his mind ,now how to meet her? whom to ask and wat to ask? wat do they think if he ask about her?He was so lost in his thoughts.
Munshiji:- chote babu:,.. hum kal coll. ki site per jaana hoga , engineer and masion r coming to finalise the plan fr. amruthsir. Mai kal subah subha amruthsir jaake saara plan and papers registrar office se leke avunga.
Maan:- umm,.. hum ek kaam karthe hai. wo ye log kuch puch rahi haina wo "women training center" keliye hume uske liyebhi kuch sochna hoga along with college. Mai aajhi daadimaa se baath karunga aur unki rai puchtha hu, hosaketho hum unkeliye bhi tayaari karni hoga.[ while telling this he got a brilliant idea to meet her] Aur haa,.. mujhe us ladki,.. kya naam hai unka,.. haa,.. Geet Handa,.. jinhone ye idea di ',.. usse bhi milna hai,.. baath karna hoga,.. ki wo kya chahthi hai,..?kaise honi chahiye ye centre.
Munshi:- haa,.. chotebabu,.. mai kal shaam ko unhe buladunga,.. kuch gaon ki log ,.. aur panchayat ki log ke saath,... wo kya baath karegi sir,.. wo tho abhi bhi bachhi ai,.. unhe kya pata ye sab .
Maan felt like margaya ,...[ gulping his saliva] lo ,..here he want to meet her alone and want to talk with her r atleast have a look in to her hazels,.. is bahaane,.. aur ye munshiji his pure plan per paani phenkne ki tayaarime lagi hui hai.,.. kya jarurat hai gaonki logonka,.. ab mai inhe mana bhi nahi karsaktha,.. kya karu?" aap isa kyu kahraha ho ki ye bacchi hai"ek baar bhi nahi sochke ye apni saari rewaard paise gaon ki logon keliye donate kiya,... kitna samajdaari hai wo? He totally disliked the word " bachhi".
Still from show Geet hui sabse parayi
Munshi:- wahi tho mai kahraha hu chote babu,.. itni saare paise wo isa hi donate kiya,.. kya sochega unki ghar waalone. kya kahega wo inhe?kya jaroorath thi unhe yesab karneka? agar unki pariwaar unhe kuch kahe tho?unhe isa nahi karni chahiyetha.
Maan"-umm,.. but he totally disliked that ,... but ye bhi thik hosaktha hai,.. nahi pata unki back ground, unki parents ki economic status,.. shaayad inkeliye ye badi rakam hoga,.. unki kuch kaam asakthe hai.
" unki pariwaar koun hai? I mean kya karthe hai?kya wo middle classed hai?
Mun:- nahi chotebabu ,.. per itna bhi ameer nahi hai.
Maan:- ummm,..
[Here in green room, Geet came running all shocked about her behaviour"ye maine kya kiya? Isa kaise karsakthi hu mai?kyu mai maan sir ki aankhome khogayi thi? mujhe kya hua? isa lagrahi haiki mai ye saare dance and song sirf aur sirf unkeliye karrahi hu.mujhe kisi aur dikhayi nahi dethi hai pura hall me? isa khogayi mai unki aankhome? kyahua mujhe? kya Maan sir pehchana meri haalat? "omy god" agar unhone jaan gayi tho kya sochega wo meri baare me? behaving like a cheep despo? how would i do that?
Mai unhe sorry bolna chahthi hu us raath keliye aur ye kya kiyamaine?ab mai kaise jaungi unke pass? kaise nazaar milpaungi unse? kayi wo mujhe pehchan kar puchliya tho? kya jawaab dungi? kya karu mai? sorry bolneko jau? ya chup chaap baithu? ye galat hogana?mujhe kya karna hai ,...? babaji mujhe koi raastha dikhao?she stood rooted thinking everything.
Drashti Dhami as Geet at Mr.Chopra's Party

Later at night in Geets home.
In her home a big draama chalagaya is donationwaali baath ko leke.Her darji and her thayyaji and his son brij made a big issue about it . Firstly they dont like to send her to college and now she took such a big step towards that spending a lot amount to the "centre" They r not able to digest this type of big step and not even tell them once. They took it as an insult . even though she did a good thing in their openion girls ,.. and aurath have no right to take such steps they always dependants and should obay men whoever it may be. They wanted to marry her as early as possible because they think that girls r burden to the family and have to send them in the name of marriage as early as possible. Its only Geets father Mohinder stood against to them and sending his children to school. But this is a joint family and there is no separate income source to mohinder ,so he is living with his parents and brother still depend on them so have to fallow them.
Darji gave tight slaps to geet for hr bold step of donation and he even declare that she should stop her education,she will not continue her studies and it is decided that as early as possible they should marry geet. Geet protested very hard " mujhe nahi karni shaadi,...Darji,..please mujhe padne do,.. mai age padna chahthi hu,.. mai age padke dr. banna chahthi hu darji ,.. humari gaon me koi dr. nahi haina,.. mai dr. ban ke humaari logon ki seva karna chahthi hu darji,... please mujhe padne do,..babuji,.. darji ko bathayiyena ,. mai age padna chathi babuji aaphi darji ko samjhayiye,.. mai dr. banugi,..babuji, he is crying her eyes out.. darji mai age aap ki khilaaf kuch bhi nahi karungi,.. mai waada karthi hudarji ,. thayyaji ,..please mujhe padnedo,.. mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai babuji mai padhungi,.. achhe padke dr. banke aapki maaki rajji ,aur titto ki jimmedaari lungi babuji,.. mai aapko khush rakhungi,,she fell on darji ki feet,touching his feet she begged him " darji,.. mujhe shaadi nahi karni, 'mujhe padne do. mai dr. banana chahthi hu.
Drashti Dhami
Brij pushed her away holding her hair tightly and gave tight slaps on her face threatening her," ooy chup hojaa , ek aur shabd bole tho jabaan kaat dunga tumhari ,.. padkar kya khaandaan ki naam mittime milna chahthi ho,...
Darji:- ye sab tumhari nanaji aur nani ka asar hai, unki wajese tum isa baath karrahi ho, wo ek ayurved ki vydya hai aur tumhari nani ek dhaayimaa hai gaonki,ye sab unki asar hai ki tumhe isa sir per chaddiya, pura bigada tumhe ye log, ye humaari galathi hai ki tumhe hum abtak waha unkeyaha choda, isliye tum yesa baath karrahi ho, tumhari nani tumhe apni saath leke jaathi thina,.. unse hi tum ye sab sikhayi hoga. ye dr. wr banana humaari khaandaan me nahi hai,.. humaari khaandaan me ghar ki aurat kabhi baahar nahi jaathi padhayi ,. gidhaayi nahi karthe,. isse humaari izzat ,ruthva per dhabba lagatha hai hum ye sab nahi chahthe,isliye ab ye riona shona band kar ye tamasha band karke chup chaap shaadi keliye raaji hojao, warna mujhese aur koi bura nahi hoga. He roared at Rano,.. geets mother,..
Rano samjhayiye isse,. isse ise sapna dekhna achha nahi hai,.. kya yahi parwarish hai tumhaari? hume pehlehi galat kiya ki tumhe humaari bahu banake, ab aur nahi, samjhao isse , dikao ise asliyat kya hai, tumhe ye karna hoga, agar meri merji ke khilaaf kuch hua tho , tum tumhari beti ki baare me bhulna hoga" he thretened her like hell.
Rano:-ji , babuji, she told shivering with fear for his threat and took geet inside she tried to convince geet consoling her, telling her that their customs and gaon ki ussol reethi riwaaj etc,..
Geet cried and cried her lungs out but nobody gave attention to her Mohinder came and hugged her. he cursed himself for beeing such an helpless father . He could neither able to resist his father nor could help his own blood, he also cried hugging her.



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
nice part
maan desperate to meet geet
n geet thinking how she lost herself seeing maan..
geets darji n brij..maan come n take ur geet soon..poor girl..
she only got slaps for saying her views
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm...js read Part 5 n 6 nw! Did nt get pm 4 part 5! Lovely song n dance! Maan mesmerised n lost in Geet! Both lost in each other! Geet does nt y ot wt is happenin to her! Poor Geet! Hate Brij n Darji! Maan enquiring abt Geet! Geet slapped bt Brij! update soon! Well written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Maan geet ko milne ke liye plan sochta hai...aur
Geet sochti hai ki woh ab maan ke samne kaise jayegi...
Daarji ne geet ko thappad mara...Yeh daarji ki toh...😡
Yeh brij ki himmat kaise hui geet ke Baal khichne ki...😡
Geet ko aage padhna hai aur dr. banna chati hai par ye log unke khilaf hai
Bechare geet ke maa aur babuji kya kar payenge?
Yaha toh humare hiro ki jarurat hai...haina!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan is so lost in her thoughts...he want to see her, meet her...he made some excuses but Munshiji ne saare plan par paani fer diya...he is so desperate to meet her...

now as seeing Geet's family's reaction I don't think they will let her come to the meeting with Maan for that training center...

now what will happen to Geet...her family has even declared to stop her education...her father is also helpless...he wants to help his daughter but helpless...hope Maan do something...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice
but feeling bad for geet
link u give in pm not openning

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