MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR Part 6 updated on 9-4-2014/ Page 116 - Page 9

Originally posted by: preetymaaneet

<font size="7"><font color="#FF0000">why maan want 2 torture geet
congs 4 new story
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Originally posted by: kainturakiran

nice story line...👏

continue soon

Originally posted by: saf24

Congrats on the new story. Superb start. Not sure what to suggest as a title though.

Originally posted by: sangeeta33

Awesome start😊

Originally posted by: maaneetkisonali

awesome story...
loved the starting...
ummm name abhi toh kuch idea nhi aa rha h but will pm u...
awee geet is so innocent..
why maan has kidnapped her...
usko thappad bhi Mara..
want to know more...
update soon..
and haan I want this as ff...
waiting for next

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Fantastic beginning.

For title, I think you need something with the word Innocent in there. That is how I see Geet.

So maybe, "Innocence in (a Ruthless) Possession"??

Innocent Heart?

Or if this is more about Maan then ...

Ruthless Heart?

Originally posted by: preeti.1

new story .wow .interesting ...

Originally posted by: jssood

nice start

title

Originally posted by: chavvi16

what was that
was it maan and get
must be right
but why has he kidnapped her
and boy was he being brutal with her or what
awww she is so innocent aint she
hmmm wonder whats going on
hope to know more and soon

Originally posted by: nadira29

tumhari stories different hoti hai
this 1 is also amazing one
name tu khud choose kr sweety...
hum ussi mei khush...