MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR Part 6 updated on 9-4-2014/ Page 116

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

congo for new story
seems really interesting
so maan has kidnapped our innocent geet

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Congrats on the new story. Superb start. Not sure what to suggest as a title though.

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fazimah3008

@fazimah3008

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

nice story dear. continue soon. title can b the kidnapper.

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Sonali

@maaneetkisonali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesome story...
loved the starting...
ummm name abhi toh kuch idea nhi aa rha h but will pm u...
awee geet is so innocent..
why maan has kidnapped her...
usko thappad bhi Mara..
want to know more...
update soon..
and haan I want this as ff...
waiting for next

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Fantastic beginning.

For title, I think you need something with the word Innocent in there. That is how I see Geet.

So maybe, "Innocence in (a Ruthless) Possession"??

Innocent Heart?

Or if this is more about Maan then ...

Ruthless Heart?

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

new story .wow .interesting ...

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

nice start

title

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

what was that
was it maan and get
must be right
but why has he kidnapped her
and boy was he being brutal with her or what
awww she is so innocent aint she
hmmm wonder whats going on
hope to know more and soon