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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: mayyo

Kamaal hai! Mere saath toh ulta hisaab hai. Situation ho ke guzar jaati hai and then I wonder, "Arey ye gaana uss ke saath kitna achha baithta hai". Even with the chapters of the story. Baad mein khayal aata hai. 😆

😆😆😆
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mayyo


You took me off guard with that one bold-ed line. I can't explain how.

28 out of 35 to be convinced of that! The readers nut have pulled their hair out. 😆

trust me on that- i was like where r u shika i want to strangle u. 😆 and u know how beautifully she writes emotions plus that damn emotional poetry make u cry buckets. GOD tat was something she made them fall in love then separated, made them cry for years and then again the torture of seeing the other half with someone else. and then in the end she write 4-5 parts happy lovey dovey story of other couple -the ultimate climax. and then again some flashback- u will cry again and then she will end it with a simple kiss without any epilogue.
aur usse bhi jyada she removed it after few months.

'Sigh'. she will kill me for this. i m like a ever complaining machine for her.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: dqno1

👍🏼 I can attest to that..


Hi- Fi Sistah😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

🤣🤣
Graphic descriptions are always better, nahi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Susegad


🤣🤣
Graphic descriptions are always better, nahi?

Plus I get to say ki maine kuch nahi kaha...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: dqno1

Plus I get to say ki maine kuch nahi kaha...😆


😆😆

Avi you're on a roll. Aaj nashte mein kuch toh zabardast khaya tha kya?
Like pati ka saar?😆
That always get me in an awesome mood.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Susegad


😆😆

Avi you're on a roll. Aaj nashte mein kuch toh zabardast khaya tha kya?
Like pati ka saar?😆
That always get me in an awesome mood.😆

Nahi! He had an early morning meeting so I got no breakfast.
Don't like to eat alone.
Coffee bana ke gaye thay which is what I had..
When it comes to bugging Mari, I am always on a roll😉
Pati ka sar🤣 no not yet 😆
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nahi! He had an early morning meeting so I got no breakfast.
Don't like to eat alone.
Coffee bana ke gaye thay which is what I had..
When it comes to bugging Mari, I am always on a roll😉
Pati ka sar🤣 no not yet 😆


Aww!!😳
The above mentioned dish is regularly incorporated in our menu.😆
Dimagi santoolan ke liye bohot hi mahatvepurna ahar hain yeh😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Susegad



Bilkul tumhari Geet ki tarah.
Trying to bolt the gate after the horse ran away and acquired a kid in the process.😔



The horse can always be brought back to the stables. 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

That's just one of the many names I have in my family. 😆

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