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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
new poem
its for
bandhan by tellyme

tu jaan hai meri
pahchaan hai meri
phir kyu ,
duniya ke liye,
yeh dard khudko diya
dur khudko mujhse kiya !

pyaar hai kya ,
tu toh khuda hai mera,
kuch bhi to nahi hai mere paas,
jiska nahi hai tujhe ahsaas !

pyaar hai kiya
chaha tha saath tera
par phir bhi ,
sirf tere liye ,
khud ko zuda tha tujhse kiya

par kyu nahi tha,
tujhe yeh ahsaas ,
ik tere siya, kuch bhi toh nahi tha
mere is dil ke paas !

jab tu thi mujhe chod gayi
lakhoon tukado main thi tod gayi!
par phir,
ik tere liye tha sambhal gaya
bikharne se bahtar
pathar main tha badal gaya
tune aakar hai ZINDA kiya
dil phir se ahsaaso se bhar diya

nahi hai tumhe maaloom
kitna tadpa hai yeh dil
chu lo tum mujhe
iss ek chah main
marta tha yeh dil
ab aaja mere paas
nahi sahaa jaata ,
yeh duri ka ahsaas

banaalo yu mujhe apna
ke dur hona hamaara,
ban jaaye
bura sapna

hope you like it

hayeee loved it nishu...
maan ki feelings r so perfect n geet k bhi...
jab tu thi mujhe chod gayi
ye line na samajh ni aayi meko😕

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

jab tu thi mujhe chod gayi
ye line na samajh ni aayi meko😕

its about the time

when she left hi m for world

and went to mumbai

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

congrats for the new thread

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rashmivaish
congrats for the new thread

thanxxx dear

and now

read poem

and comment😉

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wonderful poem nishu

depicting maan's heart in true sense

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rashmivaish
wonderful poem nishu
depicting maan's heart in true sense

which one😕

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
jab tu thi mujhe chod gayi
ye line na samajh ni aayi meko😕

its about the time
when she left hi m for world
and went to mumbai

ok nishu samajh gayi

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

which one😕

maine to Bandhan ki padhi aur bhi hain kya😛

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lizzy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

ok first of all i bow down hats off to ur unique talent everyone out there are not good with their words unlike u

i m glad i came around ,may be my age would play as an obstacle to connect with the intense words but the aura of the poem does make me feel the havoc of emotions flowing in between the lines

the rhyme scheme adds its own essence .loved it

very nicely penned down .

with lots of love

aanya