MG- SS-The Mist-Thread 13- UPDATED Pt 100-A / Pg 121/ 31st Jan. .. - Page 80

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Posted: 11 years ago


😊 plzz don't post for few min..


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lekin me update k baad 1 st.. yaahhhooo...🥳


babbie ne sab pr paani fer diya...😲😭 abb to me 3rd bhi nhi..😡
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aap to bolo hi mattt... aapp pe itne sare eligations or charges lagaye he..

1 late aati ho..
2 LMS mmode me rehti ho
3 dona ko to pata bhi nahi chlta aap ayi bhi thi..
4 demand pr demand krti ho...
5 Good night bhi nahi bolti...

baki k bhul ayi...yaad ane pr add krdugi..

bsy hun to late aatee hun,,,net chala jaye to gud nyt kaise bolun
frends ko demand karna mera right hei,,,,aur bolo...😛
,,,
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Originally posted by: singh24


🤣 kya baat hei.. chele ne li guru ki class...😆😉


kyuu aapko koi complain nahi hai????
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 100-A



It took few min to gain their senses back * all wr looking at Geet stunned ... when she did all this ? Why she didn't tell us ? Why he kidnapped her? And many more questions . Maan too was very shocked * she was with him all d time then when and how she did this?

Dadima: Geet beta , jaldbaazi mei kadam nahi uthana chahiye , esse baat aur bigad sakti hei , wo ku essa karega ?


YSK: Guddu beta , hum jantey hei tunhare relations unse acche nahi lekin ye ek sensitive matter hai aur esse bina soche- samjhe kisi ko blame nahi ker saktey .


Maan: Geet agar tumhe doubt tha to ek baar mujhe kaha to hota aur tumne ye sab kiya kab ?

Geet: Maan, kuch baatey mai kaha nahi sakti aur aap samajh nahi saktey * aap sab mere liye pareshan thy aur bahot kuch ker bhi rahe thy * Maan mai maanti hun aapne meri jaan bachai aur mere liye kuch bhi ker dete * lekin mai ye bhi janti hun ki agar mei pahale bata deti to kuch nahi hona tha * ye apni majboori ka rona rote aur uss Brij ki maa ro - ro ker yahan drama kerti * last mei kuch nahi hota even police complaint bhi nahi hoti ,,, enke kahdan ka eklota waris jo hei ,,blah,,,blah.( she pointed at Mahi)

Mai ek baat puchti hun sabse ... agar mai marr gai hoti ya mere sath kuch aur ho gaya hota to aap sab kya kerty ,,, aap mei se koi bhi na to meri zindgi mujhe wapas de sakta tha aur na izzat. Wo apna kam ker chukka tha aur ab mujhe kerna hei . Ab jo soude-bazi hogi wo mere sath hogi * Aap sab jo chaho wo ker saktey ho aur mujhe jo kerna hei mai karoongi ,, No compromise.


All sat there numb * YSK came close to Mahi who was still in shock , his face turned pale and he was looking at Geet with wide eyes * Maan sensed his condition and called Rano at once * this dire news and situation could harm him * he was already on medication and facing a tough time from last two nights * YSK carried him to d chair and made him to sit * Maan took a glass of water and forced him to drink .


All were in a fix situation * they knew Geet is right at her place * It was Geet who faced d worst * Maan knew that he was able to save her bcoz she saved herself * they could harm her to any extant * he too wanted to punish them who harmed Geet and kidnapped her , criminal is criminal no matter who is he ? He decided to back Geet * he understood that bcoz of last incident Geet hide this from him .


Mahi's phone buzzed again but he didn't pick that * his phone buzzed again * YSK saw that and it was from Promila * he looked at Mahi and then Geet * Geet got up and took d phone from YSK and pressed d green key to reply but Promila started from other side impatiently.


Promila: tum gaye ya nahi ? phone ku nahi utha rahe thy ? mai yahan etni pareshan hun .


Geet: Tumhara kharida hua naukar nahi Mahinder Singh ki jo kahogi manta rahega * jaker apne uss kamine bte ko khud chuda le himmat hei to * aur dobara phone matt kerna .


She cut d call looking at Mahi who was sitting there silently * d phone buzzed again but Geet cut that again * after few min Rano reached KM worried * she looked at Mahi and became tense .


Rano: kya hua tumhe ?


She checked him and gave him tabs at once to control his BP * she looked at Guddu and then to Maan * he nodded his head in disappointment * seeing Guddu's expressions she understood that something happened between Mahi and Guddu * she was going to ask from Maan when Mahi's phone again buzzed * Geet saw d screen and threw that in full forced on d floor in anger that was again from Promila * all wr very quiet coz of this newly aroused prob * Rano rushed to Guddu to console her.


Rano: Guddu beta kya hua hei , ku naraz ho?


Geet indicate towards Mahi: unse pucho .


Helplessly Rano looked at Mahi and then Maan * Maan came close to her and spoke.

Maan: aunty Brij is in police custody and Geet complained against him for kidnaping her.


Rano: What!!!! She was shocked with this piece of news and looked stunned at Mahi and Geet ... R u sure Guddu ?


Geet :I have proofs .


Rano: then go ahead , there is no need of mercy * ess bar tum un logo ke liye koi Kurbaani nahi dogi. She gave an angry glare to Mahi who was looking down with dropped shoulders.


Khuranas wr helpless in this matter coz now it became a family war between Geet and Brij and Mahi was in a fix * Geet too understood that it's not good to drag Khuranas in this rival .


Geet: Dadima it's not good to create any drama in KM , i'm sure very soon that lady would start her drama with her so called relatives so i'm going to FH with dad and Rano aunty , plzz aap mind matt kijiye , mai nahi chahati ki ess family per unn logo ka saya bhi pade.


Dadima hugged Geet lovingly ... hum sab tumhare sath hei beta , kahin matt jao .


Geet: nahi Dadima , yahan nahi , plz try to understand and then she looked at YSK for approval * he nodded and gave his willingness.


Geet gestured at Rano and started to move but Maan held her hand .. Not without me Geet * he looked at her determined * she agreed and Maan told Mahi to come and all went to FH to face d next conflict. Maan told YSK that he'll inform him time to time.


They wr in FH and Mahi was very quiet * he never thought that he would face this situation * he lost everything for that family even Guddu also lost her happiness but this was beyond his limits * in his hatred he kidnapped his daughter and try to kill her * he hurt Guddu when she was a toddler and when he voice out this thing Promila accused him and created dramas * at last he left his daughter with Rajji * she never got her family even her father's proper care * now he crossed all limits * Mahi too wanted to punish Brij but he knew that again she started her drama * he was in dilemma how to face this situation , no doubt Brij deserves d toughest punishment .


Hours passed and all were taking their lunch quietly when Maan's bodyguards informed him from outside that some ppl wanted to meet Mahinder Sir .

Maan: hmmm , OK told them to sit in d lawn , don't allow them to come inside and be alert.


BG: yes Sir .


Maan: they r here . he looked at all .


Mahi became tense but Rano put her hand on his to calm him .. let her handle Mahi , now things r out from ur hands and only she could teach them a good lesson.


Geet: aunty aap aur Maan yahin ruko , mai aur Dad bahar jaatey hei , aap dono samne matt aao.


Maan: Geet, be careful , BG r there and ordered them if u feel any prob and call me too , OK.


Geet nodded and came out in lawn with Mahi * her face became tough seeing Promila with some ppl ... she and her 3rd class relatives ,, mean. Both took their chairs and sat down * Promila was fuming in anger and glare at them but Geet's one smirk burned her alive.


Promila: to ye sab tera kiya -dhara hei , tune pakadwaya hei mere Brij ko?


Geet: haan maine kiya hei aur tere bte ne kya kiya wo puchker nahi aai apne ladle se .


Man 1: aaj Sunday hei to koi legal kam nahi ho saka aur police ne Brij se milne bhi nahi diya * lekin timne usse arrest ku karwaya?


Geet: ku police ne bataya nahi ? fir kerne kya gaye thy PS?


Man 1: lekin ye jhoot bhi to ho sakta hei , wo ku tumhe kidnap karega ?

Geet: ye aap log usse puchna ki ku kiya , usne 10 cr manga ransom mei aur truck driver ko paise diye mujhe nadi mei fek ker marne ke liye * mere liye etna kaafi hei usse jail mei sadane ke liye.


Promila lost her temper : tu mere bte ko jail mei sadayegi , mai bhi dekhti hun * tum baap- beti to suru se hi humara bura chahaty ho * tumhe to mere bacche kabhi acche hi nahi lage * ( she started her drama ) tujh manhoos ko janam deker maine sabse badi galti ki , sari mussibat ki jad to tu hi hei , na ...


Her words left in her mouth and she received a tight slap on her face * all became shocked at their places * she was looking at Mahi with wide open mouth and eyes even all d men ( from Brij In-laws and Promila's relatives) wr looking stunned.


Mahi: ek bhi galat shabd nahi meri beti ke liye * sirf essi ke karan maine teri aur tere baccho ki harkatey bardast ki ab tak , lekin ab nahi .


Precap - conclusion...


Part - 100-B

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3904733/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-14-updated-epilogue-final-part-pg-118-9th-feb?pn=4

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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hi bye nd gud nyt ek saath bol dia ,,,smbhal lo,,,jab jiski jarurat lage ,,,,,,😉😛😆
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superb update👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi bye nd gud nyt ek saath bol dia ,,,smbhal lo,,,jab jiski jarurat lage ,,,,,,😉😛😆


hawww.. meri tutions ka kyaa?? koi nai.. ye dusri sari teacher se kaam chala lugi.. app jao apne guests ko smbhalo.. unse hi baate kro.. kyaa pta wo log aap ko bed-time story bhi suna de.. na de to koi nai.. babbie ki update to hai hi.. enjoy lily..
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Originally posted by: mauaa


hawww.. meri tutions ka kyaa?? koi nai.. ye dusri sari teacher se kaam chala lugi.. app jao apne guests ko smbhalo.. unse hi baate kro.. kyaa pta wo log aap ko bed-time story bhi suna de.. na de to koi nai.. babbie ki update to hai hi.. enjoy lily..

😆😆
wked ka kya plan hei mauaa,??,,aaj dona nehi aayee,,??

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