THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

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awesome update... on top of it Hum aapke hain kaun song... sone pe suhaga...

ooh... ur updates r alwz small, jz cant hv enuf of them... sometimes i wish this story neva ends!!!

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

lovly nd awesome part...portrayed emotions very very beautifullyy...and the parts look soo sooo natural...loved it...

and that devil brij is back...😡 mera ek request hai Aviii, end me usko bohut zor se peetna haa...monkey donkey fellow😡😡😡 and he is goin to hoshiarpur even geet is there...

maan ko bhi beej dooo...else who ll take care of her

scared for geet...thank for posting the part...😃🤗

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cristallus

@cristallus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Maan and Geet spending time with each other and talking about their future.geet wanted to name her boys Salman and shahrukh..lol
But the night ended with a sad note but dadimas talks with Maan had brought some light to his relationship with geet .
Getting ladoo was a thoughtful idea .
Brij in hosiapur ...hope she doesn't get into any problem

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

ro maat...juda horahe ho milne k liye..

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

maaneet's moment in this update was so beautiful

i loved them to d core

so brij is not chandan's brother he had been adopted by chandan's father & he is going to HP now n geet bhi wahi jaa rhi hai

hope ye wahan geet ko na pakad le maan isse nhi chodega

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ishika18

@ishika18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

beautiful update. maaneet relationship is just fab yaar.daddi is rocking

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kylasa

@kylasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

loved it .i liked there undersanding😛

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Maneet started thinking abt children too.. very fast ha.. pahile se hi planning... Heehe.. Salmaan n Shahrukh.. Geet told him abt her leaving.. N maan got upset.. with that.. but Dadima is to cool she solved both problem... But in HP Brij... danger is lurking around...😲 Hope Maan will be in HP too...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#669

wow lovely cute emotional update.. te way my maaneet spending in beach holding each other and talking abt they furture was lovely cute emotional.. te way my maan ki teasing and te way geet saying abt her leaving making him gussa was lovely cute emotional.. te way geet crying and dadi knocking some sense in my maan ki mind was lovely.. te way my maan rushing to his geet and asking her to take ladoos for dadji was lovely emotional cute touching.. te way brij will he do some thing bad to dadaji and geet..i love te update

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krati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#670

oh no!!!!! geet is going HP but brij too would be there... babaji take care our kudi... d loveliest part in this update was dadima & maan's part... again u had wonders with ur words... simplest words with leave much more effects... i m not comparing another writers here. but u different coz u use logic in even smallest things.. if maan is sending 5kg ladoos then he explained his reason too, he is doing all this not for showing of but for love... thats why this ff is closer to real inside of fiction...

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