THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

70.4k

Users

156

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

JeevanaP thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

bye avi

mujhe jaana hai


goodnight for me and

goodmorning for u😆

aap abhi tak yahi hooo...
aapki wo bula rahe hai .. jayena 😆
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

bye avi

mujhe jaana hai


goodnight for me and

goodmorning for u😆


bye Priya
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

challo lens ko clean karo... tab focus khud ba khud hojayega...

Bohut try kar rahi hu... nahi ho raha hai..😆
krati5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
part 65

oh yeah!!! even i forgot about diary... kya kay hai usme???

first time ever NT galat time par aayi hai... although shararat kafi cute thi...

machar🤣!!!!! aab pata chala hoga geet ko ki NT ko mumbai me kiss machar ne khata tha... solid tha ye scene👍🏼

chalo kal ki baat jo Nt ki wajah se adhuri reh gyi thi wo puri hui
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER

Being the other half of a twin had never been a problem for him. In fact he had always felt happy about it. There was always a person who knew how he worked and what he thought even before he said anything. It had always been a boon in his life, a gift.

Gifts in life are interesting only when you want them though, he scowled darkly at the soft humming that Dev was doing at the dining table.

Daadima must have heard him too because she was trying hard not to laugh. She was all set to go to a jagrata (all night prayer session) at her friend Nandita's house.

Giit looked like she wanted the earth to swallow her. He was trying hard not to look at Geet. Ab seedhe seedhe baat maan jaati toh kya jaata uska? Par nahi! All he asked was that she come meet him in his room to say goodnight. Was that expecting too much? Nahi, right?

Of course, if he was honest, his intentions were not strictly the purest but still! She should have some faith in him. He had left her pouting and in attitude. Only thing was, once he was in his office, he missed her like crazy. His arms felt empty without her.

He had tried to call her many times but she would not pick up. Well, Ms. Geet Handa, Maan Singh Khurana did not give up so easily. It was time to go back to strategy and planning. Since seduction 101 had accomplished his goals, he decided to take up the next chapter of it.

He dressed up in a white pathani suit for dinner similar to the one he had worn at holi. The one she had said made "kuch kuch hota hai" for her. Gel-shel, trim the stubble, a nice whiff of Polo, the silver watch; he had checked the mirror to make sure nothing was out of place. Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Geet would be with him, he decided.

Daadima had been pleasantly surprised and remarked to Geet how handsome he was. He had just had a moment to see the nice fuzzy melty look in Geet's eyes when someone cleared their throat loudly. He had scrunched his eyes tightly.

Who knew that Devil Dev was home early? If he had known he would have been more subtle. Dev had given him a once over from top to bottom and then the evil humming had started.

"Aankhon aankhon mein baat hone doh, mujh ko apni baahon mein sone doh".

He had almost choked on his food and Daadima had quickly offered him some water.

He had glared murderously at Dev who continued in a female voice now, "Shaadi ho jaane doh".

Geet had choked too and Daadima had said something about "Palak paneer mein mirchi zyaada hai, kya?". Of course her smirk which she tried to hide gave a clear indication that she understood what was afoot.

Dev had continued unabashed "Shaadi ho jaayegi. Pehle meethe sapno mein sone doh".

He stopped suddenly to ask Daadima, "Aap jagrate mein ja rahi, hai na?".

When Daadima nodded he asked Maan slyly "Bro, will you mind if I watch a movie or play games with Chotu?"

At last! He was so happy to get rid of Dev. He could spend all night with his friend Chotu whoever that may be, for all he cared. Giit was going to be here, he was going to be here, no Daadima, no Dev. Heaven! He quickly replied trying to be as serious as possible, "Haan, of course. You spend time with Chotu. I have a lot of work to do". So happy that he was going to get all his "work" time with Giit, his heart had started doing a salsa.

A/N: Please comment if you are interested in reading further. I know it is supposed to be the part with Brij but am not able to get past Maan and Geet right now.
Picture Credit: India Forums.

The next song[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qWRNinVfMmI[/YOUTUBE]

Video Credit to Uploader😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
krati5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
part 65 (2)

How come summit know about mathali?? oh he is a rich person, aab tak to dub jana chahiye tha uski sari property... leecher insaan...😡

& even now he is arrghhh😡 behaving like he is God!!!!! kabir 😭, usko marta hua chod diya aur aab haq jatane aaya hai...

isme ek salute ki smiley bhi honi chahiye thi. i wanna give that one to mathali... its very very tough to break the abusive cycle... she stood for herself...👏 ⭐️...a very very inspiration chapter for all those who hesitate to stand up for their rights...

i love spending girlfriends time out... so masti... u can't help urself to not enjoy that... it end at a upset note but hey they were successful to fight... kapow!!!!

NOOO... maan ka accident!!!!!!!! yeh scene to that hi nahi... yeh kaha se aa gaya... darn authorities... my poor baby is praying out there & they r not letting maaneet meet...
dev again a savior... have i told u i like this dev a lot
krati5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
part 66

thank god sada munda thik hai... Nd geet confessed..❤️ is nok-jhok ke liye hi to jete hai... ☢️

and Khurana family is back... dev fir chaloo.. Lastly it was the stab that hurt the most. Dev!

maan ka to dil hi tod diya usne...😆 bilkul. Aadmi beemar kyun padta hai, after all; not that he was beemar, but still?🤣

yeh to bhala hume pata hi nahi tha... kya planning chalti hai uski nahi... song selection to suno... katilana aandaz hai dev babau ke...

"Good night aisse karte hai, samjhi?", he smirked with attitude.

and it end on MAAN thud... hushhh


honeygrape thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
😃

haha maan doesnt know who chotu is😆 poor him..😆

his heart had started doing a salsa.

and ours is doing all dance forms altogethre now...
geet ki toh khair nahi ab😆😆😆 poor thing... only if dev leaves his chotu😆

very very tempting teaser...😳 cant wait for the update...

A/N: Please comment if you are interested in reading further. I know it is supposed to be the part with Brij but am not able to get past Maan and Geet right now.
who on earth is not interested in reading it and so happy that you are unable to think anything other than maaneet😳😃 you never should get past maan n geet...

when can we expect the update??😳😃 thanku in advance😃

dying to read the next part

Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
mayyo thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 14th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
Tch tch tch! Bechara Maan! Kya hoga jab usay pata chaley ga Chotu kaun hai. 😆
I'm loving Dev, by the way! Missed him and his songs. 😃
krati5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 67
Good night aisse karte hai, toh kissi ko neend kaise aayengi?

yeh bhi hai... in all this fun just dadi was missing aab wo kami bhi puri ho gayi... thik naam diya hai CID dadi... unhone Maan Singh Khurana se information nikal li... dadi jhappi de pappi tuade vaste...🤗

itni first class performance di hai unhone... mai to kabhi bhi aapni hassi control nahi kar pati...her shararatein is soul of KM... her fist pump was highlight... aah! mission successful...

Babaji! Abhi main goodnight se recover nahi hui hu aur yeh Good morning karne chale aaye!

sach mein yeh to khushiyon ki bharmar hai... i wish i could collect it all in some bag...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

3 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 122- 30 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".