THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 107

wooff

73 chapters done

Wow ... I'm in a dreamland right now

Romance ... Romance and Romance

Its getting so hard for them to stay away
And thanks to Dev who helped his Bro and Chhotu again

Awww ... I love this naughty Dev

Dadi maa is still trying to be one strict grand mom but she cant ... Lol


Arghhh ... Brij kutta ... What does he want
Creepy man


awesome work dear
Upset that it'll end soon ... I want more

And thank u so much for the passwords

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hey Laxmi, just wanted to say that I absolutely loved the Valentine banner you made for TL.

It was just beautiful and gelled so well with the update. Just made the reading of the update that much more special. 😳

Thanks for that special treat 😃

Simply superb update
awesome teaser
waiting for nxt

I am a new reader. Not sure about commenting to get password to read full part?
It is a good story, Well written. Sometimes am confused with back and forth juggling of characters, but it is progressing well.

Since I don't understand this password issue, I think I might not get to read this story further. Good luck with your writing.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 72 - beautiful part...beautifully described about their extended date...loved their fun & teaseful morning ...so seren relation they have...loved maan teasing her on their children's name and surprised to see her bold athorative side of geet...

both were sad for one more separation ...

so brij was not thakur but chandan's father raised him as his son ...but really he was not worth at all...above good up-bringing he has bad habbits...he got more support from his wife pammi in his wrong doings...

omg he going to HP...he already had eye on geet...scaring for geet

dev was so sweet, supporting maan in front of maan

really liked how dadi explained him about duel responsibility of any woman and he should be good grandson-in-law...

omg 5 kg of laddos ..that was sweet...

Sorry for late comment ...was held up in office shifting

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 73 - ufff...first part me hi maar dala Avi...maan & geet kitne door par phir

bhi they were burning in desire just seeing each other...their longing for each otherm...maan gaxing at her hungrily and geet lowing her eye lashes...wow... loved it...

maan landed in HP, in her bed and geet dreaming about them...it was a sweet torture to us...

and you tortured su more by stopping at worng time

cont soon

sorry for the late comments

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

wooff

73 chapters done

Wow ... I'm in a dreamland right now

Romance ... Romance and Romance

Its getting so hard for them to stay away
And thanks to Dev who helped his Bro and Chhotu again

Awww ... I love this naughty Dev

Dadi maa is still trying to be one strict grand mom but she cant ... Lol


Arghhh ... Brij kutta ... What does he want
Creepy man


awesome work dear
Upset that it'll end soon ... I want more

And thank u so much for the passwords

Originally posted by: setvij

I am a new reader. Not sure about commenting to get password to read full part?
It is a good story, Well written. Sometimes am confused with back and forth juggling of characters, but it is progressing well.

Since I don't understand this password issue, I think I might not get to read this story further. Good luck with your writing.

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

maan & geet both r missing each-other like hell, thanx to skype that they r able to see each-other every day

dev can't see his brother craving for geet so decided to send him HP

geet thought like everyday (in her dream) he will vanished but he is their in reality

m waiting to see how will geet react to this