THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1081

Originally posted by: krati5

you are not going give us a SR😔... okay. i m sure u'll give us something more special which could compensate it...😉

😆 aashaein

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koshish karungi😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1082

Originally posted by: Deelight
again an aweosme update...ur imagination ki to daath deni padegi! update sooon😳

Thank u😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1083

Originally posted by: ashdd
awsome updt...😳

Thanks😃

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1084

what a lovely update

their dreams finaally merged into one

both could not stay away

avi you made it hot with just a look on skype - smouldering eyes, beating hearts

teaser too was awesome

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setvij

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1085

Hope there are no twists and turns now?

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supernasahu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1086

Hello sis...How r u ? I want your help.

Plz send me blog links & passwords from part 70 to 74.

I was busy in my exams.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1087

Originally posted by: punam2712
what a lovely update
their dreams finaally merged into one
both could not stay away
avi you made it hot with just a look on skype - smouldering eyes, beating hearts

teaser too was awesome

Thanks Punam😃

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annieanwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1088

Hi Im waiting for the passwords blog
The locket 17 its superb hearttouching plz send me its password add me in ur pm list assoon as possible can, t wait
TO READ FURTHE

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mhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1089

read till chapter 71

oh dear what do I write

wonderful excellent superb

loving maan's naughtiness or dev's teasing

really don't have words or at loss of words reading such dreamy and so so wonderful parts of maan and geet

u took me back to the dreamy days of ghsp

and their romance u r portraying is really very very nice

loved geet's opening up

their closeness under the open sky

the orphanage moments

and love this maan full of masti full of teasing

full of passion and full of love and care for his geet

superbly written and wonderful choice of songs

in this story of urs u r taking care of each and every aspect of a relationship

and I love that

one thing I would like to mention

when maan was climbing the stairs of orphanage u even pointed the paints of the wall getting fade

wow this little trivial mentions make the story so lively as if watching it

👏👏👏👏👏

read three parts together

so don't remember all the details

but one thing I do remember

that I write wonderfully

I love ur writing

loving the love of maan and geet

and all the characters are also very well portrayed

loving this story

thank u so much dear

and keep up the wonderful work of urs

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1090

Originally posted by: annieanwari
Hi Im waiting for the passwords blog
The locket 17 its superb hearttouching plz send me its password add me in ur pm list assoon as possible can, t wait
TO READ FURTHER

NOTE: FOR THOSE STARTING THIS STORY LATE, I do expect a comment at least for every thread if not for each chapter. There are romantic parts further on which are password protected. I will not be giving passwords if I don't find comments from you.

SILENT READERS PLEASE SKIP THIS STORY.

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