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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

La La La Eeks!!! I am doing a happy dance right now.

Will come back and comment after I relish this one😳

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

part 10
nice part dear...
lovely...
cont soon...

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ramarora

@ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

very well written update dear!!!!
waiting for more😊

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

😃 do i need to say anything else.. the picture says it all!!! 🤗

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

The song that popped in my mind as soon as I read this update is Bryan Adams, 'Let's Make a Night to Remember"☺️

This what you call a palpable update. Words that are so alive that they reach out and electrocute you.

Attraction so large, that it refuses to be blanketed under the clashes of the ego.

Everything has been stripped down to the rawest degree of emotion.

That tiny candle is going to set Geet ablaze isn't it.☺️

Bring it on. Can't wait to read the next update. Eeeks!!!😃

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

beautifulll n awesome...hw r u feeling now...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

part X - beautifully written..loved it...who wll won now...what will he ask her to do if he wins...cont soon

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fantasy..4me

@fantasy..4me

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

😊First of all thank u for updating.

The update is..beautifulll.😳.

Loved it .👏

Edited by fantasy..4me - 11 years ago

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

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Please do not encourage Plagiarism.

Edited by ChandlerBing - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

wow me first😊hi thanks 4 updating! Really appreciate it! Hope u r feeling better! Missed ur updates so much! Thanks 4 da wonderful surprise update! beautifully written! 👏U make the reader visualise wt u have written! U r an amazing writer! marvellous update! ⭐️they gazes never left each other! Maan wanted much more! Geet affected by his touch! Geet shocked n scared by wt she sees in his eyes! it also beckons her! passionate kiss! Geet opens her eyes n is confused! She runs away n leaves her anklet! Maan feels unwanted n rejected! update soon! u keep on the reader enraptured n wanting more! 😉 😃

Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago