MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

I just read all 3 parts together & cant tell u hw much i loved geet here ..she is really amazing, mast n bindass type ..

loved all geet's antic whether its punturing tyre, giving grass to maan, dancing in clg, standing in frnt of his balcony ..everything abt geet is fantastic !!!!

nw im really excitd for nxt part & waiting for it ..




thanks for such a long n inspiring commenting
it felt so good after reading your comment

you mentioned geet craziness in such a lovable manner i love it


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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome update

geet is fully latu on maan
love at first sight
but geet ke raaste me bohot saare kaate hai pehle nuts aur ab yeh ladki
waiting for more





thanks for such a lovely comment
ab geet ne pyaar kiya hai toh yeh sab chote chote raaste kat jayenge

you will get to know
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear! Thanks 4 da pm! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments! Superb update! Well written! Geet is insane - totally in love with him! Dng crazy things! Nw who is dis girl??? update soon





thanks a lot
yes geet is very much in love with maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Part 4 :

Rahul : Geet, mere life me koi ladki nahi hai baba.. khud pata nai kya dreams dekhti ho roz aur mera sir khaati ho.. utho na baba.. kaun kehta hai ki grls jaldi uthti hai aur particular hoti hai.. hamari shehzadi ko dekhiye, itna soti hai ki kumbhkaran ko bhi peeche chod de... Geeet...

Geet : mai ghar pe hu... fir balcony???

Rahul : Balcony baad me banana , aaj sun hai but I hv extra classes , so m leaving ow.. tc.. and enjoy ur Sunday..

With this he kissed her forehead and left..

Geet : ohhh babajee mai dream dekhri thi. But subah ka sapna sach hota hai aisa maine suna hai.. though I dnt believe coz aaj tak mera ek bhi dream sach nahi hua varna to mai aaj ek princess hoti, class me hamesha first aati, roz mast khana khati aur boht kuch... aur mai apne Maan ke sath hoti.. but Geeto risk na le, yahi sapna sach ho gaya to ... Chal jaldi uth aur apne mission pe lag jaa...

Geet dressed up and reached her same spot of Khurana mansion..

This time she saw a trunk of a tree reaching to his room, not exactly infront of the room but side of it.. it was in such a way that the person in the room have to bend a lot to see the trunk but the person on the trunk can get full view..

Geet tried to climb, but it was diff..

Geet : geeto babajee ka naam le aur kar mehnat.. tujhe chadhna hi hoga.. aree Geet tu to punjaban hai, kuch bhi kar sakti hai.. chadh jaa..

She made many attempts but finally was succeeded in climbing up.. she sat and waiting for Maan to come to his room...

Geet : next tm Babajee mai juice bhi le aungi yah ape aur snacks bhi.. bhuk lag gai mujhe.. dekho babajee, suno aap bhi .. mere pet me se awaaz aari hai.. ab leaves to nai kha sakti na...

Maan entered room .. he had jus taken his bath.. he was in his towel.. tied up in his waist.. waterdroplets on his chest.. they were glowing on skin as the pearls...

Geet : Haaay kitne Hot dikhre hai Maan, saans le Geet saans.. nahi to yahi mar jayegi jhaad pe.. koi utaar bhi nahi payega teri body ko.. aur soch kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega.. hayo rabba...

Then she started inhaling heavily...

Maan was abt to open his towel...

Geet : close ur eyes Geet, aisa abhi nahi dekhna chahiye.. shaadi ke Baad dekh.. tera hi raaj rahega tere Maan pe bhi aur ... chi chi babajee ye kya sochri hu mai.. ankhein Band kar Geet..

After some time she saw from the gaps of her fingers, so he was fully dressed in his casuals...

Pari entered the Room...

Pari : bhai kaha jaare ho ?

Maan : XYZ mall jaara hu.. ek client ke sath meeting hai aur fir thoda Kaam hai mujhe.. kyu baccha?

Pari : bhai mujhe aur nuts ko drop kar do...

Maan : ok.. I ll be down in ten mins... be ready...

Geet (st) : ye nuts kyu hamesha beech me aaa jati hai.. iske paas apni car to hai fir kyu hamesha mere Maan ke peeche padi hai.. aur haan hamesha chote chote kapde pehenti hai.. pata hai BAbajee, mere ek dupatte me nuts ki puri dress ban jayegi..

Chaddo mujhe kya...

Maan was standing in window and talking with someone with a smile.. he was on the other side window , so Geet could see him but not hear him...

Geet (st) : kahi vo dream wali ladki to nahi... Maan itne to hardly haste hai.. vo to hamesha sadu ke tarah rehte hai but stil he is my hottie..

Maan, nuts and pari went in a car...

Geet took an auto and she also reached XYZ mall...

All the crowd was staring at Geet, then she noticed that, she have come to mall without getting well dressed.. she was in her long tshirt and harrum .. she had a duppatta.. which dint match her attire at all..

Geet (st): mai to ghar ke kapdo me aa gai , vo bhi iss mall me.. hey babajee, aisa kyu karte ho aap mere sath.. mere paas utne paise bhi nahi hai ki iss mall me kapde kharid pau.. hardly vapis jaane ke paise hai mere paas.. kyakaru babajee.. aur agar Maan ne mujhe aise dekh liya to... Geet tu to gai kaam se...

Maan was sitting with his clients and Geet was hidden close by and was drooling over him.. 2 hrs went just like dat and she was standing in same position...

Then Maan got up and went to some shop...

Geet thought now he will meet that girl...

She followed him, again she forgot that she was in ghar ke kapde and should directly go home first.. but vo to Geet Handa hai.. mission ko adhura chod ke nahi jaa sakti..

Then Maan noticed someone following him.. he turned suddenly and saw Geet behind him...

Maan : geet, tum ? yaha aur aise ?

Geet : ummm vo Maan... ummm

Maan : inn kapdo me kyu ho ? kya hua ?

Geet : ab mai apko kya batau. Vo na mai press karri thi to mere kapde jal gaye to shopping karne aa gai..

Maan : saare kapde jal gaye ?

Geet : haan saare kapde kaise jalenge na.. kuch bhi kehre ho aap...

Maan : to fir...

Geet : to fir... Haan to fir mere jo cupboard keys hai na vo bhi kho gai hai.. mil nahi rahi.. to socha shopping hi kar lu.. pehnne ke liye kuch to chahiye na.. ab bina kapdo ke to college nahi jaa sakti na... heheheheehe

Maan looked at her with lil shocked expression and then smiled half..

Seeing him geet noticed as wat she had said.. she blushed red.. her cheeks went crimson red and she said "nahi yaane vaise nahi kehna chahti hu mai but vo.. kuch nahi..."

" vaise tum bina kapdo ke bhi achi lagogi, but tumhare boyfrnd ko prob hogi agar tum sabke samne vaise jaogi to"

Geet blushed and again said " hatiye na Maan, kuch bhi kehte hai aap "

" vaise I dnt hv a bf.. m single.."

" ohh to Ms Handa single hai.. hmmm to I hv chance... jus kidding dear"

Geet (st) : kidding nahi na Maan... only u hv chance.. usi ke liye to yaha aayi hu...

Maan : acha chalo tumhare liye kapde kharid lete hai.. mai jiske liye ruka tha wo to aaye hi nahi..

Geet : ohhh so u came here to meet some one.. (st) : to vo chudail num 2 ayi hi nahi.. koi baat nahi.. ek din jarur pakad lungi... abhi to Maan mere sath hai, mujhe aur kya chaihiye..

Geet to Maan : ummm no thanks Maan, its ok... actually I forot my purse at home...

Maan : when MSK is with u, u hv to not worry.. come I ll purchase for u.. come dear...

Geet (st) : haaayee dear,, kitna sugary sweet lagta hai word...

With this they went for shopping...

Precap: MAANEET POV'S

Words: 1211

Here is the 4th Part !!!!


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Previous Part : 3

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Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Nice one, I'm loving this track. Sometimes it's good to be dillogical..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
i want 5 plzz i love it i want mAAN pagalpan alsooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
gr8 part..
cont,soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read part 3 & 4 in one go...awesome...😃...but why u didn't pm me??...😭

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