MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 7

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Part 3 :

Geet : pinky boht bore hora hai.. aaj kuch hatke karne ka mann hora hai...

Pinky : same here yaar.. oyyy tera ek lec free hai aaj.. but mujhe abhi jaana hai...

Geet : ok I ll wait for u in canteen.. aaj to baki ke dost bhi nahi aaye.. u carry on..

Geet saw Maan with pari entering college..

Geet (st) : ye to roz aane lage hai college.. vowww... but kahi ye nuts se milne to nahi naa.. its ok geeto.. kuch karr...

Ummm...

She went out and saw his car outside...

She dint see the driver.. Maan has droven himself... Geet took the golden chance and went near his car..

Geet bend down and took a nail.. she took the nail and fuuusss...

Car se hawa gayiii... then she did with other two tyres...

Geet : ab Mr khurana.. kaha jaoge...

She rubbed her hands and went in the college..

She went in canteen and sat oppo to Maan..

Maan saw her but dint pay attention.. as he saw her starring him..

Maan : hey Girl, dont stare me.. all does the same thimg.. coz of my style, my money..

pari : hey geet, come sit with us.. y alone..

nuts : or else if u wana sit alone then its ok..

pari gave a stern look to her..

geet : ummm no thanks I m fine..

Geet (st) : aareee fir se bolo na pari.. mjhe vaha aana hai.. mai to formality ke liye mana ki hu.. taki despo na dikhu..

Pari : common Geet, cm here...

Geet got up and sat with them oppo to Maan..

Pari : nuts come with me to staff room for half an hr..

Bhai u wait here.. I ll come back..

Maan : wat will I do.. I ll go now..

pari : but then bhai Geet...

Geet : no dat ok.. I ll manage..

All three of them went away..

Geet (st : Mr khurana , I kn u ll come back..

After some time she saw Maan coming back..

Maan : ummm may i?

Geet : yaa sure.. wat happened Mr khurana ? u r back gain ?

Maan : some one fool, or idiot punctured my tyres.. I have to wait for another car..

Geet : ohh sad...

Geet (st) : vow geeto tussi grt ho..ab jara rang jama unpe..

Geet : shall we walk ?

Maan : not a bad idea..

Come dear..

Geet : haan chaliye naaa...

Geet pricked a grass and gifted him...

" geet , ye kya karri ho tum ? "

" uhh vo.. agar I gft u flower then u might think wrong abt me. So I decided to give u grass..

Vaise bhi bechare ko koi use nahi karta,, so m using it... I hope u dnt mind..

Maan laughed at her antics and said a no.. dat he doesn't mind at all..

Maan asked her hobbies..

She gave ans..

Maan : ummm Geet rt.. u dance very well.. I like ur moves...

Suddenly he saw Geet started to dance inbetween the corridors..

" apni to pathshaala

Masti ki pathshaala

Loose control..."

She was going round n round, twist n turns, hitting her bums etc..

First he felt embarrassed but after some time seeing her smile and cute expressions, he melted and started enjoying it..

Den sudden applause brought her to reality..

Geet (st) : shitt.. crap.. I actually danced here..

Wat must be he thinking abt me.. is he thinking dat m mad...

Goddd... Save me... Geet, kya karti hai tu...

Maan : uuhhh Ms handa.. dat was nice.. I mean mujhe nahi laga tha ki mere ek baar bolne se tum yahi dance karne lag jaoge.. but dats nice.. I liked it..

Geet : nahi vo.. I dunno hw cm but..

Pari distracted their talks..

pari: lets go bhai.. bye Geet..

This time Maan turned and waved her hand... Geet jumped seeing him giving her a smile...

Pinky : hey Geet, all are talking abt u.. u danced here??

Geet : yaaa... so wat.. dare diya tha kisi ne.. to I did it.. forget it.. chal lets go for ither lecs..

The day ended..

2- 3 days went away with her same beahviour, getting up in the morning, going to their Khurana mansion, noticing Maan and then attending her college..

Now it was sat, next day off..

Geet : lets go the disc..??

Pinky : geet, u dnt usually go discs but nwdays u r so much willing to go.. wats the matter babes??

Geet : nothing yaar, life is boring in studies so jus wana chill out.. so lets go..

Night time :

Geet and her frnds reached disc..

Geet (st) : baba jee.. plzzz aaj Maan isi disc me aane chahiye.. today I heard pari and nuts were gonna cm here so I decided to cm here.. but let Maan also cm here.. plzzz baba jeee plzz plzzz..

Hiten ( one of the frnd of Geet ) : Geet , pinks cm yr lets dance..

they all went to dance but Geet was only physically, mentally she was searching her dream Man, actually can say dream Maan..

Geet(st) : its high time, he has nt arrived.. will he cm now... I think I should go n check if he is at home.. but he lives too far.. may be 20 kms.. Geetu tere kuch bhi impossible nahi hai.. chal chali jaa.. nai yaar boht late ho gaya hai.. kal jaungi subah...

Geet was disappointed as her MSK was not there today..

Geet went to his Mansion..

As usually she stood in her place to see him, Maan came to his balcony with transparent white shirt, looking extra ordinary smart.. his three buttons were open giving the view of his muscular chest..

It was night, Moon was in its mood shining high and spreading its light to enlighten his (Maan) beauty more..

Geet(st) : babajee , kahi mai faint na ho jau..

Aaj ye kitne jyada , nahi boht jyada , nahi.. sabse jyada smart lagre hai..

Haay mai marjawa...

Maan looked back to his room and stretched out his one hand.. a girl appeared from his room.. Maan hugged her.. now she was in his embrace and Maan was smelling her hair and kissing her head..

Geet was shock to the scene..

Geet (st) : nahi baba jee, aisa nahi ho sakta.. plzzz... Maan aur ladki.. kya Maan Casanova types hai ya fir ye ladki unki Gf hai ? nahi nahi... but Maan uske baalo ko kyu smell karre hai.. shampoo kaunse lagati hai vo ladki jo Maan uske Baalo me guse hue hai.. aur head (hair ) bhi kiss karne ki jagah hoti hai kya?

Kiss to lips pe karte hai.. see Maan, m lips are so gorgeous.. kiss me naaa...

Usme kya hai, vo ladki kitni ugly hai... shayad uss ladki ke muh se smell ati hogi isliye Maan must not have dared to Kiss her on her lips and baalo se kaam chalare honge... but fir bhi..

Then suddenly Geet did " haaa haaa"

And was making sure dat does she stink...

Geet (st) : thanku Babajee, I dnt stink... Maan come here, I dnt stink.. kiss me naaa...

Mujhe pata lagana padega ki vo ladki kaun hai...

Precap : mission ladki...

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Here is the Part 3.

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Sorry for not updating for so long hoping you all will like this part too...

Previous Part : 2

Next Part : 4


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Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet curosity about that girl fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such me Geet pagal hai... and i hope that girl is some sister or something of Maan.. i dont want Geet to go J on her...
lovely story...
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update but liltel confuse with maan behaviour want a part from maan point of view
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just read all 3 parts together & cant tell u hw much i loved geet here ..she is really amazing, mast n bindass type ..

loved all geet's antic whether its punturing tyre, giving grass to maan, dancing in clg, standing in frnt of his balcony ..everything abt geet is fantastic !!!!

nw im really excitd for nxt part & waiting for it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
geet is fully latu on maan
love at first sight
but geet ke raaste me bohot saare kaate hai pehle nuts aur ab yeh ladki
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! Thanks 4 da pm! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments! Superb update! Well written! Geet is insane - totally in love with him! Dng crazy things! Nw who is dis girl??? update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

geet curosity about that girl fab



thanks dear for commenting

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