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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
oh god...

priya's heart inside geet nd maan thinks that geet belongs to maan not geet actually her heart...

maan kidnapped geet on her wedding day...

scary update..
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

omg

priya ka dil jhey tu kya howa woh tooh nae hey na

jab ek saal se kuch nai kya tu ab ye kyun uski life spoil ker raha hey

poor geet mad maan

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Waiting very eagerly for the update ..
jaldi seee pleasee updatee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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meri jaan se bhi pyari di I just have no words when it comes to ur story di they just always keep me SPEECHLESS aur makes me fall in love wid u more & more & more di aur di when u write stories like this I just LOVE our MAANEET more coz maaneet ki wajah se I have found u aur all my other writing di's thank u hamare MAANEET aur thank u meri saari pyari di's👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 di just read the first part aur di OMG geet has priya's heart who is maan's love aur maan is devastated after her death aur he knows ke her heart is in geet aur he is keeping her wid him at any cost lekin when he came to know ke she is getting married to he lost it all aur let her know ke she will not get married to anyone she will not go away from him NEVER EVER aur di geet tried to keep herself away from office aur maan aur di her thoughts ke she will have babies aur her husband aur di then she stopped ke yeh galat hai pehle husband aur phir babies lekin di I loved ur this symbolism she will have her baby first aur phir her husband aur di I'm dying for maan to repent on wht he did aur love her as geet not coz she has priya's heart aur di hoping ke geet too can love maan aur mana ke yeh mushkil hai to forgive him but does coz of the true love she will have for him aur di me dying for the next update eagerly desperately😳 aur di rightly said yeh SHAMA thi jo pighalti chali gayi👏😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
awesome update.Maan being possesive fr priya heart not geet
Geet sacred from maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2:


Maan sir aap mujhe kaha leke aaye?? Mujhe darr lag raha hai, she backed off on the bed seeing maan staring at her. Nobody knew about her whereabouts, her friends who accompanied her to the parlor didn't dare to speak against him. She was scared to be precise what will her father think?? Guests might have reached, what was her father telling them?? He didn't answer instead closed the windows of the room.



The mere thought of her father made her condition worst, more than herself she got worried about the reputation of him!! she had to leave anyway, this is not done ... this shouldn't happen, this was wrong.



Sir ek ghante mein meri shaadi hai, aap mujhe aise yaha kyun leke aaye?? This is not the way to stop the marriage ... Mere papaji mar jayenge sir samajhne ki koshish kijiye ... let me go, she tried to explain a demon who was so lost in his obsessive love. Her words were fueling his anger even more, how dare she say she wants to get married even after his warnings?? His mind began to think of the ways to stop her ... stop her from going back!! He couldn't take that risk to lose her, he bent over her, kya hai jo tumhe iss shaadi se rok sakta hai geet?? He asked making her understand his intentions.



Sir aap mere saath aisa kuch nahi kar sakte, aap ... she hit him with all the energy she had inside pushing his face, him away ... and made an escape, poor soul didn't even understand that it was all a mere waste. Geet rotated the locked door knob to open it but couldn't, her whole body began to perpetuate to make sure she will fight with him ... she will go back. He cant touch her, she wont let him touch her!!



But when she felt herself being plastered onto the door being pushed with his body length against her back, she closed her eyes in disgust now giving up the courage that she was building inside he, all she could do was to beg him, plead him for her sanity ... Sir aap aise nahi karsakte, mere papaji mar jayenge, they didn't make difference instead he roughly kissed her shoulder piercing his teeth into her skin, don't you dare gimme your stupid blackmails ... yeh zindagi jo tum jee rahi ho na woh meri priya ki hai



Toh maardo mujhe ... take back the heart of hers, lekin jeete jee mujhe aise mat maro sir, he kissed her throat hungrily holding her hair in his palm ... crushing her to the wall. Geet couldn't protest knowing he wont stop as he lost his mind the day he lost his love. It was the same day when the old Maan Singh Khurana died.



He tore the blouse followed by her bra ... His eyes caught the sight of her bare breasts, Maan kissed them harder and harder ... his fingers trapped her waist and pinched it. Geet didn't feel the physical pain instead began losing her senses. Her whole body turned red with his assault, his teeth and lips didn't leave a single part of her. She was literally dead, even didn't flinch when he roughly entered her. Just waited for him to finish off with this forcing thing so that she could go back home, to her father and then leave the world. She was holding just because of her father, she waited until maan slept knowing he wont leave her that easily. She had to make an escape from him to reach the venue as soon as possible.



Meri beti kaha hai Meera?? Tum uske saath gayi thi na?? Mohinder closed the door and pulled her inside fearing that somebody will listen to their talks. Everyone were asking about Geet and she didn't return back ... Meera was not answering. Mohinder was really worried, he could only wish god that she was fine.



Batavo meera where my daughter?? Though she wanted to tell him that Geet was taken away by Maan she couldn't ... her lips didn't help her. She began to cry in front of him making him even more scared she was still fighting with her insides to speak out ... that was a brief moment when they saw a girl entering ... her whole face and body clearly told the state that she was in, and what she faced few moments ago. Her torn clothes and the marks that were visible,



The bride groom family left thinking this was the end of it, this was the end of the marriage. Mohinder helplessly watched them go away and his daughter, her torn clothes. Does she even has a sense of how she was looking like?? She stood like a statue, like a zombie who was in another world ... desperately geet reached upto her papaji who stood at the doorstep and said ... main aagayi papaji, I am here!! Ready for marriage, saying she fainted with the pain between her legs hurting her, pricking her soul. What happened seemed like a shock to geet ... She couldn't accept that she had been spoiled to a level and pushed to an edge from where she wont be able to fetch herself.


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She woke up to find herself in her room ... Geet sat up to see around, there was no one ... she thought a while and walked out. She screamed seeing the dead body which was placed in the middle of the hall, her whole existence shook for the way the body was being taken.



Ruko please ... she ran after those men who leaving for the burial ground. Meera held her arm stopping her and said, Geet please kal raat ko papaji ne akhri baar yeh maanga tha ki tu unki mari hui muh na dekhe, iss liye maine jaldbaazi kiya, let them leave ... Geet behind not bothering the traffic that was moving in her way. She ran to reach but couldn't have the courage to see her father, she followed till the burial ground. Standing outside the gate she watched his body being burnt, she didn't move until it turned into ashes. She didn't know till when she stood there like a despo,



It began to rain in the evening still she didn't move, but then those ashes got wet like her life and feelings. She went inside to atleast feel those ashes ... papajiii she screamed not wanting to touch them ... how would she when her father didn't even want her to see his face?? That means he thought she was wrong?? It was not her mistake to be raped!! To be forced!!



She ran back home and searched for the phone, that abuse, that pain which surfaced made her strong enough to punch the number of police ... she waited for them to pick the call. It was the time for revenge and Geet made up her mind that at any cost she will see him behind the bars for ruining her life, for being the reason for her father's death!!


*******


Mr. Khurana you are under arrest for raping our secretary ... the police entered Maan's cabin with the arrest warrant in their hands. The office began to panic seeing Maan walking away not saying anything, he sat inside the jeep like a loser ... agreeing to his crime!!



The news spread like a fire ... Maan sulked in jail for a day, his family claimed for a DNA test and at the neck of the moment they changed the results to prove him innocent. In all this Geet had to face humility, blame came on her ... Everyone treated her like she was some shit!! She resigned from work and decided to stay back home. Maan lost his mental ability to think ... after that night his instinct didn't let him rest in peace, he lost his mind.


precap: jalta parvaana


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
omg omg loving ths new story a lot yar:)
Congrates on new story:)
eagerly waiting fr next update:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
maan possessive towards priya's heart made him a psycho who doesnt want geet to go away from him and in this process he even kidnapped geet and he raped her. Poor soul without thinking anything she came to see her father and in return before dying he took promise that geet should not see his face. Its so painful for geet one side she lost her dignity and other her father. She gave a police complaint and maan got arrested
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
oh
yeh kayaa ho gayaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Crazy or say the biggest mad person is Maan here..

His obsession for priya's heart made him into a devil where he ruined one innocent soul

and wat did her father think tat she was wrong tat he did not even let her to see his dead face...

and now she is is being humiliated with no one for support..

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