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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yet another story
Hmmm interesting =P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome teaser.. But like maan Geet too seems selfish.. or may be it's her pain.. Looking for update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrants for new story...

asum teaser...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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one more story.. Yes!!!!!!
with a different concept
waiting for its updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wrote the comment on blog
blog name: chandpooj
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:


Maan bete aapki priya mari nahi ... she is still alive!! She is alive ... her heart is beating in GEET!! he remembered the day he lost priya!! His love ... Doctors have given up hope on her diseased condition. It was then she decided to give her heart to someone who truly deserves to live!! Her heart was transplanted to a girl who met with an accident,



Geet the very girl who worked for him in his office!! His secretary!! Its been an year now Maan still couldn't move on!! His true love didn't let him move on ... Everyday he would watch geet working in her cabin through the window and think about Priya ... Her heart was beating inside Geet and this one year has only increased his desperation to get her close, probably the heart transplant has made him possessive of geet.



He stared at her as she fell down and began gathering those sheets in her hands ... His eyes scanned her body beyond which she had that heart!! which was his!! He hated that girl ever since she joined office but couldn't throw her away as she works good!! And now he cant even throw her away knowing whose heart she was hiding inside her!!


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Geet hopefully looked into the envelope!! Her wedding card, along with the leave letter ... Babaji Maan sir maan jayenge na?? 15 days leave omg!! Bacha lena!!



Praying to her babaji she walked into maan's cabin knocking on his door ... He lifted his head and took a deep breath ... irritated to call her inside. She is here like always to irk him with her non - stop talks, baseless questions and stupid logics to prove her silly riots to be very sensible.



But to his utter dismay she stood infront of him playing with her duppatta ... Scared like a puppy not wanting to speak out what she wanted to. Maan pretended to work in his laptop waiting for her to say why she was there!! Giving up Geet called him to end up her misery ... Maan Sir, mujhe leave chahiye for 15days, she said giving him a wedding card and leave letter.



He took them from her hands making an awkward face ... he would have straight away said a no to her but the card caught his sight ... He opened it to see the names of the two people who were to get married.



Anger surged into his veins, he didn't know what kind of feeling he was having his inside!! She is getting married?? Maan gazed her for a brief moment ... not asking anything, not wanting to listen to anything from her.



He simply tore the card and held her arm ... You cant get married Geet!! You cant leave me!! You cant go away from me having that heart of Priya inside you!! jab tak woh saans zinda hai tab tak nahi, he didn't have idea what he was speaking about but he was!!



It was like his bottled up emotions burst out like a volcano, Maan held her arms to an extent of hurting her!! Geet was not understanding his demeanor ... it was a burden on her life to have that heart knowing how much Maan still loved Priya.



Maan sir leave me please ... You cant touch me this way!! She moved back feeling him coming closer to her even more. She crushed her face on her shoulder to make distance from his inching lips.



Sir mujhe darr lag raha hai ... please let me go, he didn't listen instead roughly held her cheeks and spitted fire ... You are just mine!! I wont leave you, Meri Priya tumhare andar hai Geet aur main tumhe kahi bhi jaane nahi de sakta ... Samjhi tum?? Maan desperately warned her scaring the hell out of Geet.



Sir please aap hosh mein nahi ho, chodo mujhe ... he didn't pay a heed instead pushed her roughly on his chair and hovered her ... Maine kaha tum shaadi nahi karogi toh nahi karogi, main bhi dekhta hoon tum shaadi kaise karti ho.



Just then dadima entered his cabin making maan to stand back, she was simply shocked to see the way maan was man handling geet. Taking the opportunity Geet escaped from his vice like grip, she ran away not wanting to be a part of conversation between Maan and his dadima.



Maan please aap Geet se dur rahiye!! Aap priya ke khatir uske peeche jaana band karo, Maan just left least bothered with what Dadima was saying.



Geet didn't go to office after that incident, she made up her mind to quit the job ... she was no more his employee, she had nothing to do with him. It was her father's dream to see her settled in life with a correct life partner.



Geet never believed in love, it was a fantasy she thought. Being practical in everything she does was a forte of her. She was happy with the arranged marriage thought also. Ceremonies started and Geet began to dream about her future, she will have babies ... She will have a husband ... opps wait a minute ... what did she think? First baby and then husband?? definitely that was wrong, she blushed standing in front of the mirror.



Everyone teased her with that mehendi that was red, her arm length went red with the deep brown color of it. Her father was very happy seeing her happy, both hugged each other feeling nostalgic, next day is her wedding day officially and Geet will go very far away.



Sir kal hi shaadi hai, aur Geet wapas nahi aayegi ... She is leaving to Bangalore after tomorrow!! As adi said that word his mind once again drifted to the day when Priya's heart was transplanted onto geet.



Maan couldn't stop himself from reaching to the marriage venue. How dare she gets into wed lock after his warning ... The time he had given Geet ended!! She will face for not listening to him and going on with what she decided.



He lost his rational thoughts ... His brain lost the sanity when the mere thought of Geet being with someone else burned his existence. Maan turned the car towards the beauty parlor reading the text message that he received just then ... She was there to get ready!!



Geet's eyes widened when the door banged open and she found maan standing there ... He roared like a lion and held her through arm ... I told you already ... you are not supposed to get married, tum sirf meri ho ... Tumhare andar jo dil hai woh sirf mera hai,



Maan sir let me go, Geet wriggled but by then he picked her in his arms and threw her into the car.



Precap: Shama Pighala!!

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NEXT PART:

PART 2
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Tu nahi tha mere liye ajnabi
Aur na tha koi apna sa
Par Mann mein tha kuch aitbaar sa
Na jaane kyun lage mujhe aisa
Par aggar SHAMA Ke liye Jagah kam pade
Tho leke Jana tu mere Rooh ko apni auur
Na rokungi mein tumhe...aur khoungi Bhi nahi tumhe...


My ramblings ...a mockery of poetry
But do tell me how it was :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG..

It mean his love priya's heart is inside geet and he is just mad.. or say insane by knowing this

He is a demon who is just wanting to have tat heart close to him and will go to any extent to do it

Geet she is just a victim.. as having priya's heart has become a curse for her now..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh No!!!!!
maan is getting mad after d death of her wife n now when he got to know geet is d girl to whom priya's heart had been transplant his madness is breaking all d limits of sanity
n geet she is d one who is suffering here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice dear
Maan being possesive fr geet
Geet sacred from maan
Maan kidnap geet

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