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(Sorry My Dearones for the late update, as usual my system got collapsed and had to reinstall it and had been delayed, sorry sorry and so sorry guys, so gave a long update hope you will like it,)

I Hate You Means I Love You,


Part 13
Maan and Geet's deal,

Rachi's eyes poured out and her heart was beating high and she started to sweat, "Veer ji," she said slowly as she turned around and her eyes widen up, "Maan ji," she said in Relief and smiled big and her tears poured out for the last time, Maan who identified her as he had she her in the Handa Mansion, looked puzzled, "You are Geet's sister right," Maan asked, "Shh," she silenced him and looked out and saw Breej standing there near a shop,

Maan too looked out and saw Breej standing there and he looked at Rachi, "what a family yar, sisters scared of their own brother and brother who is ready to hit his sisters," Maan thought disgusted and saw Rachi who was looking hell scared, Maan then held her arms and pulled inside, "if you are this scared about your brother, why did you come out," Maan yelled and Rachi busted into tears,

Maan saw this and felt bad, she was so young and was having the same innocent face as Geet, seeing her cry like this made him feel bad, Maan took a deep breath and held Rachi's shoulders, "Look why do you wander out when you are so scared of your brother." Maan asked softly and Rachi slowly looked at him and wiped her tears with her dupatta and looked at Maan, whose anger was gone, "To call you," she said and Maan looked at her confused,

"Me," Maan asked, "Yes, to call you," she said, "why me," Maan asked slowly, "To tell you something," Rachi said, and Maan looked at her trying to be so calm, "Geet di, asked me to call you and say whatever she said to you yesterday was true," Rachi said and Maan's anger raised up yet he controlled himself and looked at her, "so your sister had put your life in danger to prove she was innocent, very good sister," Maan said,

"You know what Breej is not the one who is dangerous, I think your sister is, so stay away from her," Maan said and turned around, "No Maan ji, Geet di was telling you the truth," Rachi said and Maan was in no mood to argue and so he turned towards her, "Ok, your sister was telling the truth, ok, I believed that, now go home," Maan said and turned around, "And, we need your help," Rachi said and Maan looked at her,

"Help," Maan asked, "yes, we need your help, to save Balveer," Rachi said, "enough," Maan said aloud scaring her and Maan reduced his voice looking at her face, "look, I had enough of your dramas and with that Balveer's, I don't care about anyone, especially in something which your sister is involved, so just go," Maan said frustrated, "please, you are the only one who could help," Rachi said and Maan shook his head, "no, I tried once and I had enough, and if your sister what's any help, let her help herself,"

Maan said and Rachi tried to say something but Maan went away, Maan come to his house when his mind was playing the conversation with Geet and Rachi, "Great one Handa girl was not enough so another one too came to disturb my peace, what the hell is wrong with their family," Maan thought as he walked to and fro, "Maan sir," a voice made him to turn and it was his manager, "found anything," Maan asked turning around,




"Yes sir, we found the agent," he said and Maan looked at him with a smile, "Good," he said "And," Maan asked for further details, "Sir, according to the information, our guys found him near Navi Mumbai area while he was trying to sell a land, he said he will not come to Punjab again, as he was asked not to, he had been given more money to sell the land to us and to get out of the state and never come back," Maan's Manager said everything he knew,

Maan looked at him shocked, "did you ask him who gave him money and who asked him to sell the land" Maan asked and the manager nodded a yes, "Breej Singh Handa" he said, "what?" Maan asked and turned around, "Breej" Maan thought for a minute "On that day, when I went to the Handa Mansion for the first time, and said about the Balveer's land, his family started enquiring me about the land and was acting wired but Breej was so silent, like he don't know anything," Maan said and looked confused,

"And that guy who had been the witness for this transaction, the clerk, he was Breej's friend," Maan thought and his manager went away and Maan started to make a connection, "why should Breej pay to that agent to sell the land and disappear from the state? And his friend is the witness," Maan thought, suddenly Geet's words and Rachi's words came to his mind, " Geet said she was lying to me to save me, and why in the hell Geet wanted those information's and if Breej is involved in it, why didn't she just ask him,"

"What in the world is happening here," Maan thought, "Oh my god, can't believe that I am thinking this, but, I think I need to meet that girl," Maan thought and stood there frustrated,

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Geet was sitting in with Rachi, "Di, what to do, Maan ji, is not ready to hear even a single word," Rachi said, "I know that first even Rachi, but can't blame him, I lied to his face," Geet said feeling sorry, "but if we find something to prove Veer ji's connection with Balveer, or anything to prove against Veer ji, then we can show him that and ask for help, and so he will believe," Geet said, "Like what," Rachi asked,




"Like, come on," Geet said and Pulled Rachi with her and stood near Breej's room, "I will go in and search in Breej Veer ji's room, and see if I can find something, and you stand here and watch," Geet said and went inside Breej's room, Geet started searching and Rachi stood outside, holding her heart, "Di, what are you searching," Rachi asked scared, "I don't know, something, anything, that might help us," Geet said and searched his wardrobe, his cupboards, and everything, but there was nothing,

Geet then flipped his bed and looked under it and her eyes widen with what she saw, there was money, lots of money, bundled up, "how did he get this much money," Geet thought and saw a paper there, and she took it and looked at it, it was an letter, "Breej Veer ji, as said I had sold it and took my share and gave the balance money , and I am going away from this state and never coming back," Geet saw the letter and felt confused, "No to or from address, no name, no sign, nothing, just a message with some much of money, sure this is connected to the land," Geet thought,

"Di, someone is coming," Rachi said and Geet took the letter with her and arranged the bed as before and rushed out, Rachi run away first and Geet followed her, but before she could disappear Breej saw her, "Geet," he thought, "what the hell was she doing near my room," Breej thought and followed her, "Rachi, I found something, now all I had to do is show this to Maan and tell him the details," Geet said, "Rachi," her mom called, and she rushed away nodding and Geet was breathing high.




"I guess you didn't get my words correctly Geet," Breej's voice made her freak out and turn around, "Veer ji," she said looking at Breej's anger face, Breej slowly walked near her and pulled the paper she was holding in her hand which she took from his room, "even after telling you so much, you," Breej said and suddenly he froze for a second, Geet too saw it and turned around and saw Maan walking in to their hall, "Maan" Geet said and tried to scream but before that Breej caught her and closed her mouth with his strong hands, and stood there,


"Maan", Dhar ji's voice made the Maan stop and look at the Handa man's, "What do you want Maan," Dhar ji asked and Maan thought for a second, "If I say I had come to meet Geet, than these guys will create a scene and I too don't want to pull her in, I," Maan thought and looked up, "I came to see Breej," Maan said and Breej, who was hearing this looked at him shocked, and he turned to Geet,

Geet was feeling suffocated as Breej's strong hands was pressing her hard making her difficult to breathe but she was struggling to get free and scream for help, "Breej, what's with Breej," Dhar ji asked, "nothing, I need some information, which Breej has," Maan said and Dhar ji nodded, "ok, Breej, Breej," Dhar ji shouted and Breej don't know what to do, Breej then held Geet and pulled her backwards and took her upstairs, in to a store room,




"Geet, that's it, I don't know why he came, but still if I come to know that you had said something about me and Balveer, then I will kill him, Balveer and Veera for sure, and later I will kill you, I don't want any disturbance in my plan, understand," Breej said holding her neck, and pulled a cloth and tied it around her mouth, and tied her hands and throw her inside the room, and suddenly his phone rang, and Breej took the call and it was Geet's dad,

"Ji," Breej took the call, "Maan had come to see you," he said and Breej thought for a moment, "Tell him I will met him tomorrow morning, now I am in my friend's house will take some time, tell him I will meet him tomorrow," Breej said and kept the phone, "Look here Maan, Breej is not in the house, he said he will come and meet you tomorrow morning, so now you can leave," Geet's dad said and Maan nodded and turned around to leave, but he was still not feel peaceful as he didn't see Geet,

Breej locked Geet up and went to his room and silently went out through the back door, Geet was struggling to get free, "Baba ji, please," Geet thought and was trying her best to loosen up the rope tie made around her hands and thank god, it turned lose, Geet was using all her strength to pull her hand from the rope and finally she did pull her hands from the rope and then removed the cloth in her mouth,

"Baba ji," Geet said and looked around to find a window and found one on the top right corner and Geet looked around and found an old stool and pulled it and stood up on in and looked outside the window, and saw Maan standing right before her view, "Maan, Maan," Geet screamed up, but there was no way Maan could hear her, "Baba ji, what will I do now," Geet thought and pulled her Dupatta and throw it outside the window,




Maan who was standing there, thinking about what to do next, suddenly something covered his face, "What's" Maan said as he pulled the cloth, "Dupatta," Maan said shocked and looked up, "who is there," Maan tried to see and Geet was looking at him, from the window and her face was seen clearly, "Geet," Maan thought and went away from her view, "Baba ji, please, please, making him forget the anger, and come and help me, please," Geet prayed, and got down from the stool and waited for him,

Maan without wasting a minute climbed on the nearby tree and jumped on to a loft above the window and moved and hovered and jumped on to an balcony holding Geet's Dupatta, "great, hope this is the right place, now where to go," Maan thought as he started walking thru the hall way and there were many, "which one is her room, Hell with that girl, can't she come down and see me, that royal princess will throw her Dupatta and I have to take it to her, god, what am I suppose to do, atleast can't she open and keep her door for me,"

Maan thought as he walked up, suddenly he stopped before a closed door, it was locked from outside, "Why do I feel like that girl is here," Maan thought as he looked at the close door, "Maan, why would someone keep her locked up, will they," Maan spoke to himself and took two step up and turned around and opened the door, and went inside, and his instinct was right, Geet was standing there, a small light reflecting on her white skin, which caught Maan's eyes,




Maan turned around and gave her the Dupatta and after a few seconds he turned around as she wear it up, "What the heck is going on in your family, and what's with you brother and sister and that Balveer, what is going on and why are you trying to get my help," Maan asked angered and frustrated, "Ji, I was trying to tell you that only, but you are so anger on me, that you didn't gave me an chance to explain," Geet said slowly,

"first who locked you up here and why," Maan asked, "Breej Veer ji, he caught me searching his room, so he locked me up," Geet said and Maan looked shocked, "Great," he yelled, "you were searching your brother's room and for that he locked you up here," Maan asked, "Yes, when you came and said that you wanted to meet him, he got scared and so to prevent me from talking to you, he did like this," she said shocking Maan more, "Wait, so he was here, when I came, and he lied, and he was stopping you from speaking to me, why," Maan asked, "because he didn't want me to get your help," Geet said,

"My help," Maan asked confused and stopped, "ok, enough, wait, first tell me, what the hell is going around, what's the connection with you and Balveer," Maan asked and Geet started explaining, starting with her friendship with Veera, and about how Veera and Geet's family rules are, and about Breej's private gang, then Veera and Balveer's love and Geet going to the college, and she coming back and Meeting Veera and knowing about Veera's torture and Balveer's disappearing and the Land sale, done my Breej and ended with the note she found Breej's room,"

Maan who was hearing all this was looking shocked, he can't believe what he heard, "is this all true," Maan asked and Geet nodded a big yes, "I can't believe this, such an barbaric act even in this era, how could someone be like this, and your grand pa doesn't say anything about this," Maan asked shocked, "No actually Dhar ji doesn't know this," Geet said, "Why didn't you tell him," Maan hovered,

"I can't tell him without any big proof against Breej Veer ji," Geet said, "well I will tell him, I had enough proofs and I am seeing one before me, who in the hell will lock his own sister like this, heartless fellow," Maan yelled and Geet looked at him shocked, "No, you can't tell now," Geet pleaded looking shock, "I can," Maan said and held Geet's hand and pulled her out with him, "Maan listen to me," Geet said and Maan wasn't hearing her, "Maan" she tried to pull him back but she can't,




Maan was dragging her and walking her fast, suddenly Geet slipped "Maan" she said as she fall off and Maan held her in his arms before her head hit the floor, Maan turned still holding her and Geet too was shocked and felt strangely in his strong arms, her heart started to beat fast and Geet pressed her fingers on his hard muscular arms she was holding and Maan looked at her widen eyes and her small lips and her half scared face, he felt lost in her look, he felt an heat raising inside him and Geet stared right back into the big black eyes and she could she her own imagine in there,

After a few minutes, Maan's mind got back it's sense and he stepped back, "Geet, why are you stopping me," Maan asked as he pulled her back up and made her stand, "because Breej Veer ji will kill Balveer and Veera before that, Balveer is in Breej Veer ji's custody, so before doing anything we have to get Balveer out of his custody and get Veera and Balveer Marriage, then we can say this to Dhar ji, so Breej Veer ji can't do anything," Geet said and Maan looked at her with a grin,

"Not bad, you too can think," Maan said and Geet smiled a bit, "so where is Balveer?" Maan asked, "I am thinking Breej Veer ji must have kept him here somewhere in this mansion even, as all of his guys are rounding in and around the mansion even, so I think he must be hidden him somewhere here," Geet said, "I will go and look around," Maan said and Geet pulled his hands, and Maan looked at her, "Not now Maan, if someone sees you that's all, day after tomorrow, there is a function in our house, so everyone will be busy in it and Breej Veer ji and his guys too will be down with us,"

"To keep an eye on me, so at that time, no one will be in the mansion, and you can search" Geet said and Maan nodded, "Thanks for helping Maan," Geet said and Maan looked at her, "you are not as bad as you seem to be, you know," Geet continued and Maan was feeling some kind of uneasiness with her compliment, "ok, I will go now," Maan said, "Wait," Geet stopped him and Maan looked back, "Now what," Maan asked, "Breej Veer ji should not know about our conversation," Geet said, "Ok, I will not tell him, and will see that he doesn't find it,"

"No, if you leave me free, he will doubt, so lock me inside and go," Geet said and Maan nodded and went and stood near the door, "Get in," Maan said and Geet too got in, "Maan," she called and Maan went in, Geet then took the rope and the white cloth and gave it to him, "what's this," Maan asked, "Breej Veer ji, tied it in my hands and mouth, somehow I released myself, so you tie these back on me, or else he will have some doubt," Geet said and Maan looked at her innocent face,

"That guy tied you up with these," Maan felt an anger to rip Breej's head off, Maan then got the cloth and tied around her mouth and the Geet turned back, holding her hands behind and Maan slowly tied it, and don't know why he felt an sharp pain in his heart as he was doing that, then he turned Geet around and she signed for him to go,

Maan looked at her big brown eyes and her innocent face and without his own knowledge he touched her cheeks, shocking Geet and held it and looked at her, and Geet too looked at his dark eyes beginning to soften and she felt like melting into his hold and his look, "Maan, what are you doing," his mind pulled him up and Maan took his hands suddenly and without looking at her he went away and locked the door from outside,

"Baba ji, thank you, Thank you so much," Geet prayed and sat there,

Precap: Search for Balveer, (on Thursday)
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OHHH MY GOD MAAN KO SAB PATA CHAL GYA
MAIN FIRST YAHOOO
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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DHIKA CHIKA FIRST TIME MAIN IS FF PAI
BREEJ BACHOOO AB MAAN SINGH KHURANA SAY GEET KO LOCK KIYA NA
MAAN SINGH KHURANAH KI POWER KO USE KARNA THA NA
AB ISKI POWER DEKHO
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nice part
maan came to know everything now..good😊
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awesome update..
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finally maan came to know the truth...
hope they will able to find balveer
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superb update maan knowing truth
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awesome update...breej is such a monster...😡...I wish maan rip his head off...maan now knows everything & is shocked to know about it...he is feeling sharp pain in his heart to see geet in such a horrible condition...well offcourse u are hurt because u like her...waiting for maaneet to meet balveer & save him & then veera & balveer's marriage...
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! So it ws Maan! Rachi tells Maan tht Geet ws telling him the truth! N they need his help! Bt Maan leaves! Adi calls n tells abt Breej! Maan goes to HM to see Breej! Breej catches Geet in his room n locks her! Maan saves her! Maan shocked seeimng her like dat! Geet tells him everything! Maan surprised! Even if Darji knew he sld support Breej! Bith are alike!update soon! Well written! Unable to read updates frm 31 Jan to 22 Feb -on holiday! Js tellin u in advance! Do pm - will catch up! Thanks
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THANK GOD MAAN GOT TO KNOW EVERYTHING AND BELIEVED GEET FINALLY
NOW HE WILL HELP GEET IN FINDING BALVEER
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OMG nail biting chapter yaar...

now Maan knows everything...

ab Balveer ka to jo bhi kuch ho but Maan is attracted towards Geet...

but Geet is engaged and going to get married to another person...

how will Maan-Geet love blossom...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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