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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

nice

geet puting maan in trouble

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

part 9
nice...
OMG poor Geet...
that Brij well he should get his own due punishment in most the tortured way...
and Maan said the truth...
Geet now knows that Maan bought the land...
hope she tells him soon...

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Read All the parts.

Geet family is mad. Especially Brij n Darji. Hate them for treating Geet like this.
Geet marriage fixed.

Geet wants to help Veera n Balveer but she has to bear a lot for helping them. Brij is doing too much. Locking her for two days, burning her hand.

Maan hating Geet to core. But still helping her. Wish he gets to know how her family is ill treating her.

Continue soon.

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

nice part
darji burnt geet's hand
geet went to meet maan again
precap...interesting

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

interestin update! Thanks 4 da pm! Maan angry wen he sees her! she thinks he will hit her bt he assures her! She faints! Maan takes her home n clears nay doubt before he leaves! Geet is punished! So cruel family! She bravely accepts it! She is so worried abt Veera n helping her tht she is nt worried abt wt il happen to her! Hate her family! Lovely song! Fab pics! Geet again goes to Maan! He confronts her! Maan attracted to her! Superbly written! update soon

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

even after bearing so many accusations and torures, geeti s still determned to help her friend

and maan cant stop thinking about her

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

I Hate You Means I Love You,

Part 11
Breej's thread

Maan's heart beat was raising up with an unknown feel, Maan took a deep breath controlling himself and turned around and closed his eyes, calming himself, "Go home Geet," Maan said turning around, but Geet wasn't moving a bit, "Geet get out," Maan yelled, "No," Geet said shocking Maan, Maan turned towards her, "What, Geet I said go home," Maan yelled, "Not until I have the information I need," Geet said stubbornly, "Is this your time for gathering information,"

"Please, listen to be once," Geet pleaded, "Geet, are you foolish or trying to fool me, at mid of this night, you came here for information, do I look like a fool," Maan asked grinning up, "I don't know what you want and stop fooling around and go home," Maan said and as Geet didn't move, he pulled her to turned her around, "Ouch," Geet winced as Maan held her palms and Maan saw her pain and he looked at her hand he was hold and was shocked to see the burn mark, his anger was gone in the minute as he saw the marks, "What the hell is this, how did you get this," Maan asked out,

"Punishment for seeing you today," Geet said, and Maan looked at her shocked, "and still you came here to see me, why," Maan asked, "because I wanted to know about Balveer," Geet said slowly, "what information," Maan asked slowly, "anything about him," Geet said, "look, I don't know about him much," Maan said, "But he is your seller right," Geet asked, "no, I bought it from an agent,"

"Agent, who is he," Geet asked, "oh, only my staffs knew, if you need I will get and give to you," Maan said and Geet nodded an ok, "Thank you," Geet said slowly, and went away and Maan saw her go out, she walked slowly, the darkness was scary, while coming she come in some guts and it was a little reduced now, "Geet," Maan voice made her to stop and looked around, and she saw Maan walking towards her, "it's too dark, I will walk with you," Maan offered and Geet looked at him surprised,

"He is so strange, two minutes before he hated me, I think still he does but still, he is concern about me, so strange," Geet thought as she walked with him, they didn't speak another word, as they reached the mansion and Maan turned to leave, "thank you," Geet said and Maan nodded and went away and Geet went inside and Breej who was coming from his night patrol duty saw this, "Damn it, Geet," Breej thought, and saw Geet went inside her, Geet walked slowly towards her room, when someone held her wrist,

Geet got scared and turned around and saw Breej's big eyes, "Veer ji," Geet looked shocked and her fear hit high, "Shhh," Breej silenced her and pulled her towards empty space behind the stairs and looked around, "Geet, what were you doing with Maan, this late, why did he come here," Breej asked, "Baba ji, Veer ji is thinking that Maan came here," Geet thought but didn't say anything,

"Geet, I will not say to anyone about this, but tell me what was he doing here, did you tell him to come here," Breej asked calmly, Geet was so scared and Breej speaking so calmly without any anger was even more scary, he had never talked like this, "Veer ji," Geet said and she had no words, "Geet, I know what you are up to, Balveer right, so only you made Maan to enquiry about him right," Breej asked, "No Veer ji," Geet said,

"Geet, if you want to know about Balveer, why didn't you ask me," Breej said shocking Geet, "Look, Balveer is ok, he is in Veera's brother's custody, in one week Veera's marriage will be over and she will go to Canada and then he will release Balveer, and no harm will happen to anyone," Breej said slowly, "But," Breej voice changed and Geet looked at him with her scared eyes,

"But if you try to do anything, anything at all against our will, Either Balveer nor Veera nor you new friend Maan, no one will be safe," Breej said and Geet's eyes widened up, "Geet, this is my last warning or advice whatever you want to take it as, take it, but remember I am serious about it, if I ever, ever get any doubt about you trying to do something about that Veera nor Balveer," Breej said as he pampered her head, scaring her to hell,

"I will not do anything to you, but those two and that Maan will be dead, you want them happy or you want them alive, you even decide," Breej said and Geet looked at him in fear, "you want them alive, right" Breej asked and Geet nodded a yes in fear, "good, now go and sleep, go, and forget about that Balveer and Veera, just for their own good, go," Breej said and Geet nodded and went towards her room, Breej grinned and went away, Geet went to her room and sat on her bed,

Breej words was so powerful and she can't believe that he confused and he also threatened, but Geet knew that he will not only stop with threatening he will also do what he said and it scared her, she was scared to hell, her tears were rolling down her cheeks without any stop, she become blank and she slowly climbed up in her bed and covered her with her blanket and slept off,

The next day started well for all except for Geet, she was still scared of Breej, Breej didn't go out and was keeping an eye on Geet, it was afternoon 2 and everyone was having their own talks and works, when Maan entered the house, "Maan," Dhar ji looked at him paused and Breej blocked his way, "What do you want Maan," Breej asked, "I need to see Geet," Maan said and everyone stood up and looked at him shocked,

"Geet?" Dhar ji asked, "She asked for something, and so, I need to give it to her," Maan said and Dhar ji looked at Maan puzzled, "she asked you something," Dhar ji asked puzzled, "Ji, he is lying, why would Geet ask him anything, no way," Breej jumped in, "Really, then ask Geet even," Maan said and Dhar ji nodded and called Geet, Geet who was in her room in her own thoughts jumped up with his voice,

Geet slowly went towards the hall and saw Maan, suddenly she had an urge to run towards him and hug him and pour her fears out but she controlled herself and walked towards him, Maan too saw Geet and went near her, Breej too went and stood near him, "Geet you don't need to talk to him," Breej said, "Breej, stay away," Dhar ji said as he wanted to know what's happening, and Breej too went and stood behind such as Geet could see him,

"Geet, here is the document copy of the land transfer, all the details are in it, I got it from the regional office today morning, you can have the information's you need and give me back later," Maan said as he gave her the document, and Geet looked at Breej, Breej looked at Geet and turned to away and looked at something and Geet too followed his glance and found what he was looking at, he was looking at swords hanging on the wall and then he looked at Maan,

Geet understood what he was trying to tell, and Geet stood still and Maan looked at her confused, "Maan, what's wrong with you, you only said that Geet is going behind you and now it looks like you are behind her, first you said she saw her in Amritsar by chance, then said she came to your land by chance and then now you are coming and saying Geet asked some documents," Breej said and Maan looked at him,

"Why would Geet need some documents, that too from you, Maan, she is an innocent girl, just leave her alone," Breej said provoking Maan's anger, "Listen, your innocent girl only came to me yesterday night to my place and asked for the documents related to," Maan spoke, and before Maan could say Balveer's name Breej interfered, "Maan, don't you dare say like that, you are saying My sister had come to your place all alone at night to met you, stop it Maan, she is going to get married soon and," Breej said,

"Look here, I am begging you, please don't spread rumors like this, Geet is innocent and please leave her alone, you are rich and this might be a game for you but it's her life, please, leave my child," Geet's mom cried up, and Maan was irritated to the very core and turned to Geet, who was killing herself inside her heart, she was in tears, she can't hear the blame imposed on Maan or could say something,

"Geet, why are you silent, open up your damn mouth and tell them the truth," Maan yelled, "Yes Geet, remember what happened yesterday night, did you see him yesterday night," Breej asked and what he meant was his threat he imposed on Geet, "tell Geet, don't be scared, did you see him yesterday night," Breej asked pressing his words and Geet looked at Breej and looked at Maan, her tears flowed unstopped, she knew what she is gonna say and she knew that she is gonna break him up, "No," Geet said out loud between her tears and Maan was taken by shock, "I didn't go," Geet said

Maan looked at her shocked and his anger raising up, Geet could feel his heat raising up and she wasn't able to stand there, so she ran away crying up, Maan was so hurt, he didn't believe what he heard, he was hurt to the core, "Geet" Maan yelled as Geet hide herself behind the door, "I just thought you were innocent and crazy, but never thought you would be such an back stabber, for a few hours I felt pity on you for the pain you had, but a girl like you, deserves more pain I guess"

"Enough Maan, Leave," Breej jumped, "and don't come here or try to meet Geet" Breej said, "please leave my child alone, please, don't spoil her future, please, you will find million other girls, but leave my child," Geet's mom cried, making Maan to feel more irritated, he turned around and flew away from that place, Geet who was hearing everything cried her heart out, "Baba ji will never forgive me for this, I had broken his heart, I gave him pain," Geet thought and the thought gave her more pain,

After two hours after Maan went away, everything went well, Geet was in her room, when her mom called her, "Geet, I am going to the Bazaar, you need anything," she asked, "what Bazaar, no, you have so many work in the house," Geet's aunty said, "Maa, I will go," Geet said slowly, "say what you need," Geet asked, but Geet mom's first turned to Breej who was looking at the conversation and Geet to saw him,

"Ok, Let Geet go," Breej said, and Geet's mom looking confused, "Come on, we have to trust our girl, and she knew what will happen if she does any mistakes, so let's give her a chance," Breej said and Geet could see the warning in his tone, and Geet's mom said an ok and Geet went to the Bazaar with the list, Geet was in the Bazaar purchasing the item but her mind was thinking only of Maan,

Geet turned around and she heard a jeep's noise, for some strange reason she identified the noise, she turned around and saw Maan, he stopped the jeep as he saw Geet and jumped from his jeep, Geet was scared as she knew how anger he would be now, he was already an volcano and now he was provoked too, he slowly took his coolers and walked towards her, his eyes wasn't pouring the anger she expected but his calm and cool look made Geet even more scared.

Maan walked slowly towards her and Geet felt her heart beat raising and went backwards, but she was so slowly that Maan reached her close in no time, Geet could feel the raising heat in his body, the heat was creating an scary vibration around them, Geet walked back and Maan moved forward, Geet wanted him to yell, but Maan was calm, she was wishing he would slap her up, as that would be acceptable than his silence,

Geet as she walked, she suddenly hit the tree behind, and she turned to look at the tree, and turned to Maan who was closing on to her, Geet felt an sudden nervousness as he calmly gaining over her, she had no hint what's in his mind, but whatever it was, it made her shaken up, as Maan came so close, she tried to move and Maan blocked her way by keeping her hand on the tree and he came more close,

Geet looked at him and his reaction didn't change and Geet begin to get another kind of fear and she tried to move the other side and Maan blocked that way too, Geet was like she would faint, the more close he came her heart started to beat fast, that it would bust off, there was only a few inches of space between and Maan moved a bit closer kill that space between them and Geet slowly looked at him and his dark eyes shining and she felt captured in it and stood still, looking at him,

Just waiting for his yelling, slapping or whatever he is up to, she was ready for him, his hot breathe was touching her skin and it was so hot, she looked straight into his eyes and saw the her own face in his eyes and she felt ashamed for betraying him and hurting him by her lies before her family, she can't do that, she can't let him thinking bad about her, it was more hurting, she decided to explain herself and ask his forgiveness,

Precap: will he ever forgive her...