MG- SS-The Mist-Thread - 9 - UPDATED Pt 80/Pg 125/7th Jan. ... ... - Page 84

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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Hi sona...
how r u..??
how is ur tooth..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😲😲 kal aai hi nahi aur aaj jaldi jana hei..very bad..

kal net cnect hi nehi hua ,,,kya kartee,,,
hubby ke frend ne aana hei,,,jab tak nehi aate mein yehi rehungii,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

hello babie, lakshu

babie maine bataya tha na meri cousin ki wife pregnant thi 9th month today she delivered baby girl dono teek hai


😃😃 WOW!!!!! gr8 yaar... thank god they got their bundle of happiness after a long wait..


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Posted: 11 years ago
me f9 yar but net is not:(
grrr waiting fr update babie:)
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Posted: 11 years ago


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All of u...




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 80



Maan slept turning his back but a sweet smile was adoring his lips* he knew that he hit d right cord * he trusted her and knew that she surly would choose d right side and this time he was right .

Geet was in deep thought ,, 1 side is family and other side her ego * she knew that Maan is right this time * she couldn't ignore his efforts for making their relation better * She thought on every aspects then at d files in her lap and slept after taking a decision .


Maan got up in d morning and left without talking to her * he knew that she was in dilemma and facing a fight between her mind and heart so let her take her own decision * wo jo bhi decision le, lekin mai uski baat maan lunga aur Dev se direct kuch nahi kahunga . He went to office and got busy coz of work load even he didn't ring at home * he realised d time when Dadima called him and asked why he was getting late today?


He rushed to home and remembered his last night convo with Geet * tonight he has to talk to YSK on this matter * according to Geet advised he ordered Adi to place a heavy order for all their N*R sites to that Co. When he entered in KM his heartbeats raised and felt nervous thinking about her decision ... 1st time in his life he was feeling this nervousness * her acceptance and refusal would show her feelings for him tonight . He wished Dadima and YSK and looked around in d hall but Geet was not there * Dadima informed him that they had taken their diner and Geet is waiting for u .


Maan: Dad, Dadima after diner i want to talk to both of u regarding some office matter.


YSK: OK , call me in Maa's room when u have finished .


Maan nodded and went to his room but 1st he turned towards Geet room and went in * he looked all around but she was not there * he looked d time and came out confused ... kahan chali gai iss time, necche bhi nahi thi ? Dadima ne kaha ki wo diner ke liye mera wait ker rahi hei .


In his thoughts he entered in his room but rooted at his place * whole room was illuminated with scented candles and flowers * his heart skipped a beat and dragged his feet inside * he put his office bag on d sofa, removed his vest coat and tie * he scanned d room and then study but she was not there * he felt a zephyr coming from d terrace door * he moved that side with thudding heart and find her standing at d last corner of d roof looking in d dark * she was in a saree which he bought for her * he came right behind her and stood silently * She too sensed his presence behind her inhaling his fragrance * he took s corner of d saree and covered her bare shoulder which was tantalizing him * she looked at him with a lil pain in her eyes * Maan: Geet , agar tumhara dil esse sahi nahi manta to matt mano meri baat * no more compromises.


Geet: aapko sahi lagta hei ?


Maan: haan , kunki tumhari sahi jagah yahin hei , tumhe ne kaha tha na ki wo ek bad phase tha life ka to ussme ku wapis bhejna chahati ho mujhe ?


Geet: lekin maine to essa kabhi nahi chaha.


Maan: janta hu , tumne humare rishtey ko jinda rakkha hei * i know it's tough for u but thanks Geet for saving this relation and for everything * thanks for coming in my life.

He packed on her forehead and scooped her in his arms and moved in d room * settled her on d bed he sat near her and fixed her lose strands .


Maan: bandage bhi change kerna hei na ?


She nodded in yes and reply slowly : leg aur belly ka meine ker liya bas hand rahati hei , wo ek haath se... ( Maan cut her words)


Maan: i'll do that , tum rest karo mei Nakul ko diner ke liya order kerta hu , hhmm.


Geet: u go and change i'll do that .


Maan: jo hukum , he smiled and got up to change .


After diner he changed her bandage in her room and then told her to come with him to talk to Dadima and Dad.


Maan: Geet , one more thing ... wo room humara hei , tum jaise chahe usse use ker sakti ho aur mujhe meri special coffee bhi pahale ke jaise chahiye ,, milegi na ?


She hummed with a nod and got up to go with him taking d files with her .


They were in Dadima's room and called YSK there * Maan showed him d bills and d wrong quotations with amount * YSK was shocked with this reality Dadima too became tense * both were angry on Dev's negligence and carelessness .


YSK: Maan we can't take legal action on these bills and they r doing this knowingly to fetch money .


Dadima : but how would we cover this big lose , we can't break d contract coz that was legal and they could fine us for breaking it in mid of term.


Maan: Dadima contract 1yr ka tha aur 1month hi rahata hei complete hone mei * humne kaafi extra order daal diya hei jiski supply 2-3 din mei aa jayegi .


Geet : hum last bill aur next bills ka payment nahi karenge and i'm sure ki wo iss bar bhi gab-bad jaroor karenge bills mei aur uska hum benefit lenge unhe blame kerke.


YSK : Guddu tum janti ho ye Co kiski hei ?


Geet: nahi .


YSK: Maan tum ?


Maan: no Dad , Dev dekhta hei sab.


YSK: ye Mahi ki Co thi jo usne tumhari shaadi ke baad chod di Brij ke favour mei , even office aur ghar bhi . mujhe laga Guddu ko pata hoga.

Mahi to FH shift ho gaya ye usne ab bataya mujhe Dev ki shaadi mei * ye sab Froude uss Brij ne kiye hei . Mai mahi se baat kerta hu ess bare mei.


Geet: abhi nahi Dad , at least humari sab supply aane tak ye baat leak matt karo . I'll handle this in my ways.


Dadima: Geet ,Mahi ko to batana hi hoga na , contract to ussi ke sath tha.


Geet: hum ku batayenge , jiska bill rukega wo apne aap batayega , humse advice leker ya inform kerke Co di thi kya kisi ko * contract jiske sath tha usse hi complete kerna chaiye tha na .


YSK: Guddu kya ye sahi hoga ? Galti to dev ki bhi hei usne pahale hi bills check ku nahi kiye agar carefully check kerta to lose nahi hota aur wo aage repeat nahi kerty.


Geet: who gave them right to change d quotation ?


Maan: Geet they had sent fair bills with right quotation and these bills with wrong because these r out of record bills * they played smartly .


Geet: hmmm ,, no prob , aane do bill leker .



Precap - Geet faced Brij ...


Part - 81

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3877617/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-10-updated-pt-85-pg-123-12th-jan?pn=14






Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 1st:)
:) Awesome lovely update yar:)
eagerly waiting to see Sherni Geet Maan Singh Khurana in front of Brij:)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
geet tod maan about file and froud and maan as expected got angry and wanted to call him back
so maan has put a condition in front of geet
waiting to know geets decision
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Posted: 11 years ago
badhayian,,,,🥳
aise hi hari reha karo,,,fir dekhna har roz ist,,,,,😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃😃 WOW!!!!! gr8 yaar... thank god they got their bundle of happiness after a long wait..


congrts priya,,,,😃

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