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Part 1 - Mera Mahi Tu

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The crowd was gathered in the courtyard and the stage was setup. The band was taking their postions and the crowd was pumped. It was always tradition for the band to play for the college before they performed in each round of the competition and this was the time that they really needed the support of their friends. Delhi College's Melody Maestros had reached the semi final in the Battle of the Bands and were scheduled to perform the next day. Aryan, Vicky, Pari and Naina took their places on stage and everything was set. The crowd was chanting and at that very moment she walked on center stage everyone went quite. Geet put the mike on the stand and held it tight, bracing herself. The music was soft, not what they usually played, yet still had the same effect. She closed her eyes and started singing softly...

Heer teri keedan jaraa ve
Ve main ki kara, ki kara
Haaniya..

How can I bear the pain
What should I do, what should I
My beloved...

Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate,You're my lover
You're my soulmate,You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
She opened her eyes slowly looking into the crowd singing... Not what she had rehearsed but what she felt. It was the one way in which she could let her feelings out without anyone judging her, taunting her or show her their disappointment.
Rab hai raazi jo tu hai raazi,
Tu hai raazi
Tu hi mera maula aur kaazi,
Rab hai raazi jo tu hai raazi,
Tu hai raazi
Tu hi mera maula aur kaazi,
My god is with me if you're with me
You're with me
You're my god and you're my guiding light
My god is with me if you're with me
You're with me
You're my god and you're my guiding light

Her eyes wondered through the crowd. Lost. Looking for something. For someone.

Suni suni si yeh saari raahe ve,
Tujh ko tarse meri nigaahe ve,
Mujh ko tujh mein fanna ho jaane de,
Teri baahon mein mujhe kho jane de,
My life is so secluded,
My eyes are desperately searching for you
I want to destroy myself in your love,
Please embrace me in your arms,

Ankhiyan nu rehn de ankhiyan de kol ko,
Chann pardesiya ve bol paavein na bol
Ankhiyan nu rehn de...
Rehn de, akhiyan de kol

Keep your eyes close to mine,
Darling foreigner whether you talk to me or not,
Keep your eyes...
Keep them close

Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu

You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate,You're my lover
You're my soulmate,You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover

Her sight fell on two figures near the back of the crowd under the tree. They were standing hand in hand, one with a huge smile and the other with a look of sadness and perhaps even regret. Geet's eyes met with the latter. That was where they stayed as she sang the next verse of the song.
Tujhe dhekhu main bheegi aankhon se,
Dil har pal hai toote taare saa..
Har raat jalun din din pighlun main..
Teri chahat mein hoon awaara saa..
I look at you with teary eyes,
My heart is like a shooting star..
Every night I burn and each day I melt
I've become a vagabond in your love..

Suni suni si yeh sari raahe ve,
Tujh ko tarse meri nigahe ve,
Mujh ko tujh mein fanna ho jane de,
Teri baahon main mujhe kho jane de,
My life is so secluded
My eyes are desperately searching for you
I want to destroy myself in your love,
Please embrace me in your arms

She could feel the tears burning her eyes, blurring her vision. It stabbed at her heart to see Maan with someone else. Their relationship that everyone called unbreakable wasn't after all. All it took was one major misunderstanding on his part and everything they had crumbled.
Ankhiyan nu reain de ankhiyan de kol ko,
Chann pardesiya ve bol paavein na bol,
Ankhiyan nu rehn de
Rehn de, akhiyan de kol

Keep your eyes close to mine,
Darling foreigner whether u talk to me or not,
Keep your eyes...
Keep them close

Even standing so far away from the stage Maan could still see Geet's tears. No one knew how to read her eyes like he could and her eyes were like an open book. If you read it and understood it, you'd find the answers to everything in them. She thought it had only hurt her but everything that happened, hurt him twice as much as it hurt her. He knew what she was feeling. Not just because of the song but because despite being separated their hearts were still one. No matter how hard they tried to hate or even forget each other they never could. Their hearts would never let them. Maan let go of Shaina's hand and walked away. He couldn't stay there any longer. Not without doing something rash.
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
Mahi tu
Mera raanjhan tu
Mera mahi tu, mera raanjhan tu
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate,You're my love
You're my soulmate,You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover
You're my soulmate
You're my lover
You're my soulmate, you're my lover

Geet watched him walk away knowing very well that despite what he told her, despite breaking their relationship, he was hurting every bit as much as she was. She knew that this didn't just affect her but affected Maan just as much. A few seconds later she saw Shaina run after Maan. What hurt Geet the most wasn't the fact that he had left her for someone else. She would have even been happy for him had it been someone else. Someone that he liked. Not just Geet but everyone else knew that the only reason Maan was with Shaina was because she was the reason that Maan and Geet were no longer together. She had pretended to be an innocent victim and made Geet the guilty one.

As the last note played the crowd maintained their silence. They were awestruck by the band's performance. They had never heard this kind of music played by the band. They were used to the rocking, crowd pumping music that usually emitted from the band. They stood their blown away. Aryan walked up beside Geet and took the mic from her, knowing very well that she was in no state to speak. That's how she had been the past month. Not herself. She always wanted to be alone and whenever she wasn't performing or wasn't in lectures she was always writing music. The band had to admit that it was the best music they had had but it wasn't worth losing Geet for it. "Thanks everyone for supporting us today. It was a huge risk for us to try something new in the competition tomorrow and we're sure that if you guys loved it everyone else will. Please do come to support us at the competition tomorrow because without the support from all our friends we'd never be able to get this far. Enjoy the rest of your day guys," with that Aryan switched off the mic and the band embraced the cheer coming from the crowd.

The crowd had cleared and the band began packing up. Naina shoved her guitar in its case and walked over to Geet. She had noticed for a while that Geet was sitting alone on the edge of the stage not talking to anyone. Geet was always the most excited for the competition but it seemed that since a month ago the girl that is their friend isn't Geet but someone else. "Geet," Naina called her tapping her shoulder. Geet turned around and saw Naina standing behind her. She looked at Naina and the turned back to look at the empty courtyard. Geet was like a sister to Naina and Naina didn't have to ask her to know what was wrong.

There was an empty space in Geet's life without Maan. He came so suddenly and so quickly that Geet didn't even realize when she fell in love. Naina still remembered the day when Geet swore she she'd never love anyone. She had been broken once before and just managed to put herself back together. Geet had gotten engaged to her father's best friend's son a few years ago, despite being reluctant. She reasoned with herself that maybe it won't be so bad. It was what her father wanted and so she couldn't deny him. Slowly Geet got accustomed to her fiance and did fall in love with him but months before their wedding he left. He broke her and left. Not justifying what he did and why he did it. He just did it and left. Naina knew that Geet was strong but she wasn't sure Geet was strong enough to put herself back together a second time. She knew that Geet had vowed not to love after Arnav had left her but Maan came into her life like a tornado. He shook everything up and made her fall in love again, then left. What Geet had felt for Maan was more than love. It was as if she had become a part of him and he had become a part of her. Without Geet, Maan was incomplete and without Maan, Geet was incomplete. Now there was no one and no way to fill up that empty space in her life. Everybody was worried about her. Not just Naina but Aryan, Pari and Vicky as well. The time that band spent together turned them into the greatest of friends and even Maan had become a part of them but everything happened so suddenly.

Naina watched get hop off the edge and land on the ground. "Geet where are you going?" Naina called after her but she just walked away silently. Everyone had by now been waiting for Geet to say something or even do something but they had gotten nothing. They looked at Naina expectantly. "She needs space. She'll open up in her own time. We've just got to give her the time," Naina said close to tears. Aryan wrapped his arms around her knowing how shaken she was with the whole situation. She was Geet's sister' after all. "Naina," she looked to Vicky who had called her, "we've got to do something. We can't give her time and we can't let her open up. She'll break and you know that. As it is she's driving herself crazy writing all these songs. We've all heard her sing them; we've all heard the lyrics. If that's what she's feeling and that's what she's going through we have to do something and do it now. Otherwise we won't be able to save her," Vicky said, worry audible in his voice.

Naina looked at Aryan as if to tell him something and walked off towards her car. She got in and drove off headed towards the biggest house in the city Khurana Mansion. She couldn't help but remember how it all started.

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Next: Flashback 😉

Sorry guys. I will only be able to send pm's later this evening when I'm free so will do it then but they will definitely be sent. 😊
Edited by riyasc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update



Geet is in pain and let It out though her songs

What happened in the past would be interesting to read


Plz pm me next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan kabhi geet k baat nehi sunta...humesha doosrek baat sunta hai...

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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GEET AND MAAN HAVE BROKEN UP AND GEET IS LETTING HER PAIN OUT THROUGH HER SONGS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! Emotional update! Feeling 4 Geet! She n Maan broke up n he is wid Shaina! HEr sis Naian is worried abt her! Geet emoting through her songs! update soon! Well written! cld nt wait 4 pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply fabulous
loved it
loving the way the story is shaping up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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your new story sounds interesting!! Thank you for the PM and I look forward to this one!!😊
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Teaser

It had been a few days since he had been at college and Aryan had filled him in on the festival and how everything else runs at the college. Aryan had also invited him to watch the band's performance. He stood in the middle of the wild crowd watching and was awestruck at the petite girl standing, holding a mic in the centre of the stage. She was breathtakingly beautiful and had a voice of an angel. His eyes were glued to her and only moved when Aryan and Vicky started singing again.

Maan was about to walk out of the crowd when he heard her voice again. He couldn't mistake it. It was that beautiful. He turned back to see her singing again and stood awestruck once again. His gaze never wondered. Now he knew what his father meant about love at first sight. It was something that rarely happened, but when it did, you knew what happened.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2: Dhunki

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=etPRKWWji0Y[/YOUTUBE]

It was a month into the semester of the new year and everybody was amped for the annual competition. Because of the fact that there were so many musicians on campus every year the college would hold the Annual College Band Festival which would determine who would represent the college that year at Battle of the Bands. This year was supposed to be the most spectacular festival due to the amount of talent and bands that were up against each other. Bands preformed for days for the college faculty and students and finally the time had come. They were three bands between which everybody was torn, so as a tie breaker they were to do a public performance which would decide. There was one band left, Melody Maestros, still to perform. Everybody liked the band but was a little skeptical about their teamwork because of the mix of 3rd and 4th year. There had never been a band like that and everybody wasn't sure how well it was going to work. They cheered nonetheless hoping everything of the best for them.

Geet took the mic as the rest took their place on stage. Naina started with the guitar and Aryan and Vicky began with the vocals. It was a really upbeat song and they knew everybody would love it. As Aryan and Vicky sang everybody started screaming and cheering.
Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy

Geet grabbed her mic at centre stage and started singing. The crowds cheers grew even louder and a smile spread across Geet's face.
Ishq fikar da chadde palla
Maujein karta ho ke jhalla, jee ve
Ishq mein dilda hoya fakeeri
Maange sab ki khair sukhalla, jee ve
Gira deewarein, laga lalkaarein
Ishq di masti de vich sauvey te jaage
Love makes you leave all the tensions behind
It makes you enjoy and go crazy, it lives on
In love the heart becomes a beggar
Then asks for the good will from others, it lives on
Tear down the walls, make an outcry
In the fun-filled love, I sleep and I'm awake

Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune

It had been a few days since he had been at college and Aryan had filled him in on the festival and how everything else runs at the college. Aryan had also invited him to watch the band's performance. He stood in the middle of the wild crowd watching and was awestruck at the petite girl standing, holding a mic in the centre of the stage. She was breathtakingly beautiful and had a voice of an angel. His eyes were glued to her and only moved when Aryan and Vicky started singing again.
Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy

Maan was about to walk out of the crowd when he heard her voice again. He couldn't mistake it. It was that beautiful. He turned back to see her singing again and stood awestruck once again. His gaze never wondered. Now he knew what his father meant about love at first sight. It was something that rarely happened, but when it did, you knew what happened.
Laad na dil ko har basher
Ishq da changa hai asar
Kar le khud se hi pyaar bandeya
Hai jahaan ki tujhko khabar
Khudse hai par tu bekhabar
Lai lai apni vi saar bandeya
Gira deewarein, laga lalkaarein
Ishq di masti de vich sauvey te jaage
Don't pamper the heart everyday
Love has a happy impact
Start loving yourself guy
You know everything about the world
But you are unaware of your own love
Take care of yourself too, Guy
Tear down the walls, make an outcry
In the fun-filled love, I sleep and I'm awake

Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Ho Dhunki Laage Ve
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Ho Dhunki Laage Ve
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune

Tu hawa paani aag hai
Tu daga daani daag hai
Jo bhi chaave tu woh bann jaave re
Hai bana mera dil khuda
Hai khuda kab mujhse judaa
Khudko dhoonde toh usko paave re
Gira deewarein, laga lalkaarein
Ishq di masti de vich sauvey te jaage
You are air, water and fire
You are a betrayal, a donor and a stain
Whatever you wish for, You become
My heart has become my God
My God is never separated from me
When I find myself, I find Him
Tear down the walls, make an outcry
In the fun-filled love, I sleep and I'm awake

Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki Laage
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune
She's stuck in her own tune

Maan watched the entire performance and cheered along with the crowd as Aryan and Vicky brought the song to a close. The crowd was still cheering and dancing. It was obvious that there would be no second guessing the winner of the festival.
Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy
My heart has gone on a wild frenzy

The crowd had cleared and the courtyard was almost abandoned except for the one lonely figure standing in the middle. The band was packing up and Aryan noticed him, "Maan!" he yelled. Maan looked at Aryan and saw him signalling him to come to them. Maan made his way to the stage and greeted everybody with a quick hi. Aryan hugged him and introduced him to everyone, "Maan, you already know Vicky. This is Pari, my sister and our bass player, Naina, our guitar player," he said as he pointed to them. "And that's Geet, our singer," he said indicating to a hunched figure sitting on the edge of the stage. Aryan noticed Maan walk towards Geet and sit down beside her. He shook his head and turned his attention to Naina.
Geet didn't notice Maan sit down beside her but was rather engrossed in scribbling away. She felt that she was on the verge of writing a masterpiece. Not for the competition, but for her collection. They were generally songs that just came to mind or was something she was thinking about. The songs from her collection were always used during practice to have some fun or when someone wanted to join the band. That was always the best part for Geet. People always generally thought that they could sing better than Geet so when it came time to audition Geet gave them the sheet music to her songs and told them to sing it. She had fun watching them struggle to read the music as well as sing, but she was never the one to turn them down. That was Aryan's job. She had scribbled down the last line and turned to her right noticing the figure looking at her intently. She looked at him curiously, "You are?" she asked politely. Maan was brought back to reality, "Oh...uhm... sorry. I'm Maan. I joined college a few days ago. I'm friends with Aryan." Geet's lips broke into a wide smile. "Well why didn't you meet us earlier? Any friend of Aryan's is a friend of ours," Geet said enthusiastically. Maan looked at her awestruck. He couldn't believe this girl. She was amazing. He had never come across anyone like her.
"Hey Geet!" Aryan called, "we're heading back to my place to rehearse for tomorrow. Are you coming?" Maan and Geet both stood up and Maan said a soft bye' and turned to leave when he felt someone grab his arm, pulling him back. "Where do you think you are going?" Geet questioned him. He looked at Geet blankly. "You're coming with us. You're our friend now. So where we go, you come," she said grinning and dragging him to her car.

Precap: Raabta
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Edited by riyasc - 11 years ago
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lovely update dear
thanks for the pm

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