Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 41

passionate and romantic update. so much passiion oozing out from both of them. just fabulous.

last update for chavvi16 who guess that maan can't disappear for whole day for only waist chain😉 this part 23 is not in mind today i want to write on their sangeet function , but when i hear this song on tv just lost in our maaneet memory and cant stop my self from written this part so

part 23

both just turn breathless with their passion and desire , both just make crazy each other ,just than maan mummer thanks in geet ear , and plant a kiss on her bare shoulder , and moan ohhh misty , iwant to make you mine , now itself , geet just open her eyes and say in detramation voice , than make me yours maan , don't stop yourself , he just saw so much love , trust and passion in her innocent hazel ,

Tujhe mil ke laga hai ye
Tujhe dhoondh raha tha main

Tujh mein hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khatir main tha jaga sa

Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re..
Maahi aaja re maahi aaja re

Upon meeting you, I felt like
I was searching for you

There is some sort of morning in you that
I stayed awake for it's sake

Come and decorate my dreams
Sweetheart come now

Tujh mein hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re...

Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi

My god, my heart is crying, you come now my sweetheart



Mere maahi mere maahi, tu aaja mere maahi

My sweetheart, my sweetheart, come now my sweetheart

Tujhe mil ke laga hai ye
Tujhe dhoondh raha tha main

Tujhe mil ke laga hai ye
Tujhe dhoondh raha tha main

Tujh mein hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re.

Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Mere maahi mere maahi, tu aaja mere maahi, oo...

Mahi Mahi Mahi...
Mahi Mahi Mahi...

maan just turn her to other side and now her back facing him , his eyes turn red with raw desire ...he just cares her milky back with his shaking finger , like he is scare if his touch hurt her ...when maan finger touch geet bare back , he just running his sexy finger on her bare back of that gown she just moan ...maan

imagine geet back , and maan finger on geet bare back

geet just arch her back she just lay on maan , her back touching maan taunt chest , maan hand just come on her shoulder now his finger start to cares on just above geet cleavage , poor girl just closed her eye

image down two one , maan action 😳

she more start to rest on maan chest , just than maan put his hand on her left hand and took her hand and rested on her tummy with his hand that silky thin material ... she can feel his touch on her like he touching her bare tummy , she just turn her face in maan shoulder and put her hand on maan hair in moon light they looking just divine couple , full lost in each other love

imagine geet gown

just than geet feel something poking to her back her eyes open with big shock and she just run away from maan to took control her raising heart bit , maan just follow her like hungry lion , geet just resting her head on wall of house boat to gain her breath , but maan again hug her from back , her red face because of shyness ...he just took her hand in his hand and rested on his heart ...like saying

Dhadkano mein, maahi

Saanson mein hai, maahi

Bin tere sab kuch tha gam tha

Bojh tha jeena har lamha

Mit gaye gum tujh ko paakar

Khil gaye saare hi manzar

Tu hi har pal mujh mein basa tha

Zarre zarre mein tu numaa tha

Aa tu mujh mein aake samaa ja re..

In my heartbeats, there's my sweetheart

In my breaths, there's my sweetheart

Without you, everything was sad

Every living moment was a burden

The sorrows have been erased after obtaining you

all the ambience blossomed


You were living in me every moment

In every particle, you were there

Come and stay/blend in me

Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi

Mere maahi mere maahi, tu aaja mere maahi, oo...

and plant a kiss on her chubby cheek , her cheek turn darkest shade of red she just turn her face to himself and start to look her eyes with so much love and saying about his loneliness till she come in his life ...

Tere bina har din tha soona

Tere bina har shab thi veeran

Tere bina thi saansein nashthar

Tere bina har cheez thi banzar

Tujh bin jeena ek sajaa tha

Saansein lena jaise gunaah tha

Aaja zehno dil par chha ja re

Without you, every day was lonely

without you, evey night was dark

Without you, breaths hurt like needle

Without you, everything was lifeless

Without you, living was a punishment

Taking breath was like a sin

Come and spread in my heart


Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Dil roye aa elaahi tu aaja mere maahi
Mere maahi mere maahi, tu aaja mere maahi, oo...
Maahi Maahi Maahi
Maahi Maahi Maahi
Bas mera tu maahi, saanson mein hai, maahi
Maahi Maahi Maahi
Maahi Maahi Maahi

bas mera tu maahi, saanson mein hai, maahi..., oo...

tear start to come in both eyes she just weep his tear and pick his lips softly and he just crush her more in his hug ,like he never wanted to parted away from her he just living this moment with his love , his GEET , maan ki geet ,he just bend his head and took her rosy petal in his lips and took geet in another world with his passionate , geet also start to respond him , and both tongue start to play their own tune , maan just want to drink all her sweet juice , he just pull geet for upper side in that her their body rub with each other and she gasp and open her closed eyes with shock , his member just touching to her tummy ,shy huuu come to her cheek

maan just enjoy his misthy reaction , and smile in kiss , some moment my misthy become so bold and after getting my desrier , how she feel so much shy ...oh god ijust love her , maan just stop his kiss and look to her eyes with love and passion ,Misthy why you are love me such limit , ready to surrender me for my desire , geet nodded in no wanted to say something but maan just put his finger on her lips ,geet I know you also have desire for me , but I know you all fantasies about OUR SR ... , iam happy that you are ready for me , but I want to full fill my misty all dreams ... geet just looking him , how much he love her , how much he control himself for fulfill my dreams , she just say ...ilove , just than his phone start to ring , first he grown , but it is called from Capitan

actually he higher this boat for only four hours , so he could not lost him fully with misty around , he could not trust himself , so , he smile to his thought and say to geet please change in other dress geet we have to live , shy shy geet just nodded in yes , and she just pick on his lips and run to room for change , maan grown with her act , but big smile come on his face for his geet ,within half hour both reach to home , both come near door , and maan just hold geet hand , and say in husky voice , don't go misty ...geet just shake her head on his antic ... she just say live me maan ,if anybody see us than they tease me like hell please ...maan make puppy face , geet just pull his cheek and say so cute ...maan frown on her word CUTE ...he make face on it ...geet just run away from there

Awesome update...
i just love this song and maaneet in it to no extent...
just i can is u have faboulessly described there feelings for each other...
i just cant express my happiness of reading this part in words...
geet calling maan cute is sooo cute...
Eagerly waiting for there wedding...
continue soon...
Once again a very big thanks for this ff...

so hot passionate romatic update

part 21 22 & 23 were so good...loved passionate maan & shy geet...
amazing updates loved them all

Wow great story please update soon
it's awesome
thanks for sharing your story with us.

So this is why he was out