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Posted: 11 years ago

part 24

both come near door , and maan just hold geet hand , and say in husky voice , don't go misty ...geet just shake her head on his antic ... she just say live me maan ,if anybody see us than they tease me like hell please ...maan make puppy face , geet just pull his cheek and say so cute ...maan frown on her word CUTE ...he make face on it ...geet just run away from there , maan just chuckle with geet antic and just went to his room


both maaneet so lost in their wold that they don't get how many devils watching them and smirking on them , yes they are non other than Meera , dadi , pinky adi and karan ,now they all know how they will tease maaneet in their sangeet ...maaneet are so tired with their passion and ceremony they just lost in their dream land , where they can meet without any restriction


next morning all are working for sangeet function , they just want to make it beautiful and main thing of all function that it is not grand but it is with their closed one , beautiful ceremony for family and maaneet , all are busy in their work ,hear , maaneet feel wired that , not single devil teasing them ,maan got some doubt but forget with his misty thought , only thought of geet make him crazy he just crave for geet , and all member bend on that they can't give chance for maaneet meet , pinky and meera took geet for parlor from morning and , adi and karan with maan always , he cant even sms to his misty , he just want to kill them he again and again give them his famous angry glare to them , but adi and karan just ignore him


now it is 5 pm and geet come from parlor , when maan in his room , just than he want to meet geet so he went to door , but his bad luck same time karan enter in his room with juice , and all juice fall on maan , he want to say something but just control his anger ...and in this he miss the chance to at list see his geet , he grown ...hear when geet want to meet maan her two bodyguard just following her , they couldn't even give chance to touch phone with so many excuses

adi come to maan room with his dress for sangeet , maan goopy mood change with thought that now he can meet his mishty , he can hold her etc , he just lost in her thought and he have dreamy look on his face , adi just pointed karan to maan face , both just control their laugh , adi just mummer , Msk , today you just wait and watch , a big show waiting for you ...


adi just tap on maan shoulder to brought him from his lala land , maan just make serious face to hide his shyness ...within hour all gather in hall , maan just walking in his room he just want to saw geet once , he cant stop himself and went geet room balcony ,but his bad luck also follow him the glass door of balcony is closed , like someone closed intentionally , but he can watch his geet ,



so he look for his misty and he just blow with geet beauty ,and moan come from his mouth their his misty laying on bed in sangeet dress , it is beautiful lengha choli ,she laying on bed and her hands on upper side of her head , maan heart start beat loudly Dhak , dhak ,dhak , she just looking like painting beautiful painting , lost in dream world , without duppata she giving good view of her beauty to maan eyes , his eyes just looking her , like he loving her with his eyes , her face , her lips , her neck , her blo... which are perfectly hold by sexy fitted choli , her beautiful tummy with waist chin , he found that waist chain more lucky than him which is so closed to her , her belly button , he just gulp his Silva , his hand itching to feel her but...



.his phone start to beep .sms from dadi , calling him in hall , he want to called her but his phone again and again start to beep

before anybody catch him he just wen to hall , hear same time , geet open her eyes , she feel someone gaze on her , like someone watching , her , but she slap herself and mummer , you become mad because of maan , just than a knock come on door , their her bodyguard of day ,meera and pinky standing with grin , geet ant to ask something but both don't give her chnce they just adjust duppaata on her dress and brought her down , maaneet face fell down with sitting arrangement for them ...ladies one side with geet and other side maan with man ...both just crib on it but at list they can see each other from distance , both start to saw each other , maan just lost in her beauty , and his hot gaze making geet more and more shy she just bend her head






Their sangeet program start with karan act , he start to give introduction of his family with song and dance , all just appricate his act just than meera come on stage and start to introduce maan family , they end their act with note , now they will tell all a beautiful story Name "Dhadkan do dilo ki"

hall turn dark for some moment , just than on stage a girl in white sari standing their , meera say

this is story of one girl who have so much dream in her eyes but shuttered with destiny game she lost her life and become widow ...god thinking best for her , and their come one prince , she but golden hart , just than , a boy come their with attitude , all start to look maan , maan give them angry glare ...and all start to look act , that boy just come near crying girl and just feel her maang with sinddor , and say with arrogant , she is mrs msk so don't ... say bad about her

geet just look to hi like thanking him with her eyes and maan just nodded his head in yes


Again merra come on stage ... they are husband and wife but so shy shy , in this love , and all he is buddhu and she become girl how she took first step , just than their dadi come to help them without their knowledge with master plan , just look it ...


next act , karan and meera in maaneet attire office cabing and karan reading some file ...meera standing near door and he called out , OH sweetheart , meera turn with shock , what he calling , she turn to swa him but someone just push her and hug him and plat kiss on his cheek she feel so J...curtain fall down




meera ...yes me coming as master plan on dadi demand , we just want to brought closed them , but my bhabhi is so much Jelouse , she make maan shy shy , all gasp on meera talk , geet just want to run because of shyness , maan giving her smirk

next act in disco , song is do ghoot muje bhi pila de dekh phir hota hai kya ...meera dancing aroung karan , this time also they have sme cloth like maaneet ...geet just become sharm se pani pani with dancing with aroung karan meera just went to maan and pull his hand and took him with her and push hi beside geet , he just sit near geet want to make distance but naughty maan just hold her hand in his grip


disco part

next act pinky and adi come in maaneet attired when they saying by to dadi and meera ...they sit on jeep ...maaneet face turn red in shyness , now what they saw in act , geet just mummer babaji , jeep stand their maaneet( adi pinky ) come out from it , adi just put one big paper in front them with holding pinky hand , on that paper written in bold word Censored 🤬



when pinky and adi reach to geet house , they are in other cloth ...meera say in naughty voice , why they change in other dress 4 to 5 hour journey ...with innocent face , all just laugh on meera qus


next act is terrace act karan brought pinky to meet maan , now Mohinder , rano ,and dadi look with shock to maaneet , geet just want to run from their , and maan he just give look like so what she is my wife , all nodded their head on msk attitude , their song start with adi pinky closed dance ...


pinky wear sarri like geet

Maula Ishq hai Khudaa, Duhai Deti hai juba,

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke
Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke

Dive lakho mannamadhe lagale lagale
Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word

there are more than lakh lights in heart

it is silky moist everywhere

Just than maan took, geet hand and join adi and pinky in dance, all just clap and whistle on maan act, geet feel so much shy in front of family



maan just took mike from meera hand and say , dadi , ma , babji thanks for brought this angel in my life , she is my life , maan ki geet ,he further say with looking to geet eyes

Waqt Ko Bas Tumhare Sath Bitana Acha Lagta Hai,

Tum Se Hi Baat Karna Muskurana Acha Lagta Hai,

Tumhare Ansu Bhi Pyari Tumhari Muskurahat Bhi,

Tum Hi Se Rothna Tum Ko Manana Acha Lagta Hai,

Tumhari Khushiyan Mujhe Apni Jaan Se Pyari Hain,

Tumhare Waste Har Gham Uthana Acha Lagta Hai,

Tumhara Sath Jab Chhote To Sansain Ruk Jayen Meri,

Tumhari Yadon Mai Hi Mar Jana Acha Lagta Hai ...



geet have tear in her eyes , she just hug maan say maan ...



all get emotional with unconditional love of maaneet ... all just come near them took them in group hug , just than adi say to maan ., waisei have doubt , why you higher house boat for four hours , geet eyes winded in shock and she just hug pinky in shyness , maan just slap on adi shoulder , all just enjoying family time with singing and dancing , including dadi and geet ma ,papa ...all are happy for maaneet ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part...loved it...poor geet was so shy
adi pinky meera and karan are such a devils
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww lovely cute muahhh update yar:)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really so sweet😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
the ear rings are so cute,
perfect match for the dress..
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 23
awesome dear...
lovely one...
romantic...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...

loved it very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome and pic also super
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Posted: 11 years ago
they are hell bend aint they
to make them all shy
haila kya master plan tha
poor maneet
so didnt see this coming did they
ahhh that was funny for sure
bless what to say right
hmmm this is so cute right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part,,
all saw maaneet romance
n in sangeet all are acting like them
n having fun

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