Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan is gonna finally take lead
haiyye that was so cute
geet bhi naa
what didnt she say
ufff she is jaanlewa for maan
basic concepts she knows
and then he goes and asks her about practical
he is so naughty
awww but they needed to move on
wonder where they sending maneet
this should be fun
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet cry babby cry for maan
maan tease her
dadi n mera devil hai dono
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Posted: 11 years ago



oho Geet ko kuch yaad nahin hai...just that she was dancing with someone in rain...kissy wissy yaad hai ki nahin...Geet is very smart hmm...why can't she join dots...who else will dance with her and kiss her instead of Maan...and if she thinks the person was not Maan then why she is not frightening...

so daadi is sending them somewhere...

waiting to know where?

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
lolz..geet crying thinking she hurt maan
n maan..rofl..thinking how hard was his n8 with drunken geet..
geet saying she knew the basic n maan teasing her..lolz..
gud start..
dadi planning something..whats it
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
amezing update love maaneet scene n meera maan ki sherni se bach kar rah varna tera kya hoga. eagerly waiting for dadi plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a lovely update. geet is so innocent and cute. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
love this
awesome
me dewani maaneet ki
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update. geet is so inocent
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can't stop my self from writing this part , lagta hai bin mousam barish ka asear hai so enjoy part 14 of Dhadkan 😉

Mahimaan

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 14

Dadi say this one our closed one maan and dr stop me fr traveling , if you don't have I will go , if I will get ill than don't say anything ...maan mummer in slow voice nautanki queen , just than geet try to took paper but dadi stop her , and say so maan what is your ans or i will ask geet to make ready my luggage maan say stop it dadi I will go but give me one hour , I make some call in office ...just than dadi mummer in maan ear don't say geet where you are going , it is surprise for her , come to my room ... maan just went to dadi room and geet went to their room for packing , in dadi room , dadi say something to maan and maan nodded his head in yes ,hear in their room geet standing all confused she don't have idea where they are going and what should she have to pack as usual



she start to mummer to her babaji , deko babaji , i don't know what to do , dadi and maan ne kaha packing karo , lakin kaha jana hai , kitne dino ke liye jana hai , kuch bhi nahi kaha , now what shall I do ? just than maan enter in room and without making any sound he just come closed to her and said in husky voice near her ear , don't trouble your babaji , i am hear all yours ,geet got goosebumps with maan husky voice and his closeness , his lips just so closed to her ear its making her crazy with desire , and all this she don't get meaning of his double meaning word , she replied only huuu...


maan just enjoying her state ,when geet don't come back from her la la land he again ask her , what happen geet , you need any help in packing , i can help you because i know where are your ALL cloths , geet just look to him with confused look , but when she saw naughty smile on his face , she got the meaning and she remember her disaster , when he saw ,her inner cloths in wall robe , she turn red in shyness , she just start to bite her lips in nervousness and mummer , Ye maanji ko kya hua , wo ASHE baate ku kar rahe , /what happen to maanji why he talking like this , yesterday I drunk that drink and effect to maanji per dikh raha hai babaji , save me ,Muje inka irade thik nahi lag rahe / i have doubt on his intention please save me babaji ,


just than maan phone start ring , maan took that called and geet thanks babaji to save her ,from maan teasing ,after finishing his call he look to geet who with so much efforts she trying to not blush , but her cheek , maan just want to bit them ...just than geet ask in meek voice , maanji for how many days we will going I don't get what to pack so , maan just reply to her , geet we are going to attend marriage of closed relative we are going for 8 days and ya pleas took some sari with you and some cloths for cold , its ok , now i will finish my packing also we have to go within hour , we are going in my so hurry up geetji ...


geet mouth open in O shape on word geetji ...,,save me babaji ,it is dream or real maanji talking so much , But Geetji ,yack i am aunty he calling Geetji , she make angry baby-face ,maan want to tease her more but control himself , and say I going to change hurry up geet , maan went to bathroom , and come after 10 minute all ready to kill all , yes he is in jeans and t shirt , and he is looking just hot ,geet gaping him like , just want him eat alive , her dreamy eyes , maan just nodded his head , jhalni , but enjoying his effect on geet ( mahi saying effect was not only on geet but on mahi as well as all maan fans ) geet just mummer he looking so hot , in casual , nahi to uncale ke jaise hamesha formal main hi rahete hai , baabji please save me from do anything stupid with him , waise bhi kal se confused hu ke kal main wo disco main kiske sath dance kar rahi thi , ek bar maanji se puch lu kya , but she shoo her thought , with thought not now , some other time




maan when see her all lost on thought he just come so closed to her and flow some air on her eyes , when maan hot breath fall on geet eyes she come out from her thought but lost in maan gaze , he blowing air on her eyes with his M shape sexy ,hot lips ,which making her crazy , she start to think this all dream and closed her eyes , maan just took this chance and went near mirror , away from her , when geet closed her eyes , she start get image like she caressing someone closed eyes , with her hand , and that person open his eyes , same chocolate big eyes , geet just open her eyes with shock that's are maan eyes ,... she just gulp her Silva with fear , what is happening with her , some second ago she feel maan so closed , but he is standing near mirror , she just cry out and mummer babaji , I hate you ...



after hour both saying bye to dadi and meera , dadi say to maan take care of geet , don't angry on her or she must be scare , call her after reaching there , and say to geet , I put all gift to all relative in jeep , please give them with your own hand , they will be more happy and take care of both of you ok , and if he trouble you just called me ok , maaneet nodded their head , both took blessing from dadi and start their journey , both are happy on one things that they get time for each other because of journey ...they themselves don't have idea , what is waiting for them its 10 am and because of cold weather its have romantic atmosphere , when jeep come out from KM gate , maan stop for second and start to bend to geet , and geet going more back , when maan come very near to geet she just closed eyes in fear , and maan just smile on her , and tied sit belt and say in husky voice ho gaya geet open your eyes , maan hot breath failing on geet rosy lips he just want to took that rosy lips , test them , last night touch of geet lips ,just making him crazy , but he control , and go away , when geet open her eyes and look to maan with qus eyes , he just pointed to sit belt , geet just took long breath ...and start to look other side






after some time they reach out of city , cool air and greenery just make their mind fresh , geet just stopping herself to talk with him , she so much want to ask where are they going because it is way to Punjab and her house ... but drop idea to ask him just than maan stop his jeep near small stall , tea stall , maan called out geet come on take some tea , you love this tea , it is so testy , come on , geet looking him like The MSK drink tea on road side tea stall , maan just ask what happen , don't to you want to drink ...and put his hand on her cheek and start cares near her lips with his long finger , ohhh poor girl just bite he cheek to control her moan , and closed eyes , just enjoying his touch , again some image start to come in her mind like she touching M shape lips , she open her eyes in shock M shape lips , maan lips , she look to maan but he is giving order for tea , she slap herself and say wake up geet , control your dream , first you saw his eyes and now lips , chi chi jahalni suder ja , she just look to upward and mummer babaji ...



maan enjoying her restlessness , he with slow speed tourhar her , he want to get her , she know last night event but in slow manner so she cant feel guilty for her behavior with him ,he took tea glass to her and give her , geet just avoiding to look him but her eyes are only struck on HIS M shape lips ... her breath stop for second , she just gulp her Silva and start to drink her tea , like that is most imp work in world , after finishing there tea , maan start his jeep and for distract from maan thought geet start radio and she closed her eyes and start to lesion that song and maaneet lost in this songs which are mirror of there heart

geet saw herself with maan holding his hand and walking in beautiful road which are full of greenery she just put her head on his shoulder and walking

ham jo chalne lage chalne lage hain ye raaste

haan haan manzil se behtar lagane lage hain ye raaste

aao kho jaaye ham, ho jaaye ham yuun laapata

aao milon chale, jaanaa kahaan naa ho pataa

aao kho jaaye ham, ho jaaye ham yuun laapata

aao milon chale, jaanaa kahaan naa ho pataa

ham jo chalne lage chalne lage hain ye raaste

haan haan manzil se behtar lagane lage hain ye raaste

when we started walking, these roads are also started walking

yes, yes; these roads began to seem better than the destination

come on, let's lose ourself. let's become unreachable

come, let's walk for miles, let we don't khow where to go

come on, let's lose ourself. let's become unreachable

come, let's walk for miles, let we don't khow where to go

when we started walking, these roads are also started walking

yes, yes; these roads began to seem better than the destination

maan imagine geet in his hug and he singing with admiring her beauty they stop near small waterfall and maan took her face in his hand and start to look her eyes with so much love and desire , geet feel so much shy with his intense gaze she just hug maan and hide her red face in his chest ...

baithe baithe aise kaise koi rasta naya sa mile

tu bhi chale, main bhi chalu, honge kam ye tabhi faasle

baithe baithe aise kaise koi rasta naya sa mile

tu bhi chale, main bhi chalu, honge kam ye tabhi faasle

aao tera mera naa ho kisi se wasta

aao milo chale jaanaa kahaan naa ho pataa

we are getting the new roads just by walking like this together

you keep walking, and so will i; only then these distances will become smaller

come, neither you nor i will be anybody's business

come, let's walk for miles, let we don't know where to go

geet watching maan stop his walking and maan took her face in his hand and just than maan put his lips on geet lips , and geet wake up with shock , she breathing havenlly

aankhe khole ninde bole jaane kaisi jagi bekhudi

yaha, waha, dekho kaha leke jaane laai bekhudi

aankhe khole ninde bole jaane kaisi jagi bekhudi

yaha, waha, dekho kaha leke jaane laai bekhudi

aao mil jaayega hoga jaha pe raaste

aao milo chale jana kaha na ho pataa

with open eyes, dreams are speaking that what kind of restlessness is aroused this

here and there, see where is this restlessness taking us

come on, we will get the road where it would be

come, let's walk for miles, let we don't know where to go

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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