Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
awesome dear...
excellent...
cont soon dear...
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GEET IN HER DRUNK STATE WANTED TO SEDUCE MAAN
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poor maan kia halat bana di becharey ki
kitna control karwao gi ab nahi hota us say
morning or bhi shocking hai
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part 13

In early morning geet wake up , when sunlight start to disturbed her , she have bad headache , she closed her eyes , to think something , how she come in her room , last night i drink that Yack drink and after that i don't know what happen only some image of dance coming in mind , rain dance with someone , can we dance in rain ,just then her eyes went to maan , who is sleeping like baby ,his naked back visible to her eyes , and her eyes winded in shock , she gasp , she saw some nail mark on his back along with her lipstick mark , than she look to bedroom , both cloth are spreading in room , and she is in shirt , maan shirt only in shirt ...

watching all this geet cant hold herself and start to cry bitterly , one thought make her hurt how she behave like this to him , nail mark on his back making her more and more guilty it is painful to her that she just start to cry , maan who wake up with geet sound , but pretend that he is sleeping , for geet so she can change in other clothe and he scare for her reaction also , so he just lying there , when geet start to cry with mummer with her babaji that how she behave him with maanji like this , there are so many scratches on his back and maan mistook her that she think something happen with her at last maan can't hold him further , he face anything in his life but can't face her tear that give pain to him ,






he just pin geet on bed hold her both hand on her head and say stop it geet chup bilkul chup , you think so cheep about me , I don't make any thing wrong which damage your dignity dam it I Lo... but he stop next moment , he just looking to her eyes with so much and love that she cant misjudge him ...

geet just gaping him like fool like what is he talking , wrong things , dignity and all oh oh babji now his talk meaning click her she just nodded her head in no geet eyes winded in shock she look maan anger very first time he always talk with her politely , yes he hit that monster , but never rise his voice on me , but why he is so much angry , what he say he do not anything, dingnity and , next moment when she got the meaning of maan word ,she just hurriedly say no no maanji , you get me wrong , I trust you you are my god after my babaji I only trust you , I trust you that you never ever done wrong with me , , how you think like this i am crying ,I am crying because I injured you wo wo injury on your back , nail mark , that hurt me and I can not hold my tear maanji...don't no why but i can't see you in any pain it hurt me hear and she just put her hand on her heart , and one hand on throat and say i swear maanji i crying for your injury i am so fool don't know why i drink that Yack drink and after that i don't know what happen only some image of dance coming in mind , in disco is there are rain dance , image coming in my mind like I am dancing in rain with someone so closed ,don't know who is that person and maanji what are you think that i am stupid Bollywood heroine who don't have basic knowledge of of S...she just closed her eyes and mummer LE Kar diya na saypa , kam bola kar geet ,kam bola kar, she just bend her head , red color come in her cheek , she look so beautiful and poor maan just want to eat her row

he is thinking this Hoshiyarpur express talking so much in one breath , in one breath she ask so many things , so she know about basic things of S** , she is so beautiful innocent seducers , and about dance , disco and special rain dance , thank god she don't remember anything or else pata nahi she can talk me or not so openly , after her cry , I think that she mistook me and hear MY misty crying for my injury , in drunken stage you confess your feeling but now I will make you confess your feeling in sense and that must be soon as possible as , this is Msk promise misty , and last night i could not forgave in my life , your first time called me maan , your touch on my lips , on my face , on my body , your hug , he grown in mind , last night image start to come in his mind , he shake his head ,and smile , in bathroom when he lost his control and start to kiss her on her shoulder , just than she knock out ,than with so much difficulty , in dark I change her in my cloth because I lost my energy to took another cloth so I took short cut and in sleeping mode she just hugging me , and I think watching some naughty dream , and so many time she scratch me with her nail , last night truly exam for me , and i am happy that i passed in that exam , but he got to know from her that she want to talk with me , but my shyness , but not now misty now i am taking lead for our relation , and he have naughty smirk on his face

hear geet is so tense with maan silence and his face don't give any hint of his thought poor soul again and again just pry to her babaji , save your child , save your child , i hope so i don't done anything stupid with maanji just than maan husky voice brought her back , maan calling her geet , with only voice she have Goosebumps on her body , she reply only huuu, her throat went dry , like from so many days she don't drink water , maan just ask her So geet you know about basic about S** how ? he just closed his hand like Msk style , poor geet just took glass of water and drink it in one go ,


maan i am waiting for your ans geet

geet geet mummer , wo collage main seekha that /i study in collage she ans like small child who caught at time of making some mischief

maan oh just study with book or practical bhi dekha tha /or you watch practical also geet ...

geet just gap like fool to maan and next moment , chi chi babaji what are he asking , she just run from there in bathroom , her face turn red like tomato with maan not so innocent qus , she just closed bathroom door ,and their room fill with maan laud laugh , she cant control herself and peep from bathroom door , and watch him , he is looking so cute with his open laugh ...she just called him maanji you have beautiful smile, you looking so cute , stay like this always maanji

after hearing cute , maan just say don't called me cute geet ...geet giggle on his reaction and closed bathroom door with called loudly Cute Maan sing khurana ,maan just nodded his head for her child ness , but he have smile on his face


in hall when meera and dadima heard maan laugh they just high fi each other , dadi have tear in her eyes , meera just say don't cry , cry baby , maan have good life partner who brought happiness in his boring life , our first plan is successful , now next plan , dear dadi , meera just wink to dadima ,dadi say wait and watch mk gf

after some time maaneet come for BF , dadi and meera waiting for them , when both sit on there place meera have naughty smile on her face , maan just glare her in Msk mode , meera don't want lose chance to tease Msk meera make such innocent face and called dadi you know yesterday I lesion one song , Do ghut muje bhi pila do ... and girl dancing on that song for her Ma, Man hearing meera maan just chock his food he start to cough loudly poor geet just run to him and give him glass of water and start to cares his back with so much care , geet watching or say glare meera like what is special in this song, and meera and dadi enjoy maaneet romance , maan just finish water and say thanks to geet and both lost in each other eyes ...Mahiii , both are so much lost in each other , so at last with so much difficulty meera control her giggle and start to sing loudly

pyaar Thoda Is Mein Milaade Sharaabhi,
dekh Phir Hota Hai Kya
ho, Doh Ghoont ...

Doh Ghoont Mujhe Bhi Pila De Sharaabhi,
dekh Phir Hota Hai Kya

Which brought maaneet back in reality, maan face turning red in shy , geet looking meera like , cat ready for attack , dadi say stop meera , i want to talk to maaneet its imp , meera just put finger on her lips , dadi and maan nodded their head on meera act ,dadi called maan , give one paper to maan hand and say , maan geet you both have to go this place , maan want to deny but glare from dadi and maan shut his mouth , meera and geet start to giggle looking maan face , dadi this one our closed one maan and dr stop me fr traveling , if you don't have time than I will go , if I will get ill than don't say anything ...maan mummer in slow voice nautanki queen , just than geet try to took paper but dadi stop her , and say so maan what is your ans or i will ask geet to make ready my luggage on that maan just say stop it dadi I will go but give me one hour , I make some call in office ...just than dadi mummer in maan ear don't say geet where you are going , it is surprise for her , come to my room ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan and geet talking lovely
dadi next plan maan and geet sending some place together
waiting for next part
Edited by envi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan tho gaya geet ki pyaar mein just loved their moments geet talking about hurting him😆😆oh god kitna kam bolthi hai😆😆nautanki dadi started her drama ab undono ko kahi bhejne ki plan banayi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
VERY NICE
CUTE MOVMENT BT GEET N MAAN
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no...geet kis baat per ro rahi hai aur maan kya soch li hai...cute romance...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ud
geet telling maan she knows basic of
maan teasing her
daadi nxt plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update love it maan and geet so sweet

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