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Posted: 11 years ago
so much pain on all sides.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_

I have fallen in love with this work ...
Loved the title and every bit of this story
Pls..don't make me wait much :)
Btw..I smell something very DEV-il in their separation :/


Thanku so much dear...

n U'll get ur answers soon... may b the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

almost done...

Just few more minutes...
Edited by its_me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just love yr ss... but a lot of mysteries r 2 b revealed...

waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago




Kaare Badra

Part - 8



~o~

I have inserted a song in this part. It's one of my personal favourite n depicts the emotions of Maan.

Many of u must have heard it n if not, I m giving the link, do listen just once.

~o~

Till now the whole story was from Geet's side... But next few segments will be the other side of the story...

~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~~o~

Same morning...

Maan woke up with a heavy head but his heart was feeling light after years. He could feel Geet around but when he checked each n every corner of the room he got disappointed knowing she had left him, again. He took out his mobile to call his most trusted employ Aditya Sharma, who was instructed last evening only to report to Rishikesh by today morning. Maan finished his call n sat down on the bed caressing it n then moved towards the couch n gradually the whole room as if searching for her touch. His eyes were moist n the pain surfacing again.

Geet... why?? Why r u running away?? What have I done ??

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_0tlAcHD-U

Nain jeena tere baajhon, nain jeena!
Nain jeena tere baajhon, nain jeena!

{Won't live without you! Won't live!
Won't live without you! Won't live!}

Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!
{How do I explain to you?
Without you, my heart is anxious!}

Tun ki jaane pyar mera,
Main karaan intezar tera!
Tun dil, tunhion jaan meri!


{What would you know about my love!
I am waiting for you.
You are heart, you are my life!}

Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!


{How do I explain to you?
Without you, my heart is anxious!}



He touched each n every corner, each n every little thing in the room. Just to feel her, to give some solace to his aching heart. His eyes fell on the cushion kept on the couch where she had spent the whole last night looking at him, remembering their togetherness. As if it was calling him. He rushed n hugged it feeling her. He soul was craving for her soothing touch, yearning to b in her arms, the only place he longed for.


Mere dil vich reh k,
Mere dil da haal na jaane!

{Even when you stay within my heart,
Still you don't know a thing about condition of my heart!}

Tere baajhon kalleyan beh k ronde nain nimaane!

{My humble eyes cry sitting alone in the absence of yours!}

Jeena mera haye marna mera,
Naale tere c!
Kar aitbar mera,
Main karaan intezar tera!
Tun dil, tunhion jaan meri!

{Me being alive, me being dead,
Both were with you only!
Trust me,
I am waiting for you!
You are heart, you are my life!}


Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!
Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!

{How do I explain to you?
Without you, my heart is anxious!}


Ooo Ve changa nahion keeta beeba,
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba,
Dil mera tod ke!

{You didn't do this right oh decent, pretty girl,
You didn't do this right oh decent, pretty girl!
That broke my heart into pieces!}


Ve bada pachtaaiyaan akhaan,
Ve bada pachtaaiyaan akhaan,
Tere naavain jod ke!

{These eyes regretted so much,
These eyes regretted so much,
That they bonded with you!}


He stood by the window of the room, looking outside as his anxiousness was increasing with every minute waiting for that one call. Tears were unstoppable today and his heart was crying with the same unanswered questions that he had been asking since past 2 years n 4 days... Why ?? Why did she go?? Why ... without telling anything?? What was his mistake ?? He was even ready to plead for forgiveness but she was not ready to listen n still running away... Why ??




Sunjhiyaan sunjhiyaan dil dian galiyaan,
Sunjhiyaan merian baawan!

{Pathways of heart are deserted,
Deserted are these arms of mine!}

Aaja terian khashbowan nu,
Labhdiyaan merian saahanvaan!

{Come as the fragrance of yours,
Is what my breaths are looking for!}


Tere bina haaye,
Kiven karaan door udasi,
Dil bekarar mera!
Main karan intezar tera!

Tun dil, tunhion jaan meri!

{Without you oh baby,
How do I overcome sadness?
My heart is restless,
I am waiting for you.

You are heart, you are my life!}



Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!

{How do I explain to you?
Without you, my heart is anxious!}



Tun ki jaane pyar mera,
Main karaan intezar tera!
Tun dil, tunhion jaan meri!
Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!

Main tenu samjhawan ki,
Na tere baajhon lagda jee!

{What would you know about my love!
I am waiting for you.
You are heart, you are my life!
How do I explain to you?
Without you, my heart is anxious!}

Finally his phone rang which he picked up immediately composing himself. As he finished his call he rushed towards the door, determined to end this hide n seek and confront her. But as he opened the door, he saw his sister coming towards him.

Maan Bhai??? Aap theek hai naa??

Aniee??? What r u doing here ??? Aur wahan Haridwar mein ... Dadimaa ke saath kaun hai???

Woh ... dadimaa ke paas Vicky hai Bhai... but we got a call from here... that u met with an accident last night ... Aap theek hai naa??

Oh... Haan ... Main theek hu... Sorry Aniee but I m in a hurry... have to go somewhere urgently...

I'll come with u...

No Aniee... u go back...

No bhai... I have promised Dadimaa... I'll bring u along with...

Fine... Chalo...

~o~

Mr Malhotra... I'll transfer that shopping complex land in the name of ur wife if u'll tell me where have u hidden Geet...

Maan got the call from Adi who told him that Geet has been living with Yash n Meera from past 2 years and gave him their address. So here Maan was, threatening these two to disclose Geet's whereabouts.

Dekhiye sir... I have already told u ... I can't tell any stranger about my friend... So ... please...

What do think agar aap dono ... mujhe Ms Geet Handa ke baare mein nahi...

Ek minute sir... I think therez some misunderstanding... We don't know any Geet Handa...

Don't try to act smart... She was very much there with ur wife yesterday...

Look... U r mistaking... My friend who was with me yesterday ... she is not Geet Handa... her name is Mrs Khurana... Geet Khurana... aur aap...

But Maan couldn't hear a word after that, he whispered getting a shock that she still called herself with the same name as he used to call her.

Geet Khurana...

Haan... Mrs Geet Khurana... Aur kya kahengi wo khud ko Maan Bhai ??


Aniee ??

Maan ??

Meera who was standing with Yash asked confusingly, she looked at Yash n then Maan questioningly. But Maan n Aniee were equally puzzled by her question.

Aap Maan hai??? Geet ke Maan ???

Did she say anything about me??? Kya kaha ussne??? Maan was so excited like a small kid to realize that his Geet still talks about him n her friends knows him. But the excitement didn't last long as he got the most unexpected reply from Meera.

Haar raat wo apni neend mein sirf aapko hi bulati thi... She used cry for u ...

Neend mein???

Haan... She used to have the same nightmare every night... she used to cry for help... beg someone to leave... She used to call U...

Meera was crying badly by the time she finished whereas Yash held her in his embrace n Maan stood shocked n puzzled when they all turned with a loud sound of someone falling. Maan rushed to hold Aniee who herself was in a dazed state with her eyes pouring continuously.

Nahi...

Aniee...

Bhai... Bhabhi ko le aao bhai... She shook Maan crying bitterly

Aniee...

She needs u ... Please ... Unka koi kasoor nahi hai...

What r u talking Aniee ???

Haan ... mein sach keh rahi hu... She is suffering without any fault of hers...

Her revelation, made all three of them look at her questioningly. Maan got alarmed n asked...


Ek minute... What do u know Aniee ??? Look at me... Kya jaanti ho tum??? What have u been hiding ??

He shook Aniee with such painful n accusing look that it was hard for her to hide the truth anymore. Truth, that she had been hiding since past 2 years, even after knowing his condition.

I m sorry Bhabhi... but ab aur nahi chup reh sakti hu mein... Please forgive me... but I can't keep my promise any more...

Aniee... What is it that u know ??? Aisa kya tha jo Geet nahi chahati thi ki mein jaanu ?? Tell me Aniee... Please... Dammit speak up...

She looked at her brother who was going frantic to know the reality. She raised her tearful eyes still pouring those tears of pain n looked into his eyes.

Sunn payenge bhai ?? Will u b able to hear ??

Aniee...

Your Geet was raped ...






Edited by its_me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That kameena
That man if I get my hands on him
So that's why she was running
That's why she didn't stay
Why she is running from him
If Annie knew why didn't she tell
Ahhh because geet made her promise not to
So hard to see them like this
She ran away again
So they never got married it seems
Damn get her back maan and soon
Please she needs you
Oh my that was hard for them but no more
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved d update! d song is one of my fav's as well!

i had somehow guessed it that geet was raped at d start of this update n yes she was raped n definitely by dev!

n bcuz of that she ran away frm maan! waiting 2 c maaneet unite..
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Posted: 11 years ago
that man i want kil him...is he DEV or someone else who R**** her
thats the reason she running from her maan
now waiting for the next part
continue soo
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet toh phirse bhag gay...abb kahan dhundega maan geet ko...

awesome but painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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