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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

Oho.. Maan taras raha hain matalab.. jarror passionate update milega..😳😉

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Shruti_Goyal

@Shruti_Goyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

luvly teaser😃same case with me like maan can't wait to meet his giit😉 and me waiting for update😆

Edited by Shruti_Goyal - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

kya baat hai what a vm
perfect for them

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docgurti

@docgurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

bechara maan wants an appreciative look 4m geet 😆😆

lunch date oh my my !!!!!!!! 😉

update soon...ll b waiting

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

Chapter 63 Part 2

"Pyaari", "Dulaari", "Gora Chitta Jawan", "Sehari Babu" --- what a choice of names and adjectives 👏

You can't blame Geet for not understanding with just "chakkar" 😳 and obviously with this skimpily clad girl in presence of her Ma"a"n she would be uncomfortably conscious.

Teji!!! Finally!!! Yay!!!

Aw, how sweet!! Teji noticed Geet's worn out look but Maan did not and he knows about Maan :O) and it does dawn on him eh?!

Hahaha Teji understood Maan's intentions very clearly now, did he not?!

Hehehe nice compliments showered on Maan by Giit :-) only wish to see his reaction to these lol

Of course loving some one does not have a manual!! How can it when every individual is different?

Avi, just how many stories are you gonna keep track of?! Poor Teji though.

How strange everyone around them can see how much they are in love with the other while these two choose to remain in their caves! Gosh!!! Grow up, you two!!

Another lovely update girl!!! Keep it up!!!

Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: priya111111

haan checkk kiya not bad 50 hai each vm ki😆😆😆

iss baar avi keliye spl effects aur title bhi daali😳

sab dekhege.

it looks lovely, esp when it matches the update so beautifully😃

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#967

lovely teaser...

like the VM very much...

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#968

Chapter 63 Part 3

God girl!! You manage to write not only the story but also the translations!! 👏

Kudos to you, you manage to add Daarji's POV as well. What attention you pay to your characters!! 👏

It is true, you can love somebody for all you care but it is not sufficient, expression of love is equally important. Just how many people will have to get involved in their confession? So Giit is gonna confront him? She can start her monologue but when you come bare-chested in front of her how do you even expect her to continue? Gawd!!

Superb portrayal of Giit's emotions, they have finally managed to clear the cloud of MUs between them with Maan realizing how much he hurt her. True, love is trust and faith; communication or lack of it opens and closes all windows in all kinds of relationships.

Complex words or language is not needed to express our feelings. Maan's confession is simple and honest. Even without the use of big words or poetic expression, this confession is sweet and heart-warming. It is so important to say what we feel without sugaring them even when we know we were wrong. Makes the other person realize we sincerely accept our mistakes and deeds, paves way to understanding. Simply beautiful!!!

Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! and Wow!!! What follows a sweet and cute confession is such a tender moment and wonderful way to present it 🤗

Hahaha as if they would agree to marrying someone else, they will only tease the other but never go that way!!! Daarji's choice though is perfect for Giit lol

Love you so much for SRK's references ❤️👍🏼🤗 in fact I also prefer Suri over Raj😳

Will be lovely to see how you get Maan to propose his Giit.

Oops CID caught lol

With half day's break you managed three updates :O with updates coming in parts, I am unable to keep up with your speed and you claim to be giving "short" updates :O really?!

Love your writing girl!!! Don't let it go, ever!!!

Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#969

Bechara Maan... 😆

Me waiting for the update ... 😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#970

THE LOCKET
Chapter 68

Update will be on the BLOG.😳 Do remember to press the like button here.

Passwords have been sent for the update to those who have commented on the previous part. If and only if you have commented and not received the password, do send me a PM.

Thanks for all the lovely comments for the proposal at the Taj. I think there are still some who refuse to say anything about my story and it saddens me. Chalo, to each his own. There are only two large updates left, which I will try to cut up into small parts to make the story last longer.

THANK YOU PRIYA FOR THE VM

I LOVE IT[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MgLy3hZTT5Q&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

Music Selection: Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho from the movie Fanaa

VIDEO CREDIT TO PRIYA

Thanks for all the support, likes and comments.

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago