THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago
edited my comment on the perv page

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Posted: 11 years ago
I m back ...I m back and I had two updates to catchup
woahhh...dadi is such a nautanki
she finally had maans plans out of his system twisting talks and blackmailing abt sending geet home...lol
dadi is just too much
finally the much awaited letter and the proposal
qubool hai time fr maaneet
after silent unspoken love lost letter separation pain misunderstandings patch up and all other drama maaneet are ready yi start a new life full of love
the confession letter and proposal was veey romantic
Proposa-tajmahal-full moon night deadly combination
the proposal couldn't have been any better than this nt in terms of words nor in terms of ambiance
geet wanted to be wid maan when she visits the symbol of love tajmahal and her wish was fulfilled or rather planed by her love
its gonna be happily ever after for them
geet ne haan keh di...maan babu darjee se haath maango ab jake...lol

back after attending friends wedding...ready with new clothes to attend maaneet wedding..bring it ob
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Posted: 11 years ago
One more part updated...

timing dekho meri ..hehe
pm mujhe bhi...mein jaan ke gaayab nahi hui thi...dost ko bida karne gayi thi...mujhe geet ki bidai mein shameel hona hai...mujhe blog pe urf geet ki shadi mein entry do...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...👏 👏 👏...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...now what will Geet do...😆...Maan is so naughty...😳...loved the passionate moments of maaneet...☺️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh ho so back from their jaunt in the taj mahal
haiyye she is feeling even more shy
now that she is his fiancee
awww this is so cute seeing them like this
a new beginning for them both cool
and they both deserve it after mus and long long separation
kya scene hai just them full moon and taj behind them
now that is just magical for sure
bless this is getting more and more beautiful
maneet all alone with one another at last
getting lost in one another without any interruptions
even in sleep he cant let go of her can he
sorry geet that is reality
wait he was kissing her in his sleep okay thats new yup he was
dude that wasnt part of your dream
but you were really doing this to her
and geet is like what this is what he does to her in his dreams
pssst this must be the just milder side of things
god knows what else he does in his dreams to you
hell yes he would do it again and you know it dear
oh boy that was funny
close shave that maan or even god wouldnt have saved you from her
as if he wants saving right
oh teri abb toh yeh gayi
he is all set out to seduce geet
well this should be fun right
and he was all geared up to seduce her too
but dammit luck and fate aint with him
nakul made sure he couldnt sneak up on her
and then not seeing her at all in office either
when he goes home to see her she aint there either
plus nakul and his promise of sticking to him like glue it seems
just not his day
waise you didnt need to seduce her she already is seduced by you
just dont show it
so she is avoiding him huh
well what else is she to do right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. You have a knack of drawing in your readers just as I was one minute fully immersed in the romance sighing and wishing that it was happening to me 😳 and the next minute chuckling away at how Maan was trying to justify his actions in the morning.
All that planning by Maan was wasted as Geet neither gave him the attention he deserved nor the reaction he wanted and poor Nakul always manages to get in his way with a case of wrong time and wrong place😆😆
Poor poor Maan all love sick but unable to understand how Geet cannot be feeling the same - what Maan doesnt know is that Geet does feel the same its just her upbringing is stopping her from showing her feelings just like a good girl should😉
Waiting to see what Maan does next.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Huhuhu...one day three updates to read...it cannot get any better than this
beautiful update
yeh maaneet ka kuch nahi ho sakta
geet angry...roflmao
poor maan has to do so much papad beling kaam
he made a check list. He dresses up for her and what he gets in return?? NaKUL who is ready to become his shadow...lol
I felt bad for nakul . He did so much mehnat and all are out.poor him
maan babu ne honesty is the best policy ko aag laga ke woh bola jo use bacha sakta hai..not bad..:p
Maan don't worry geet did notice how handsome u looked
maan ne kasam khayi to have dinner with her anyhow...go maan go
geet royally ignored him back home and maan was stuck with silent geet and ramumaka
checklist of no use..thanks to nakul
common maan get ur ladylove back in your arms
geets self talks were awesome...
waiting for next already
greedy me wants to read more
thanku for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

MAAR DAALA... ohooo... MAAR DAALA...

i donno what more to say on this kathilaana update! their each gessture whether it was just a mere eye lock or carrying her in arms ... all were so beautifully written that i was feeling as if am floating in some other world full of maaneet... and kya pics chunchun ke leke aayi ho aaj!!!

ladkiyon ka usual hathiyaar!! blame the other and behave as if u were the most innocent soul of this universe!! and geet is too good at that... responding to him and having that so called sinful wishes ... she is trying her level best to keep them hidden and blame all on poor maan!!

mission doe seduction!!!😆 kya naam choose kia hain👏 ... O maan u r simply the best... kuch special na karo tho sab ka yeh haal hain and if he starts intentionally geet aur hamaara kya haal hoga!!

The soft, curvy, defenceless doe of his! A fit breakfast for a lion🤣 u r too good avi😉

here comes nakul... kithna time ho gaya usse milke...his vow as not to leave his maan sir and remain as his shadow just cracked me up... 😆

geet is thinking she is spell bound only by his eyes😳 bambi kahin ki😆

thanks for such a lovely update avi!

Lakshmi 🤗
Thank u Thank u Thank u😃
I was so nervous to change Maan from his quiet self but I wanted to add this part now to his character.
Your comment had me breathing again..😆
Thanks🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ha ha ha
All the check ... No use
BicharA

Geet gets so lost & conveniently blames 😆

Why do I feel we r soon going to have that post roop Tera mastana bit 😉

Oh I so love it

I love this jhali geet
& hain black vest maan
& black shirt wala bhi

To think abt it all t maans 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Ha ha ha
All the check ... No use
BicharA

Geet gets so lost & conveniently blames 😆

Why do I feel we r soon going to have that post roop Tera mastana bit 😉

Oh I so love it

I love this jhali geet
& hain black vest maan
& black shirt wala bhi

To think abt it all t maans 😆

Thanks Muskan😃
Let's see Maan babu ka kya haal karti hai Avi..😆
I am supposed to write about Brij but right now only these two are in my head😳

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