THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 37

Brilliant update dear...

I must say Avi, I simply loved Kabir-Maan and Kabir's father confrontation. Actually the way you have weaved family drama in this FF is amazing and I just love reading it...though I am wondering who was the woman who snatched the chain and why...

The paragraph about Maan swimming and Geet and him both feeling that physical awareness...it was passionate and blew me away...without touching...without a word...it was magic of passion and love...

Last part...of I love the song you used and it was beautifully written...there is nothing like faith and fear which makes one realize the priority and importance of our loved ones...suddenly nothing else matters...

Awesome update dear

Last but not the least

"Wish you a very Happy New Year...Hope you have a fantabulous time coming ahead and we get to read more and more stories from you...amen to that...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

tumhaare kitchen garden ke liye😃

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Brilliant update dear...

I must say Avi, I simply loved Kabir-Maan and Kabir's father confrontation. Actually the way you have weaved family drama in this FF is amazing and I just love reading it...though I am wondering who was the woman who snatched the chain and why...

You caught me. There is more in the next part.

The paragraph about Maan swimming and Geet and him both feeling that physical awareness...it was passionate and blew me away...without touching...without a word...it was magic of passion and love...

Everything of theirs is silent so I wanted it to be that way. Glad that you liked it.

Last part...of I love the song you used and it was beautifully written...there is nothing like faith and fear which makes one realize the priority and importance of our loved ones...suddenly nothing else matters...

I love that song too. That scene is very close to my heart.

Awesome update dear

Last but not the least

"Wish you a very Happy New Year...Hope you have a fantabulous time coming ahead and we get to read more and more stories from you...amen to that...

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Avi TL ka number kab ayega ????

Originally posted by: dqno1

Shayad tere b'day pe. Koshish karungi par keh nahi sakti for sure.

OS nahi padhi tu ne?

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-