THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 39

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

tho kya sab ka 4 haath aur enlarged brain hai 😲

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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

tho kya sab ka 4 haath aur enlarged brain hai 😲

Originally posted by: dqno1

Enlarged brain nahi kehte isse Praf

Moti buddhi kehte hai...😆

aur choti buddhi hi better hoti hai :P

atlast I am through this fabulous journey..and came to the present update !! beautiful story told even more beautifully !! hats off to you avi for giving us such a lovely reading !! I really cherish reading your story slowly...never rushing through !! maan's love in this soo serene...beautiful and silent...just loved the scene ...him in the swimming pool and geet standing near the door watching quietly...!! such tranquil feeling !! and dev...what to say...shew ko tame karte karte khud tame hogaya...!! loved how he eased poonam and a beautiful relation started !! sometimes cannot understand whom to love more maan or dev...especially last few parts !! never thought there would be such comptetion between these two...but, you made it possible !! and kabir ...how his character was introduced...now... he is standing so high...never left his mother... stayed poor...hungry...longing for his love , but didnot take the easy route of going back to his father !! he truly deserved respect and love of megha !! commenting for somany parts together is not coming out well !! loved each and every scene of maaneet...devstar...megha kabir and sukhi savi too...not to forget canada returned teji !! now will wait for next dose of maaneet eagerly...

iska bhi waiting avi😉😉

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

atlast I am through this fabulous journey..and came to the present update !! beautiful story told even more beautifully !! hats off to you avi for giving us such a lovely reading !! I really cherish reading your story slowly...never rushing through !! maan's love in this soo serene...beautiful and silent...just loved the scene ...him in the swimming pool and geet standing near the door watching quietly...!! such tranquil feeling !! and dev...what to say...shew ko tame karte karte khud tame hogaya...!! loved how he eased poonam and a beautiful relation started !! sometimes cannot understand whom to love more maan or dev...especially last few parts !! never thought there would be such comptetion between these two...but, you made it possible !! and kabir ...how his character was introduced...now... he is standing so high...never left his mother... stayed poor...hungry...longing for his love , but didnot take the easy route of going back to his father !! he truly deserved respect and love of megha !! commenting for somany parts together is not coming out well !! loved each and every scene of maaneet...devstar...megha kabir and sukhi savi too...not to forget canada returned teji !! now will wait for next dose of maaneet eagerly...

forgot to mention about roses...I think next time whenever I see roses will remember maan's teasing ...SR ki bahut jaldi hai giit...!!

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Sowie.. sirf do haath hai aur dimaag bhi bohut chota sa...😆

😆 😆

chote dimag se aise explosive ideas nahi aathe,,,,

have to wait for this??😭

Originally posted by: dqno1

Yes😃 unless I put Laal Ishq on hold...

That will be done next week, so this will be next 😃

ok will wait for this dear...

OMG..after so much time i checked my inbox..and read this ff..well first of all loved kabir's mom..but not satisfied yar uske dad ko or maar padni thi 😡..Thank god k maan ko kuchh ni hua..