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Ameera.

@Ameera.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

good update avi.

you potrayed maithili very well kabir or maan beating up sumeet would not have this impactful.

maan geet😳😳😳

geet tara megha outing part was so sweet

geet confession was so sweet i loved it so simple😊

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Loved it... Thankyou for such long part and pm
Amazing... Beautifully written
finally Kabir n his mother gave back to that Sumith... It was nice how they stood by megha...
Loved the way you wrote whole maaneet eyelocking part... It was Wow
Tara-Geet-Megha shoping spree was nice and liked thier bonding...
maan's flight had emergency landing was like 😲 NO this can't be like this... Gald nothing happens to him and Geet's confession was Superb... Loved it tptally

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

All it needs is two loving arms holding it tight, two hearts beating as one and hope and faith that it lasts as long as our breaths do.

omg this line is so beautiful.loved it.emotional update.just loved it to the core.

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

wow...amazing update...👏 👏 👏...brilliantly portrayed......loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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bbindu

@bbindu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

wonderful update!! loved it.

It was nice to see Kabir and Maan standing up for Megha. But, the part I loved was Kabir's mom twisting the arms and kicking to show that women are not weak. Hopefully, he will never show up his face again.

Loved Geet's confession to Maan. Glad to find out that it was not a major accident. Let's see how will Maan propose to her.

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bgr_80

@bgr_80

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Beautifully written.
Finally geet confessed
her love to maan .

Edited by bharao - 11 years ago

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Lovely update maan is save and geet tell maan about her felling waiting 4 next

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Avi tu ne meko dara diya tha grrr..

awesome lovely mindblowing amazing update muahhh:)

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

awesome update

maan &geet ke intense glare to each-other

m feeling so good when kabir fought with sumeet for his mother. People like sumeet don't deserve any respect neither form their wife nor from their children & d way maithili attack over him was awesome

maan is all fine