THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 22

Originally posted by: singh24

😊ye update de rahi hei kya...

Love this! Wish I could save it!

Originally posted by: mayyo

Love this! Wish I could save it!

^ yahan pe toh rahega lekin meri personal Maaneet and GurTi library mein nahin hoga na. 😊

wow
girl you know how to make us faint
that love confession finally happened from her side
thought it would never happen
but it did
and so glad for that
and all it took was a plane crash of sorts
hmmm well not good that but then he is with her so who cares
okay that sounds mean for sure
hmmm loved all the scenes
espcially where maithili kneed her hubby in
thats what i always say hit them where the sun dont shine man
pretty sensitive area that is
i have to say i was so proud of maithili then
good how kabir stood up for his love and mother
creep that man was for sure
megha chill dear your bro and kabir will be with you for ever and you aint really an orphan
after all tara di is your sister man
hats off that was pulled off with perfection for sure
no really it was

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wow
girl you know how to make us faint
that love confession finally happened from her side
thought it would never happen
but it did
and so glad for that
and all it took was a plane crash of sorts
hmmm well not good that but then he is with her so who cares
okay that sounds mean for sure
hmmm loved all the scenes
espcially where maithili kneed her hubby in
thats what i always say hit them where the sun dont shine man
pretty sensitive area that is
i have to say i was so proud of maithili then
good how kabir stood up for his love and mother
creep that man was for sure
megha chill dear your bro and kabir will be with you for ever and you aint really an orphan
after all tara di is your sister man
hats off that was pulled off with perfection for sure
no really it was

Awesome, Superb Update 👏
Loved that Swimming Pool wala scene 😉
Finally confession is here atleast from Her side 😳
Lovely Cont. Soon 😛

superb part. loved it. Kabir-Maithali's response to sumeet was awesome and best was Geet's confession.

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome, Superb Update 👏
Loved that Swimming Pool wala scene 😉
Finally confession is here atleast from Her side 😳
Lovely Cont. Soon 😛

He already confessed
Tum hi ho wala part tha

Thanks Sheen 😃

There is a point of time when you have tears running out of your eyes as you read something and you cannot distinguish when they turned from the sad tears to happy ones. Right at this moment, as I'm typing this, I am standing on that point. I don't know if it's just me being way too emotional or not but your writing today did the trick. I went through so much while reading this chapter but by the end of it, I can only say I'm happy. And once again, to me, you proved to be an excellent writer who can knit the reader into the words so much that they live in the story! Hats off! 👏

When Kabir's father appeared in the earlier chapter, I had only thought that there was going to be some hard time for Kabir and Maithili. But with the way it went, I am as happy as can be. I was proud of Kabir when he refused to marry Megha for any dowry and I was elated when Maithili actually stood up for herself and her children and let woman power lead! [There's a little typo in the dialogue she speaks to Sumeet, about her children.]

Saying something about the swimming pool scene would not equate to how amazing it was! It gives me an unexplainable pleasure that the silence between them which I originally fell for is still there, and more potent now. The scene was beautifully written. I cannot describe it in appropriate words! Psst, I loved it when he thought he was proud of his body! 😳

The girls' day out was fun to read. Naintara and Megha have already started to share a bond. I wonder how Megha is going to react when she finds out the truth.

And then came the part which had me in tears - literally. The last time I cried with tears down my face while reading TL was chapter 31, the one which has the twins' bonding with each other. Today, it was for a very different kind of bond that your writing brought tears to my eyes. The chaos, the feel, the confusion, the anxiety, it all felt so real, like I was experiencing it. I cried when they took Maan to operate and Geet couldn't go inside, I cried when Geet begged for Maan's life, I cried when Maan spoke to his Daadi and I cried when Geet hugged him.

I especially loved the confession of Geet. The simplicity with which she spoke was what really made her love shine through with sincerity. No roses, no promises, no fancy arrangements from Maan could have pulled out the power her words held then and there!

Thanks Avi, for writing this story! 🤗

Sumeet came with his greedy intentions😡 but first Kabir , then Maan and finally Maithili put him in his place.👏 Geet and Maan loosing themselves in the desire.☺️ Lazy Geet 🥱missed Maan but could feel that he had been near.☺️ Trio having a fun evening😃 and Geet could recover Megha's stolen chain.👏 Oh god what a scare 😲😭🤢but Maan is fine after the accident 😊