THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 23

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Hi ji, I just didn't want to disappear but it happened again ! I'm sorry for that ji ... I wanted to be here esp today since I remember u saying that today maybe the last of the locket ! But I hope its not just yet and it carries for a few more of its beautiful chapters ... I haven't read the update yet coz I wanted to 'speak' to u through here first ! Only then would I feel light enough to read on and enjoy the bliss I feel from ur writing ...
The previous two chapters have been eye candy ! The glory of Maaneet basking in love and affection is a sight worth all the hurdles they have gone through ...and along with them the threads that are tying together between each person and couple gives the contentment of wholeness in their family !

Thank you for all the chapters and updates ...will go and read the latest of them all ...
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Beautiful update

beautiful part...i have started reading frm start but have been busy going out so was not able 2 continue reading but this part was awesome, d feelings were well portrayed!

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Originally posted by: mayyo

There is a point of time when you have tears running out of your eyes as you read something and you cannot distinguish when they turned from the sad tears to happy ones. Right at this moment, as I'm typing this, I am standing on that point. I don't know if it's just me being way too emotional or not but your writing today did the trick. I went through so much while reading this chapter but by the end of it, I can only say I'm happy. And once again, to me, you proved to be an excellent writer who can knit the reader into the words so much that they live in the story! Hats off! 👏

When Kabir's father appeared in the earlier chapter, I had only thought that there was going to be some hard time for Kabir and Maithili. But with the way it went, I am as happy as can be. I was proud of Kabir when he refused to marry Megha for any dowry and I was elated when Maithili actually stood up for herself and her children and let woman power lead! [There's a little typo in the dialogue she speaks to Sumeet, about her children.]

Saying something about the swimming pool scene would not equate to how amazing it was! It gives me an unexplainable pleasure that the silence between them which I originally fell for is still there, and more potent now. The scene was beautifully written. I cannot describe it in appropriate words! Psst, I loved it when he thought he was proud of his body! 😳

The girls' day out was fun to read. Naintara and Megha have already started to share a bond. I wonder how Megha is going to react when she finds out the truth.

And then came the part which had me in tears - literally. The last time I cried with tears down my face while reading TL was chapter 31, the one which has the twins' bonding with each other. Today, it was for a very different kind of bond that your writing brought tears to my eyes. The chaos, the feel, the confusion, the anxiety, it all felt so real, like I was experiencing it. I cried when they took Maan to operate and Geet couldn't go inside, I cried when Geet begged for Maan's life, I cried when Maan spoke to his Daadi and I cried when Geet hugged him.

I especially loved the confession of Geet. The simplicity with which she spoke was what really made her love shine through with sincerity. No roses, no promises, no fancy arrangements from Maan could have pulled out the power her words held then and there!

Thanks Avi, for writing this story! 🤗

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

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Hi ji, I just didn't want to disappear but it happened again ! I'm sorry for that ji ... I wanted to be here esp today since I remember u saying that today maybe the last of the locket ! But I hope its not just yet and it carries for a few more of its beautiful chapters ... I haven't read the update yet coz I wanted to 'speak' to u through here first ! Only then would I feel light enough to read on and enjoy the bliss I feel from ur writing ...
The previous two chapters have been eye candy ! The glory of Maaneet basking in love and affection is a sight worth all the hurdles they have gone through ...and along with them the threads that are tying together between each person and couple gives the contentment of wholeness in their family !

Thank you for all the chapters and updates ...will go and read the latest of them all ...
😃

hi avi

comment baadmein abhi mobile se hoon

pain kaisi hai ab

tune chotu kaha par tune itna bada updatevdiya thanku dear

such a lovely rmotional update
just fida huwa by reading geets confession

Originally posted by: priya111111

hi avi

comment baadmein abhi mobile se hoon

pain kaisi hai ab

tune chotu kaha par tune itna bada updatevdiya thanku dear

such a lovely rmotional update
just fida huwa by reading geets confession

Originally posted by: dqno1

pain is much better dear. Thanks Priya.

Ek baar likhna shuru karti hu phir khatam hone ka naam nahi ..😆

simply wonderful n amazing part