THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 109

Part 68 -

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Superby written! Loved the penthouse scenes -balcony, swing. And dream turned real, was cute!

Maan again in planning mode to manofy her. Loved the checklist, but Nakul's presence killed everything. Killer black dress goes unnoticed (or so he thinks!). What is he going to do next?

Originally posted by: bbindu

lovely update!! romantic evening, not to mention night.

Maan is so right about saying that she must dream about these things. very funny, but Geet won't listen. Maan tried to woo her by looking handsome, but she did not even looked at him. now he is angry and Geet is thinking that she over reacted. Let's see what happens next. will be waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 68 - beautiful part...once again maan was denied by geet...ye geet bhi na jhalli jhalli hi rahegi...but she accepted that she liked what maan did with her and now craving for more & more...
loved maan planning to leave her craving so that she could not resist him...and could not ignore him anymore...
"Mission Doe Seduction shuru!
Let's see how long you can remain a miss goody goody Miss Handa when Maan Khurana unleashes his Maan-ness on you"...wow...loved he checked himself and made ready for the attack on bambi geet...
omg...what nakul is thinking about maan...lol
cont soon

Like button is not working now...i will like it later

Originally posted by: Ameeraalikhan

sorry for late commenting was on vacation

lovely update Avi

maan proposal tajmahal full moon

I kneel beside him and he smiles at my naivete, my innocence.jhalli geet

finally geet ko maan nai propose kardiya srk say bht acha

Originally posted by: ritzy09

PART 67

Awesome update Avi...loved it completely...

what a proposal...

i loved Daadima's nautanki and help in first part but needless to say second part took my breath away...

Taj, moonlight, eternal love and a proposal - it was magical...beautiful

It is very hard to explain how one feels after reading such a romantic part...it just overwhelmed me...

For a person who writes many such beautiful scenes, to say that to me..🤗

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Part 68 -

what a hot update...it was sizzling...

Ok it started with romance but that half sleepy and half awake kiss and romance was really something...the whole situation was so sexy and at the same time so funny...

Geet is loosing herself but her shyness and innocence are stipong her...juts the way Tara says...she is a bambi...

Maan trying to woo her...that was hilarious and then falling flat...oh i just love their cat and mouse updates especially when one is dooing wooing and other is being innocent about it...I hope Geet gets her lessons soon and Maan understands the pace of giving them...lol

eagerly waiitng now for password to part 69...btw - missing Tara and Dev yaar...

tat wz an amazing update... d songs used were mindblowin i even loved deir english translations... lovely update... bt horrible,horrible precap... wt 2 do jz cant hv enuf of maneet !!!! still waitin fa d nxt 1 ;-)

Originally posted by: Deelight

tat wz an amazing update... d songs used were mindblowin i even loved deir english translations... lovely update... bt horrible,horrible precap... wt 2 do jz cant hv enuf of maneet !!!! still waitin fa d nxt 1 ;-)

I'm here ... See...i'm such a good girl

Maan *thud*
Actually *thud* yaaarr

Maan changed sooo much ...that shy, cute college boy is gone

Now we have this hot, passionate, romantic Maan
Hayyyee

Saaddi Geet is so lucky


Finally, good things are happening
All are happy

Dev -Tara are together

I love ur dadi maa so much
Yeh toh CID walon ko bhi peeche chod de
Super cool dadi ...she's adorable

Amazing work dear ... Keep writing
Lol