DARK TEMPTATION #2:Mod note pg52 - Page 15

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Dammit these two what to do with them

Now I wanna know what sadness she is hiding inside her

What is eating her so much

Why does she drink

Where is her family how come she is alone

Maan yoiu never tried to find the reason for her saying no

Only focused on her no

Which your ego didn't like

Just once wish he had asked her the reason for rejecting the blue print

But no he didn't

But she did tell him why

Hmmm don't know why but something tells me there is lot of grief in her heart that she is hiding

Andshe has no one to tell it to either

Maan this lust for geet I doubt that's it

There is more to it

But you aren't digging deeper into it

Well not long before he does that

Hope it won't be too late by then

Originally posted by: sdlife19

I dont understand geet why is so rude..

is there any past tat troubles her so much tat she wants to drown herself in the poison she takes

Originally posted by: priya_21

good goinggg😃

Originally posted by: amrinderdhami

superb update..so maaneet knw eachother from there childhood maan trying to understand wht he is feeling for geet...opss maan angry n geet a lil emotional,maan hurting geet with words...n again fighting..lovely update continue soon baby

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

That ws superb. Maan want geet it may be out of lust but, very soon he may want her for himself by heart, soul.

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional update.. te way my maan left his geet and geet waking with her darkeness was lovely emotional..te way my maan ki thoughts was occupied with his geet and te way he wants to get rid of it so engrossing himself in his work was lovely emotional.. te way dev and geet ki conversation my maan ki gussa and te way dev trying to coveicing my maan and te way he barging to geet's house and te way both arguing and geet pointing te mistake but my buddhu maan's ego not allowing was lovely..te way my maan cuming to see his geet and te way both fighting and my maan ki harsh words which hurt his geet and her tears which pricks my maan and te way he hate himself for drowning in her was lovely emotional..te way my maan locking his geet in her room and swimming and te way geet irritated was lovely emotional.. so geet is alone and she have some dark past with painful memories witll my maan cums to know..i love te update

Originally posted by: drashtiMyAnGeL

i had been reading it for half hour.bcoz i read every line 2/3 times.so much passion.still can fill maaneet passion.hats off to u.especially maan.can't wait for next.😉

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Interesting part.Maan with his conflicting emotions is driven towards Geet time & again and Geet with her share of miseries trying to move Maan aways but failing.Maan by being harsh with Geet is just trying to fool himself,though he is saying that he only cares for d baby but its not true otherwise he wouldnt have given Geet two day's time.Her tears have also started effecting him.Story in progress 😉

Curious about Geet's past.

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update
finally geet told why she is not approving design

poor maan can't figure out why he is sooo attracted to her
and on top she is same😕

wonder what will happen next
will maan go back to her room 😆😆

Originally posted by: jayshu17

Awesome update👏Maan get attraction towards Geet😛Geet get little emotion for his harsh words💔Why geet was behaving like this??😕waiting for the next update